April 23, 2009

Irresistible - 17

continued from Pulkit's post


My
skin
wet from
your kisses;
warm from your hot breath;
comes alive in your loving hands -
rejenuvated i smile with my eyes,heart responds to your caring touch


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11 comments:

  1. AnonymousThursday, April 23, 2009 1:35:00 AM

    wow!! perfect justice.. my hands are itching too to write a reply to pulkit's too.. :D.. likhu?

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  2. PULKITThursday, April 23, 2009 1:39:00 AM

    10 on 10!! thats the cleanest possible reply ( grins! ) u came out of the trap laid...
    :)
    he he he....
    hugs!
    hey kajal - ur shot/... likhoooooooooo!
    (shouts! ) waiting for it too...

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  3. mysterious galThursday, April 23, 2009 1:43:00 AM

    the environment out here is getting hotter :D
    Prats ur too good man ....not a better reply could have come abt :D

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  4. PULKITThursday, April 23, 2009 1:44:00 AM

    @ mysterious gal - total agreement!

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  5. hasHAN hazaRIKAThursday, April 23, 2009 3:57:00 AM

    My goodness :)) it was awesome..Hottest one in irresistible series :D and the perfect reply to Pulkit's.

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  6. AshritaThursday, April 23, 2009 11:31:00 AM

    Amazing, amazing! Wow :) It's gettin hot in here!

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  7. Winnie the poohiThursday, April 23, 2009 12:18:00 PM

    me likey! simple yet sensual :D

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  8. The Solitary WriterThursday, April 23, 2009 1:32:00 PM

    its good

    but last line...i still feel that its against fib count...

    guess

    fibonacci series
    is

    1 1 2 3 5 8 13

    last line i see more than 13 syllable

    correct me if im wrong!

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  9. AnonymousThursday, April 23, 2009 1:41:00 PM

    pratsie. loved ur words.

    but the first word is "rejuvenated" not "rejenuvated"

    and that word has five syllables. which puts ur count at 18 for last line. teeth counter took rejenuvated as 0 syllables becoz its NOT a word! :)

    do change it!

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  10. AnonymousThursday, April 23, 2009 4:16:00 PM

    Firstly i admit its not a fib .. i did not check properly ... wanted to edit it but lazy now !!

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  11. AnonymousThursday, April 23, 2009 4:17:00 PM

    and then .. THANKS !!
    i appreciate you people reading and encouraging my words as always !! :)

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