In response to Kajal's you and I
I
can
still feel
the first kiss
I know you'l come back
I know that you feel me somehow.
as I know you can't fight with your tears so long.
can
still feel
the first kiss
I know you'l come back
I know that you feel me somehow.
as I know you can't fight with your tears so long.
now thats a different take ... but this posm in itself was good !! wish i was awake last night to be a part of this !! just perfect !!
ReplyDeleteme too wish the same!
ReplyDeletehey prats - where is this story going?
were u planning to move in this direction?
me ... hmm... not this one... but something else... (naughty giggles! )
glad that some pure creativity interviened ...
satisfied and happy By the fact that irresistible series brought a new patch to the louge!
:)
good post again!
Thanku Pratsie :)..yes it is adifferent take..sorry for heading to a different direction.
ReplyDeleteand yesh yesh.. wish you were there.missed you!
@ Pulkit
ReplyDeleteThanks bro you liked it. You are free to ignore this from irresistible series. Its a different take. You can take your direction ( *winks*)
Hi Hashan, simple and stunning, so much emotions. thanks
ReplyDeleteHashan .. stop being a good boy n get down to some more naught writing ;)
ReplyDeletehehehehe @Prats and Pulkit's comments..
ReplyDelete@Hashan: it is perrfffeecctttt!! :D
Thank you Kajal :))
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