April 23, 2009

Iressistible 21

Engulfed in your arms,

I lived a thousand lives

Scaled the mountains of pure bliss.

And gently in the night,

As we experienced thousand deaths

In that enchanted kiss,

My heart thudded in delight

I am his..

I am his...



This sure is irresistible! I am intrigued.. will be back with more :D :D


P.S: Is it required to be a fib ?
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousThursday, April 23, 2009 10:31:00 AM

    it was required to be a fib i guess 99% of the contributions to the irresistible series is a fib and that's what sets it apart from all the series...

    but hey what you wrote was a magical piece.. but try and bring in a fib too.. :)

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  2. AshritaThursday, April 23, 2009 11:25:00 AM

    This was nice :) What a lovely after-feeling of this poem... Brought a silent smile :P

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  3. Meena IyerThursday, April 23, 2009 11:41:00 AM

    Ah I will be back with more i guess Kajal.. thank you :)

    Satan's darling.. smile away :)
    And thanks for commenting :)

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  4. PULKITThursday, April 23, 2009 1:49:00 PM

    hey meena , good job!
    :)
    and kajal's comment was very apt!
    this too was gr8! and me too waiting for a FIB from u now... :)

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