hey pratsie! m glad u picked it up from 11a) I was about to pen down a reply to that one myself... but would now carry it on from this one... :) I will return back in the night for that as loads of studies and a weekly post on my personal blog too is pending! .... hope my shot would wait for me... :) (smiles! ) and as written previously too... I would either write from his end! or from third person! but not her.... (winks! - its exclusively for both of u from my end )
Rain drops on window panes Surging passion in our veins All hail the rain! All hail the rain!Passion surging in our veins Raindrops.. on the window panes :D
i liked the symbolism here
ReplyDeleteoutside the raining showers
inside the raging passion
beautiful!
this was one thought i always find so beautiful for its contrast !! thanks for liking it too Aparna :)
ReplyDeletehey pratsie!
ReplyDeletem glad u picked it up from 11a)
I was about to pen down a reply to that one myself...
but would now carry it on from this one...
:)
I will return back in the night for that
as loads of studies and a weekly post on my personal blog too is pending!
....
hope my shot would wait for me...
:)
(smiles! )
and as written previously too...
I would either write from his end!
or from third person!
but not her.... (winks! - its exclusively for both of u from my end )
and u brought rain...
ReplyDeleteromance would ignite more...
I promise...
to not finish it
till either moonlight or sunshine returns!
;) [dimple smiles! ]
yeah its still raining..and lazy me only sleeping,missed the office saying some bullshit to my TL :P..
ReplyDeleteLovely Prats :)..feeling fresh
That's a cosy situation to be in.
ReplyDeleteHi Pretty You! Nicely, thanks for taking the NaisaiKu Challenge?
ReplyDeleteThat was some rainy interaction between the outside and the inside... Nice!
ReplyDeleteWell, Naisaiku has 7 lines with syllable count: 5-7-5-5-5-7-5. This is what I learnt... Am I not Kurrekt?
it is wow!! :D lovely...passions raged inside us.. too good pratsie!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful thoughts
ReplyDeleteAh I love this :D :D
ReplyDeleteRain drops on window panes
Surging passion in our veins
All hail the rain! All hail the rain!Passion surging in our veins
Raindrops.. on the window panes :D
thanks Pulkit for the ever kind words !!
ReplyDelete@Hashan : if u write poem all night, u are definitely gonna miss office :P
now write on !!
Thanks Annthony, SweeTalkinGuy for the read :)
ReplyDeletethanks Zoya :D
prefect naisaiku Meena !!! you are pure genius !!
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