April 21, 2009

Irresistible - 10 (THE DILEMMA)

Your
smell
Is such..
I wonder,
Delights of its taste!
Are we moving in the right direction?
What's a vice and What's a virtue, I wont be able to judge!
I am just a human soul at the peak of my sensual touch!
Wishing you to dissolve within me'
Knowing that its nothing
More for world,
Then just...
a
sin!




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A continuation to...Prats

as The episode - 9a) which is the last post here is a reply to the first episode! so carrying it on from the 8th! episode...Have used the continuity of smell from Tan's rely @ episode 9 too! ;)
@ kajal - Its ur turn! carry this on.... need a reply from u on this one! from her side... ( I wrote from his side... we all should divide and specify sex'es here, to implement thought process and make the FIB more meaningful... whats say? :) )
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13 comments:

  1. this is so tempting.. my hands are itching to attempt it further.. but got exam tomorrow..:( but you never know i might end up writing something now.. nahi to kal pakka pakka.. :P

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  2. @ kajal - padh lo abhi!
    kal likhna !! samjheeeeee!
    :)

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  3. @ kajal -and yeah !! went to a friends home today, she is a kind of elder sis of mine... read your hindi blog "mera astitva" there itself with her, she too is a hindi writer for a leading litrary club here and loved your work!
    pat on back! from her side....

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  4. @Pulkit: thank you to your Sis.. for liking my work.. :) I am honoured.. :)

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  5. oh god....this is going great

    nice one pulkit!

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  6. @ kajal - smiles!

    @ aparna - thanks dear! :) for the appreciation!

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  7. Passionatest :))))

    another brilliant on Pulkit :)

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  8. What's a vice and What's a virtue, I wont be able to judge!
    I am just a human soul at the peak of my sensual touch!


    straight and true !! i like this !!

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  9. @ hashan - thanks sir! :) m honoured!

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  10. @ prats - :) thanks for the noticed appreciation!

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