April 23, 2009

Irresistible - 24 (Pleasure !)

Pain
turning
into pleasure,
Lying naked
Next to your body,
I melt into nothingness with your tender touch
In a endless night

taking my soul
to heavenly
pleasure !

21 comments:

  1. hehehe.. my first trial.. Dunno how far m successful..

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  2. @senilius
    Hmmm trial of poetry da.. Don go into wild imagination lol ! :p

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  3. @Winnie
    No da.. M stil a NuN ! lol.. :p
    i ll write it in a much better way
    after my frist time..hehehehe..

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  4. it isnt a fib dear

    re check with the syllable counter :)

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  5. ahem ahem ... (not similar coughing to kajal... but even a more louder one :D )
    I wonder what u people are typing in to search the pics...???
    :D :D
    :D :D
    what a remarkable post in irresistible series... someone pls reduce the temp though!
    (nights have turned flamy!)
    here @ WL with this series!

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  6. @Solitary
    yep dear i know it is supposed to b like 0,1,1,2,3,5,8 ... so on
    But i checked and followed few ppl's post.. Next time i ll go fa 1,1,2,3,5,8.. :)

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  7. @Pulkit
    Thanx fa d ahem ahem btw.. LoL !
    Wel i have struggled a lot find d pic.. typed every nasty word possible to get one satisfying pic.. :p
    Thanx a lot da.. :)

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  8. Hahaha... WL is turning naughty... And the pic well it's red hot and overshadowing the poem :P

    Great work nonetheless!

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  9. naughty...very very naughty :) one of the hottest in the series

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  10. @Hashan
    *Shy* hehehe.. thanx ya hashan :p

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  11. @Solitary
    Po da...

    Any way i thot i ll thank u fa remindin me of fibonacci series..
    Now give it BAK !!! N hehehehehe is ma signature ..

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