The Writers Lounge: Irresistible -23 ( Surrender)

April 23, 2009

Irresistible -23 ( Surrender)

Mine
You breathed

On the nape of my neck

Mine...

You traced

My sinewy curves

Mine...

Your eyes

Blazed through my soul

Mine...

Your tongue

Marked everywhere

Mine..

You say

And I mutely comply

Yours

My love

To do what you dare

P.S: I have not followed any particular style... but the stanzas are either 1-3-4/1-3-5

7 comments:

AnonymousThursday, April 23, 2009 10:28:00 AM
woho! Meena.. the temperatures are soaring high!!
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Winnie the poohiThursday, April 23, 2009 11:08:00 AM
he he he..
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AshritaThursday, April 23, 2009 11:23:00 AM
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 8-} Turning up the heat!
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Meena IyerThursday, April 23, 2009 11:42:00 AM
Satans darling.. thats the plan :D :D
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PULKITThursday, April 23, 2009 1:53:00 PM
speechless!
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AnonymousThursday, April 23, 2009 3:58:00 PM
This was perfect !! the last lines are so sweet infact :)
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hasHAN hazaRIKAThursday, April 23, 2009 4:18:00 PM
supper..barhiya hai :)
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