April 22, 2009

Irresistible-11 (Never leave meh) !!


Ah,wherever I go I get the smell of your skin
it makes me insane,makes me numb
come back to me hon
love you till
the words
stop
rhyme.


A thought,on irresistible series. Sorry for the spoilsport.

8 comments:

  1. :) this was lovely.. I have posted a reply for this one.. :D

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  2. nice thought and execution... but it lacked some flow .. try on dear....

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  3. wht spoilsport?

    it is a beauty....i liked it

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  4. no apologies within family bro!
    :)
    good one!
    I mentioned an invitation to u on the first episode itself :) check it!
    so ur most welcome!

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  5. @ thank you kajal bitiya..I read your reply. it was lovely

    @ Prats
    I realised it later :(... was thinking so much about syllables.

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  6. @ Aparna

    Thank you so much :))


    @ Pulkit

    Thank you bro.. I am honoured.

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  7. dnt b sad !! you did well in the next ones :)

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