Resisting the irresistible - (series conclusion from my end)

SPEAKING FROM THE HEART ....

@ everyone - when I started the tech of FIB poetry... the first post of mine came as "irresistible"... since the format restricted me to write something so short that it could have been continued easily so I posted it as "irresistible - 1"
its very heart breaking to see the series coming to an abrupt end! and that too at such a strage edge...
:(
since past 12 - 13 days whenso ever I had joined this WL family! I am trying to work hard regularly for the betterment of this forum! and this series was just another effort from my end...

just read kajal's recommendation in the shout box to abandon this series for a while!
well.. have written my usual ( not so popular though... ) THURSDAY THEFTS again! and will now try to come up with 55 FICTION Soon! and would try to do something popular again... an unexplored journey again but not at all like this!

:( :( :(

@ tan - sir! totally agree with u on the hardwork put up in continues search of suitable pics for the write up! but I think there had been some due and suitable limitations with the ADMIN team for sake of which they took this decision! my apologies with u since I started this series! :(
nostalgic posting this...

@ kajal - hey dear! m with u in whatever decision u people took! I assure u that neither my pics nor the posts were trying to incite the pics that emerged and the problem that came up cos of this!

@ EVERYONE AGAIN - (concluding this for now... or abandoning it from my end atleast...
the sum up words are....

1 . Irresistible 20 - was brillinat! there sould'nt have been a better work of the label "passion" which was attached with each of my post on this series! (applause!) ... TAN well can come up with some great work of love fiction in future even in the for of novel! Immense potential bestowed of pure love!

2.Irresistible 10 - my personal best effort came up!! :) on this one .... (smiles for myself)

3. Irresistible 11a) - a faboulous reply! kajal (applauses!) sense and dilemma at its best!

these two posts... Will stay a landmark in my memories!

4. Irresistible 4 - a masterpiece by brilliant prats! bows!\

sadness that came today would never end... It has kind of brought an immense fear in me
that would always come... by... whenever I'll think of posting something again! :(

tc god bless all!
Yours...
PULKIT

Irresistible -25

you,
me,
alone,
in heaven,
immersed in pleasure,
chasing you at a snappy pace,
merrily and happily we remember this night

Irresistible - 24 (Pleasure !)

Pain
turning
into pleasure,
Lying naked
Next to your body,
I melt into nothingness with your tender touch
In a endless night

taking my soul

to heavenly

pleasure !

Irresistible -23 ( Surrender)

Mine
You breathed

On the nape of my neck

Mine...

You traced

My sinewy curves

Mine...

Your eyes

Blazed through my soul

Mine...

Your tongue

Marked everywhere

Mine..

You say

And I mutely comply

Yours

My love

To do what you dare

P.S: I have not followed any particular style... but the stanzas are either 1-3-4/1-3-5

Irresistible - 22 (Us)

Us...

You and me

entwined

Enmeshed presence

Us. A single entity. Complete.

Tried something different here :)

Iressistible 21

Engulfed in your arms,

I lived a thousand lives

Scaled the mountains of pure bliss.

And gently in the night,

As we experienced thousand deaths

In that enchanted kiss,

My heart thudded in delight

I am his..

I am his...

This sure is irresistible! I am intrigued.. will be back with more :D :D


P.S: Is it required to be a fib ?

Irresistible - 20

Irresistible - 18

(Continued from Prats)

Drops

of

this rare

elixir

called you on my lips

A thousand deaths in sheer pleasure

A lifetime lived; you melted at the tip of my lips.

Quenching the thirst of my heartbeats, drenching my soul; the drops of elixir that is you

(P.S. : For the first time ever, I experiment with poetry. Feel free to rip it apart. All yours. I don't know if this one is good enough coz it's my first attempt at poetry. Do let me know and I will go back to the funny brand of "invented in mallu land" brand of poems...he he... *Prats...I finally take note...nod my head...and look on with admiration* )

Thanks Kaju for explaining me the basics and in helping me out. And a million hugs for making me take this up. The humourous devil will strike back :-)

## I blaaaaaag at: yeM Bee yAe

Irresistible - 17

continued from Pulkit's post


My
skin
wet from
your kisses;
warm from your hot breath;
comes alive in your loving hands -
rejenuvated i smile with my eyes,heart responds to your caring touch


Image source


Did I do justic to your words Pulkit ?

Irresistible - 16

Drops
of
rain shower,
drench your skin..
falling from eyelids...
and neck,as if glitter drops from sparkle
I wish to wipe all off them from the passion of my tongue and lips

(PULKIT TIWARI)

( This is continued from Prats! Last Reply )

Irresisitible - 15

Continued from Kajal's post here

Outside it rained hard
the passions raged inside us
LOVE SHOWERS ON US
the passions raged inside us
Outside it rained hard

Irresistible-14 ( You & I -2)

In response to Kajal's you and I

I
can
still feel
the first kiss
I know you'l come back
I know that you feel me somehow.
as I know you can't fight with your tears so long.

Irresistible - 13 (Walk with me)

In response to Kajal's post and comments!!



O
Girl
Listen
Hold my hand
Think of us as one
And come; walk with me till the end.
Do not think too much
Right or wrong
Love me.
Come
Along.

Irresistible-11 (Never leave meh) !!

Ah,wherever I go I get the smell of your skin
it makes me insane,makes me numb
come back to me hon
love you till
the words
stop
rhyme.

A thought,on irresistible series. Sorry for the spoilsport.

Irresistible - 10 (THE DILEMMA)

Your
smell
Is such..
I wonder,
Delights of its taste!
Are we moving in the right direction?
What's a vice and What's a virtue, I wont be able to judge!
I am just a human soul at the peak of my sensual touch!
Wishing you to dissolve within me'
Knowing that its nothing
More for world,
Then just...
a
sin!

(POETIC CRIES - FOLLOW ME THERE - IF U LIKE MY WORK HERE )

My next post In The session
A continuation to...Prats

as The episode - 9a) which is the last post here is a reply to the first episode! so carrying it on from the 8th! episode...Have used the continuity of smell from Tan's rely @ episode 9 too! ;)
@ kajal - Its ur turn! carry this on.... need a reply from u on this one! from her side... ( I wrote from his side... we all should divide and specify sex'es here, to implement thought process and make the FIB more meaningful... whats say? :) )

Irresistible - 9a

A thought, after Pulkit's Poetry: Irresistible - 1

Here
Are
The Words
I told you
Whenever I held you
Close to my face, close to my heart
Right in to your heart
"I Love you"
It’s true –
Bare
Fair

Irresistible - 9 (Your Smell)

Your smell
Intoxicates
Lingers after you go
Stays with me when I am alone
Your stench

Trying to fall into the Irresistible Temptation!

Irresistible - 8

Continued from Kajal's Post




The kiss we share intoxicates,
more than wine;as you
hold me close;
heartbeat
gone
numb.



@ Pulkit ... We are waiting for your words !!

Irresistible - 6

Continued from Kajal's post here



Since your first touch,Our hearts beat
as one;Just the souls
await your
touch on
my
skin.


Image Source

Irresistable - 4

Continued from Pulkit's post here

I will break into the sheilds you held so close till now
Oh baby,please dont tell me to stop,
let me own you just
once;to steal
your soul
for
me.