April 22, 2009

Irresistible - 13 (Walk with me)

In response to Kajal's post and comments!!



O
Girl
Listen
Hold my hand
Think of us as one
And come; walk with me till the end.
Do not think too much
Right or wrong
Love me.
Come
Along.

17 comments:

  1. this one will take the inhibitions away.. Good one Tan..:)

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  2. waah waah tan...i love ur writes...just wanted to say...i love you too :-) :-) :P

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  3. Thanks Sandeep!!!
    Thanks for all the love ... At times, when I cry, I look upto the Lounge for some peace and some shoulder... then, when I get the love you have given me - I stand up again!!!

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  4. Thanks Kajal ... keep reading... I'll write more tonight!!

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  5. hahaha... Sandeep saar :p aap kabhi nahi sudhrenge :))


    Good one Tan .. Lovely :))

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  6. @ Sandeep;He is just so irresistible.. hain na.. our Tan.. you love him too.. why not..

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  7. Hehehe Hashan... I'm happy that Sandeep sudharta nahi hai... hehehe...
    I'm on a wrting spree tonight ... check out the others too... :))

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  8. Tan,Its beautiful this one too.. and yes i loved reading it..

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  9. who can resisit after this TAN ?? gr8 to see all these posts ..

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  10. reduction of heat!
    and raised beauty!
    :)
    love seems a pure in this one!
    ;)
    beautiful! loved it

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  11. Aparna, you said it right!! Hahaha... A Fan!! any which ways, I'm happy that somebody likes my writing :)

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  12. Pratibha... even if the Series was for "Irresistible" things, I'm sure many of know how to ressist ... hehehehe... nothing (not even this poem) can make anyone NOT to resist!!

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  13. Thanks Pulkit...
    mera kavita padke tum Pulkit ho gaye to main bhai Prafullit ho gaya... thanks again :)

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