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We regret the inconvenience caused. All the best to all writers. Let the storm begin!

September 30, 2009

Butterflies!!


Suddenly I get this feeling,
My mind draws a blank,
My hands are slightly shaking,
My heart begins to race.

I feel like I'm losing control,
I'm nervous inside and out,
I have an unexplainable feeling,
I wish I could figure this out.

These butterflies inside of me,
Keep fluttering all throughout,
I thought they were gone for good,
I didn't know they could come out???

Worded Expressions

It seems eons since when I wrote last
When I poured my blithesome heart out
Into those tiny little bubbles called words
Potently carrying an emotional bout

And I wonder how can a few symbols - a mere few
Express the magnitude of my solitude
The purity of love, the twinkle of a hope
Perseverance and its fortitude

Scribbled on a random scrap
Flaking away in the air of the fan
Emotions and all hues of it
My heart expressed by a mere pen?

As I marvel at the power of it all
As I once again scribble the word
Language and its mysteries recall
The pen is way mightier than the sword

September 29, 2009

..bachpan mera..


bachpan mera rooth gaya hai
beetein waqt main chutt gaya hai
baarish ka paani to aaj bhi hai
par kagaz ki kashti nahi
door tak faila akaash aaj bhi hai
par udane ko pank hi nahi
bachpan mera rooth gaya
beetein waqt main chutt gaya

WigWag

Why so?
I don’t know
Go away
Why you say?
Ah, you pest!
Go, let me rest!



It's a conversation between tired mummy and her inquisitive daughter. :)

September 28, 2009

What's Your Rashee: Movie Review




Directed By-
Ashutosh Gowariker

Produced By-
Ronnie Screwvala, Ashutosh Gowariker

Featuring-
Harman Bhaweja, Priyanka Chopra..


How many of you were waiting for this one from Gowariker? i know many! Sadly for all Gowariker fans, What's Your Rashee is absolutely disappointing. Based onMadhu Rye's novel Kimball Ravenswood, WYR's script is as flat as it can possibly get. 

What's Your Rashee's story revolves around Yogesh Patel(Harman Bhaweja) an MBA student studying in Chicago, who is forced to return to India after receiving a message about his father's deteriorating health. On reaching India is when the family of Yogesh let out the actual reason.Yogesh is then told about the share scam committed by his brother and the family's huge debt. He's also told about the solution offered by a astrologer according to whom, If Yogesh gets married on the 20th, huge wealth is to follow the family on the very day. He's given a mere 10
 days to decide a girl and get married. It does not take long for his family to convince Yogesh and he's then out looking for brides. After a lot of confusion about the brides shortlisted by his uncle,Yogesh comes up with a bizarre idea of meeting one girl from each of the 12 zodiac signs. And the plot leading upto Yogesh deciding his soul mate among the 12 is for you to watch it yourself. 


Gowariker seems to have failed miserably with WYR provided the quality of movies that he
made previously. The movie fails to take off and the plot of the movie does not really convince you at any level. The one and the only thing that is impressive with WYR is Priyanka Chopra's impeccable performance playing 12 different characters. She's absolutely mind blowing with each of the 12 characters and probably the only thing that makes you sit right through the exhausting 3 hours 15 minutes. Harman Bhaweja is good and tries his best to make an impact with his honest acting supported well by rest of the cast. The funnier parts that were supposed to be funny are not funny and it just frustrates you more. 

The music by Sohail Sen is ordinary and the 12 songs used for 12 the different characters are not impressive either. 

I will go with 4 BOP's out of 10 for Ashutosh Gowariker's What's Your Rashee.





Avoid this Flick!

Reviewed By-
Raghav Ramaiah


Orginally posted @TalkingPopcorns.com!

SOE (CUSAT) Launches Alumni Association :


The School Of Engineering (SOE) - Cochin University of Science And Technology (CUSAT) has launched its alumni association - SEAA.

The School of Engineering Alumni Association (SEAA), was started in April 2009 in SOE.The main purpose of the assosciation is to provide a platform through which the alumni of SOE, faculty, staff and students of SOE can interact with each other for mutual benefits.SEAA will facilitate and inspire alumni to contribute towards improvements in the status of SOE in academics, infrastructure and industrial interactions.

SEAA will render assistance to current students through grants, scholarships and help them in academics, placement or any other area that is felt as appropriate by the association.The assosciation shall also work towards better interactions between alumni and students by providing forums and creating opportunities for such interactions.

The start up activities are being done by Dr.David Peter.S, Principal, SOE and Dr.Binu Paul, Alumni Coordinator.

Activities so far :

Most of the students admitted in 2005 have registered in SEAA.

Soon a website will be launched for SEAA.Former students can take membership online, in SEAA once the site is up.

The Executive Committee will finalize and approve the Byelaw of SEAA.

For further details Please Contact : Dr.Binu Paul, Reader, Division of Electronics, SOE - 9947242601 (Mobile).



(Excerpts from CUSAT-SOE diary-2009)

Originally posted in :
THE SPARK

One Single Impression Prompt - Colors

Like the changing colors of seasons
We are making changes too
To appreciate all the colors of life
We are letting go of….
few things in our life too!

TV has been deemed broken
No fairy can fix it for you
My twin girls are exasperated
But they will learn soon

Colors that had faded from life
Are again being added
Some artwork together
Some reading of books together
Some family time
Are being added to the menu

Yard needs care
We need to go ride that cycle too
That lovely radio
Needs to be switched on
Yahoo ‘little kidz tunes’
Rocks on!

That closet needs to be organized
Summer clothes need to be put away
Lord Krishna must be wondering
Where his devotee went away
Need to start chanting again
When and why did I stop?
I need to give up waste
And color my life again.


Shraddha

September 27, 2009

Loser songs of the 90's

Anyone who knows me would tell you that songs especially Bollywood numbers play a huge part in my life. In fact every time I make a new friend, within the first two three meetings I ask them what songs do they listen to and more often than not, the future course of the friendship gets decided by that discussion. I can't interact with people who don't have an interest in music nor can I get along with the 'I love only firang songs coz they are supposed to be cool' crowd. I could spend days discussing old hindi film songs and my ideal vacation activity would be a campfire singing old songs.

But there is a category of songs that I am particularly fond of discussing. I call them the loser songs of the 90's (umm actually could include some 80's songs too). Now the 90's were the era when I had my first crushes and had all those growing up pangs and all. And the songs of that era particularly were about some sort of impossibly undying, pining away sort of love. As an infatuated teenager I used to really believe in 'Dil jigar nazar kya hai main to tere liye jaan bhi de du..' but now that I look back I cant help laughing at the songs and their loser in love kinda lyrics.

Many a stimulating discussion I have had about these songs and how the hits of that era now just remind you of the silliness of your own life then. I remember a discussion with Smiling Serpent which I am unlikely to forget anytime in my life because I have never laughed so much ever (much to his consternation, because unfortunately the joke was on him :-). This post has been inspired by insomniacal chats during night shifts with Phoenix in the last few days.

The 90's were a 'dramatic love' era. I remember Filmfare and Stardust publishing stories about fans who used to write fan mail in blood. There were people who had committed suicide after Divya Bharati died. So it was all about hyperbole. Naturally the songs of the era also followed this trend of being high on an aching, nauseating kind of unrealistic love which was supposed to true love. So you had Kumar Sanu crooning away 'Tu meri zindagi hai' (I do like this one still) as if he were a dying man looking for the oxygen of love (ooh even reminiscing about the era is making me use hyperbole). That is why I call them the 'loser' songs, all about aching love nothing about love's uplifting qualities. That reminds me of the ultimate loser song, ever heard Achha sila diya tune mere pyaar ka?

The songs of the era were the kind that the roadside tapori would sing in his mistaken view of love which actually would be some funny form of eve teasing. 'Premi pagal aawara, aashiq majnu deewana...' or 'Main hoon aashiq, aashiq aawara'. The songs of the era also seemed to propagate the myth that if you chase a girl hard enough (like a needy psychopathic stalker) she is bound to fall in love with you. 'Is tarah aashiqui ka asar chod jaunga, tere chehre pe apni nazar chod jaunga' scary man. Or 'First time dekha tumhein ham kho gaya second time mein love ho gaya yeh akkha India jaanta hai ham tumpe marta hai...' Perfect songs for the guy who is waiting at the corner of the road for his favourite girl to walk past.

Lots of metaphors and lots of promises of undying love. 'Tu shayar hai main teri shayari (I remember everyone of us girls in the school had tried to move their index fingers the way Madhuri does in that song). 'Saanson ki zarurat hai jaise' 'Tumhein apna banane ki kasam khaayi hai khaayi hai' 'Dil hai ki maanta nahin' 'Saanwali saloni teri jheel si aankhein' (cute still) 'Juliet ki tarah honthon pe hai surkhiyan dekh le khud ko tu nazar se meri jaaneja'.

Unrequited love, betrayal or some form of separation was a common theme. 'Chupana bhi nahin aata', 'Accha sila' mentioned above, 'Ae kaash kahin aisa hota ke do dil hote seene mein' 'Jaao tum chahe jahan yaad karoge wahaan ki ik ladka duniya mein hai jo de sakta hai tumpe jaan' 'Woh meri neend mera chain mujhe lauta do' 'Ab tere bin jee lenge ham zehar zindagi ka pee lenge ham'. How many lovers of that era must have gone through breakups listening to these depressing numbers.

There were also the quirky ones with weird lyrics. 'Tu tu tu tu tara...' 'Ole ole' 'Oye oye' 'Ruk ruk ruk' 'Sexy sexy' 'Choli ke peechey' 'Bambai se gayi puna' 'Jaipur se nikali gaadi dilli chali halle halle' 'Barana de' 'Shehar ki ladki' 'Madhuri Dixit mili raste mein' 'Meri marzi'. I could go on and on.

Each of these songs brings back some memory of some Antakshari won while travelling jam packed in a school rickshaw, some train journey listening to these songs on the walkman (do they exist still?), some wedding band favourites, some that I sang to my then crush in the privacy of my own bedroom believing every word to be coming truly from my heart, some poem I wrote taking off from the lyrics of some loser song, lots and lots of memories of growing up. I dearly loved these songs then, I laugh at my own adolescent image of love now. What was I thinking when I used to sing 'Teri ummeed tera intezar karte hain' or sometimes shyly to myself 'Raah mein unse mulakat ho gayi..'? Well I guess I was just behaving my age.

Some of these songs are gems and I still love them. But 'loserness' being the characteristic of the songs of that era, I cant but help call them all loser songs of the 90's. Anyone remembers any more of these songs, please add your list in the comments section :-) Lets remember the days when we were all bitten by the bug called infatuation :-)

..As I stood by his side..


Holding my breath so long
As I stood by his side
Separation walked out of the door,
Miles narrowed to a step.
Tears hide in the corners,
Smile flaunted in the centre.
Heart skipped so fast,
Time freeze to stop.
Hands shivered to walk,
Eyes muttered to talk.
Words started to fall,
Life danced to roll..!!!

Talking Dolls - The End of the Festival

Dolls, remind me of festival called Dusserah! Yeah! We've a custom of arranging "Dolls" (mostly made of mud) in odd number steps. 

Dusserah a.k.a Navratri is a festival celebrated for 9 days marking the victory of Lord Rama over the Rakshasa Mr. Ravaneshwara! Its the festival of Trinity Goddesses Durga, Lakshmi & Saraswathi! In Northern part of India it is celebrated in a very grand manner as "Durga Pooja". Now do you get the hang of it???

I am from southern part of India. (No, I don't want any geographical differences here :P. Just that I wanna tell you guys how we celeb here :) ) We have a custom of arranging dolls in the odd number steps. Dolls will be deities, or a theme, or a particular part from Mahabaratha or Ramayana or Shivapuranam et al. Believe me, it is one of the exciting festivals in my place. We prepare Sundal , we've Kutcheris (Concerts), people visiting to see the arrangement of dolls in our home, Kids dressed up like Lord Krishna, Gopikas also come home and make it a joy filled festival.

Now, since I am employed and am out of home for 15 hours, this year I didn't participate actively in the festival. Everything was arranged by my mom single handedly. I feel a bit bad for not in a position to help her :( I didn't even get time to click pics of dolls this time!

Everyday when am back home, when all are asleep, I sit for a while and keep looking at the dolls arranged. I feel like they have life. I feel like as if they are talking to each other, dancing, singing and mocking at me for

  • not being able to contribute time to decorate them 
  • not noticing the new arrivals 
  • not decorating flowers in front of the steps. 

Eerie silence, talking dolls shimmering in colorful light arrangements and this makes me feel the divinity spread across my home!

Now that the festival is over :( So, am inviting all of you in advance for next year's Navrathri to my place :) to see my talking dolls :)

P.S. I am very much interested in knowing a lot about other culture and also explaining to people about my culture, traditions and customs :) That made me to come here and write something about it!

September 26, 2009

Moonlight Picture Contest Official Announcement!

Another successful contest closes today at Writer’s Lounge. The Moonlight Picture contest was well received with 21 entries overall, 10 in prose and 11 in poetry. Today, we give you the much awaited results of this contest.

Before going on, participation in itself is very important. Without participation, there is no challenge at all. Thank you for making the contest a success!

Starting with the Reader’s Choice Award…

Many of you voted and the result of this award was very tight. In one category, there was a winner by just a single vote and the other category saw a tie for the win. We are pleased to announce Sandeep with 3 votes as the winner for prose while the accolades for poetry are shared by Shruti and Vinay with 2 votes each. They get these badges:

Before going on to the result, let me say something about the judges. Yes we had two of them because we got two entries in Hindi. As much joy as sadness, because the judge for Hindi chooses to stay behind curtains and not come out. We respect her decision. The judge for English was Amias, a prolific writer in both prose and poetry. She has written two books, Mind Locks and Liquid Plastic, and is the owner of the meme blog Acrostic Only as well. We thank both these judges for their time, and for helping us to decide the winners among so many wonderful works.

Let’s start with prose. We got ten impressive entries from the prose category and unfortunately we can have only one winner. We’ll get to who won it in a while. As in competition results, we start with the second runner up. The third place in prose goes to……….

Tan for “The Last Flood”

Judge’s Comment: This is a good story, but the sentence structure needs some work. The author allowed the photo to inspire, so the story does stand on its own. I loved the ending. The little girl was very protective of her grandmother. She didn’t lie to her, but she didn’t tell the truth either. Her answer to her grandmother can be categorized as a paradox. This story has lots of potentials. The story was true to the title.

Marks Awarded: 80/100

The first runner up… The second place in prose goes to………

Aarthi for “Glory In The Making”

Judge’s Comment: I like this story, and yes, it could use a little work too. But overall it is good. I like the title too. The story held its own without me looking at the photo, and the hope of little “Kirti” is in keeping with all children that have been abused by someone they trusted. I especially love the magical meeting of the little girl with the old woman, as I have had experiences like this before and it made sense to me. This was a very good read.

Marks Awarded: 95/100

The winner… The first place in prose goes to………

Any guesses???!!!

Yeah, you’re right!

Claiming his second award after Reader’s Choice, Sandeep wins!! “Kinginni – The Anklet”

Judge’s Comment: This was wonderful read. Need very little tweaking. Not only did I enjoy the story, it flowed, stayed true to the title, and stood along without the photo. Like I said, it needs a little work, but not much. Bravo to the author!

Marks Awarded: 100/100

Next, we go for the award for Hindi. We had 2 entries in Hindi, and the winner is Riya! “Kaun Hai Jo Mere Sapnon Mein Aata Hai”

She was awarded 75 marks by our judge.

Moving on, the final category of judging… writing poetry in English is no easy task. Still we had 9 poems entered in our contest. The judge went through every detail of the poems and decided the top three. The second runner up… The third place in poetry goes to

Shraddha for “Memories of a Romance”

Judge’s Comment: I get anger when a poem has so much damn potential and the poet doesn’t take the time to revisit it. Unnecessary words distracts from the poem. No, in the beginning it did not stand on it’s on, but the second stanza was ok. I wish this poet had used another word to replace “shimmering”, because the moon does not flicker. It does not twinkle, a star does that. The moon glows, it beams, but it does not shimmer.

Marks awarded: 65/100

The first runner up… The second place goes to

Freelancer for “When You Are Gone”

Judge’s Comment: I like this poem; it stands on its own without the photo, and it flows well. I like how the author formatted it, also the opening stanza caught my attention, especially with the rhyming. However, in the last stanza, on the first line, the word should have been “lights”, as the author is speaking in present tense.

Marks awarded: 95/100

And… The winner of English Poetry…

Princess Sonshu for “Take Me To You”

Judge’s Comment: This poem flows well and it stands on its own without the photo. I can feel the emotion here – that aching to be with the one you love --- the loneliness; hope.

Marks Awarded: 100/100

Thanks a lot family.It was only because of your overwhelming response and participation that this contest has become a big hit.Although it may not have reached the level of RDL and Inspiration contest,but this is a hit in its own way.Winner and Runner ups will get ebooks and they are required to write their email id in the comment section so that we can mail you the books.
Prose:
1.Winner gets Mario Puzio novels consisting of the "GodFather series","The Fourth K","Last Arena "etc.
2.1st Runner up gets "Alice in wonderland" and "The Monk who sold his Ferari" ebooks by Robin Sharma
3.2nd Runner up gets "Satanic Verses" by Salman Rushdie and "By the river Piedra I sat and wept" by Paulo Coelo

Poem:
1.Winner gets "Angels and Demons" by Dan Brown & "Twelve Red Herrings" by Jeffrey Archer.
2.1st Runner up gets "The Alchemist" by Paulo Coelo and "Pride & Prejudice" by Jeffrey Archer.
3.2nd Runner up gets "Kane & Abel" by Jeffrey Archer. :p

Readers choice winners & Hindi prose winner will get "Twilight" by Stephanie Meyers.

Thanks a lot Family!!We will be back with a new contest very soon and thank you to all who participated.Congragulations to the Winners and the Runner ups.
Love,
The Writers Lounge

FREE ME


My consciousness
seems trap
Into my own attire
from within the film of lies...

I desire to breath Light!

- PULKIT TIWARILink
(POETIC CRIES OF INTERPERSONAL EXPRESSIONS)

September 24, 2009

Happy Birthday






Hello people,


Its time to wish someone today... Someone who sweeps me off my feet with his style of writing... someone who is genuinely the sweetest person I have come across.


*Brings a cake*


*Sings*


*Happy Birthday to you* 


Dearest Abhrajit (aka h),


I am glad to have met you. You are truly an amazing guy! I first thought you to be a jester, but you are an amalgamation of so many colors...some bright, some sober. :)
All of us from The Writers Lounge wish you a very very happy birthday and may this birthday bring with it loads of happiness and luck in your life. :)


Your words
Your smile
The way we leave all our worries
And talk for a while


That smile
Still lingers on my face
I keep smiling
And you still can't put a finger on why?


Oh dear, its you
The one who spreads happiness
And I keep smiling thinking
That I just found a great friend


A friend
I can look up to
Every single moment
And that is you! :)


That is a small dedication from me to you Abhri.


Have fun! :D


God bless!!

Death of a mayfly

Contd from Mayfly or Butterfly...

It was Simon and Garfunkel again. It had been ages since the strains had scented the air. But the pain was the same. It was almost evening. The lights were going out and the mayfly was lying in a corner huffing. Its life of one day was coming to an end. It remembered how people had told it that it should not have come out. It should have stayed in the protected cocoon. But it knew it had wings and had wanted to try them out. They had said that it was not a butterfly. Why hadn’t it listened? It had wanted to atleast know what flying meant. So it flew the moment it came out of the cocoon. It flew all afternoon, glowing in the heat of the warm sun. It made love to the wind. It felt glorious. It felt that it was probably worth it despite all the pain. For a while it forgot that it had only one day. That was its mistake. Now it was lying there gulping in some last breaths of air.

She saw the dying mayfly. The last bit of the song was playing.

I am a rock

I am an island

For a rock feels no pain

And an island never cries.

She wondered why the mayfly couldn’t have been a rock or an island. Why did it have to be this little vulnerable thing with dreams of flying? The rock and the island are tied to their places, yes, but then they don’t know what it is to move so they will never miss it. But the poor mayfly, now lying there dying. Why have wings if you were to die fallen on the ground like that?

She had always been a zoology enthusiast and had an unusual liking to breeding insects to study them. In its short life the mayfly had surely laid an egg somewhere in the water tank. But looking at the dying mayfly, she wondered if she would ever let its child out of the cocoon. Maybe she should just kill it before it started to want to fly, yes she should just throw away all the water from the tank tomorrow. Maybe…. She didn’t know what to do. The song, which was on loop, started again.

A winter's night

In a deep and dark December

I am alone....

September 23, 2009

A call to the Lucifer..

A call to the Lucifer...

Death was approaching near,
I still had no fear...
I wanted to get in the molten state,
But to my bad luck,the Lucifer got late...

I wanted to end up my life,
With this intention i took a knife..
I tore my wrist and saw my blood,
And soon I got surrounded by a red flood...

I was about to die,
I laid down and looked at the sky...
I went near and hugged my fate,
But to my bad luck,the Lucifer got late...

I survived yet again,
To bear all the pain...
I licked the diamond in my ring,
And waited for the devils to sing...

This time The Lucifer arrived,
And told me why i always survived...
He said,"U know why i am always late?"
Coz your name is certainly not on my slate...

I have no right to take u to hell,
Cause' you still have many good deeds to smell...
You have a very powerful and heavy soul,
Cause' for you humanity was always a goal...

I realised I still had many years to spare,
Of love, affection and atmost care...
I looked up and showed him The Middle Finger,
He went away With his eyes submerged in hunger..

Our world :) :) :)


Smiles make the world a happy place
Place where everyone likes each other
Other people who are bad will be kicked out
Out of our special home
Home where everyone lives all together
Together always.

Haiku :)
We will all be kind
Very caring citizens
Of our special home

Sorry I haven't posted anything lately! I write at roshwrites

September 22, 2009

WHATS LEFT OF ME..!



I stand alone on this bridge,
Waiting for this lightning to strike.
To find you walking with someone else,
To see you sharing your smiles with everybody else.

I wonder if you can hear me moan,
Writhing inside with this pain of letting you go.
Oh! Baby, Don’t you see.?
I am dying a little inside everyday.
I wonder whats left of me..

Our sweet whispers lay scattered on my pillow,
My memory slowly turning into a dark hollow.
With my soul tearing apart,
I close my eyes and open them back,
To discover my blue skies turned grey with your depart.

My mind turned into an eroding barren land,
My sanity extinguished with a gushing wind.
The wind just passes by,
And it tells me you seem to enjoy your every moment going around hand in hand.

I wish I could revert the wind,
back to you,
To let you know,
I am going through hell,
Thinking about you with somebody else.

I wish I could revert the wind,
And let you know I miss your sweet talks,
Our vision for that future I used to stock
Our stolen moments of joy.

I wish you could see...
Of whats left of me..!

Mercury...

“The chemistry between us was still there. We were meeting at college after fifteen years. Both of us now married with two adorable kids, could feel the mercury rising. Those days, mills and boon, long walks, hours long mobile chatting, canteen flirting, college garden lawn, hugs and kisses days..!!”




I still love her, my wife…



PS : A try at 55-Fiction using prompt from One-Word Prompt web page.

Problems & Solutions

Hey all :)

I am new to this "Writers Lounge". Feeling so so happy to be part of this lounge. I thank Artz for making me a member here! Hope I'll do justice to this beautiful lounge of writers across the world by writing something that make sense!

Well! the title doesn't mean that am going to give solutions to all your problems! The post is about the conversation which I had with very good friend of mine. One day I was so broken down that I was unable to concentrate on anything around me. My phone started ringing. I reluctantly picked the call. Usually, If am not able to concentrate I don't pick up calls or reply to any texts as I've a very bad habit of messing up things. But that day, I attended the call since it was from my close friend. He asked me what happened to me. I started rambling in the hope that he will console me. Rather he started a lecture on how I've to face the problems and didn't even console me. But the conversation still lingers in my mind :)

Here comes a part of the conversation.

Problems as such doesn't exist. It comes into picture when there is the slightest deviation that might occur from what we expect to what is happening in reality. Expectations is not simply what we expect. It is the collection of images we have in our mind about a particular situation, person, place or for that matter about ourself! Sometimes, I ramble in my blog and I also read people's ramblings of how things go haywire or how they have changed as the time fly! The ramblings are the result of deviation of our self-image. We might have formed an image about ourselves. When it changes, we start rambling as if we have the biggest problem ever! For example, we might have enjoyed a lot during our college days. When we start working we have to grow a bit and accept the changes that happen around us. But we ramble as if we don't have time to do things which we were actually doing earlier (I don't feel bad to accept that I've done and still doing such things :D)

Again there is nothing called "HATE". This again is similar to Problems. Hatred towards a thing or a person creeps in when the image that we have in mind gets distorted or not so similar to what is happening in reality! It sounds like GAP Analysis isn't it? Yeah! It IS GAP between what we expect of the person or the thing and what is actually happening in reality.

So, now what is the solution for all problems?? Simple.I won't say "Don't have expectations" since it is very difficult. Rather I would say stop forming images about situations, people or things around us! I'm trying to practice this. Keep the mind blank. When you wake up in the morning, get up with clean mind without any old thoughts carried forward. Feel fresh as daisy. No to hangovers! Hangover can be because of boozing but not because of old thoughts dumped somewhere deep in our mind. Empty the Recycle Bin (mind) everyday Now don't argue that you don't clean the recycle bin in your comp or laptop OK? and DON'T RECYCLE the thoughts for it is hazardous to self-image. So just TRASH it!

Have a nice day! Enjoy each and every moment :)

September 20, 2009

Wanted : Movie Review


Directed By-
Prabhudeva

Produced By-
Boney Kapoor

Featuring-
Salman Khan, Ayesha Takia, Mahesh Manjrekar..


If you were waiting for a good film from Salman Khan, your wait is certain to continue as Wanted turns out to be a below average watch. Directed by dance guru Prabhudeva, Wanted will fail to impress you on every level. Adapted from the original telugu flick Pokiri, Wanted is an out and out action film. The script of Wanted seems more like its made for the audience down south and implementing it with Salman Khan makes it all more interesting. Having proven his abilities with action flicks, Salman Khan looks to have gone that extra mile to give Wanted the classy touch.

Wanted's protagonist Radhe(Salman Khan) is a local thug who terminates people when offered the right price. He's seen shifting between two rival gangs to terminate one another who ever offered more money. Radhe takes no time eliminating people and is seen doing the same in every second scene and here's when he falls for the innocent-pretty girl Jhanvi(Ayesha Takia) who works in a call center. Not so impressed by his rough gangster looks, it takes a while before Jhanvi starts feeling for Radhe who helps her out from the hands of the corrupt crook inspector Talpade(Mahesh Manjrekar). On the other hand due to constant killings in both rival gangs, the top don Gani Bhai(Prakash Raj) is forced to visit mumbai to take over the underworld activities. Now is when the plot takes a unanticipated bizarre u-turn giving Wanted the much needed climax that you might end up liking. The abrupt unpredictable climax is for you to watch it yourself.

Wanted has hardly anything that you might want to look back at except for Salman Khan. The script is ordinary and the execution part makes it even more lousy. The dialogues are ineffective and fails to derive the energy necessary except for a few. Salman Khan has delivered a decent performance with some great action sequences which you are sure to enjoy. Not so impressive are the costumes which look awful in nicely shot backdrops especially in the songs- "Tose Pyar karte Hai" and "Dil Leke Darde Dil". The performances of Ayesha Takia and the rest of the crew is forgettable.

The music by Sajid-Wajid is again ordinary and is tolerable provided the violent theme of the movie. "Love me Love Me" being the most catchy of all.
Having seen the huge commercial success with the Tamil and Telugu versions, Wanted will have to literally run full shows to even compete with its counter parts.

I will go with 5 BOP's out of 10, for Prabhudeva's Wanted .




Go watch it if you are a Salman Khan Fan, and not really advisable for the rest.


Reviewed By,
Raghav Ramaiah


Originally posted @ TalkingPopcorns.com!


Face of psychosis

One Single Impression Prompt 82 - Fog


This fog of ignorance
Denies me to understand
Where is that thin line that divides
Spiritual awareness from psychotic tendencies?





Image by Zenilorac at flickr

Don’t get me wrong
I am a seeker
Don’t get me wrong
I am a believer

But too many cases I have heard
Where psychosis takes an ugly turn
There were no divine messages from TV
Nature was not telling anything at all
Did you connect dots that were irrelevant?
And set up yourself for a free fall?



Photo by Nyki_M

This ugly truth of Psychiatry
Baffles me
Disturbs me
I want to understand the subject
Understand it more deeply
I want to see that thin line
And understand
When it’s a disease?
Or
When someone is touched with angels?

I have myself felt the bliss
When in touch with nature
But I do not want
This silent thick fog of ignorance to engulf me
To consume me in ‘spiritual materialism’
I want to stay open
I want to stay alert
I want to increase my ‘spiritual quotient’
But I want to understand Psychiatry first.

Shraddha @ The Self Love Project

September 19, 2009

Six Word Saturday



Please vote for Moon Light Contest

As I participate for six word saturday!I thought why not use it to pitch for my vote at the contest.

My poem is Memories of a Romance!

Thank you!

Shraddha@The Self Love Project

Other fun blog posts i enjoyed in today's 'six word saturday' meme

Quintessentially Quilly

Magical Mystical Teacher

MelissaB

Drahdrah

Happy Birthday Sweetheart!!! :)


Heyyy Asbahhh...Happy Birthday sweetheart!! :) :) :) ....wishing you all the happiness and joy in life!! May all your dreams and wishes come true!! God bless you dear!!!

Wishing you here on behalf of everyone here....your complete family at lounge!!

Everyone in chorus - "Happy birthday to you...happy birthday to you...happy birthday dear Asbah....Happy b'day to you!!!"
*candles...cake....music....applause.....*
Sorry....no b'day poem or anything here... :P ....just random thoughts...i havent written anything since a long time....and specially not on lounge since a very long time...the last time i posted something here was when you held my hand and brought me back here when i was hiding away....when you wrote on sinister red and i wrote about mesmerising red....ohh...i miss those days when we shared poems, thoughts, completed each others works, when you made me write this or that....when we talked and talked and talked.....till our moms got up at 2 or 3 in the night and showed us the bed! :P .....when i wrote poems and you were the first one to read....when i read your works...and immediately said after almost all....that hey asbii, did you write this with me in mind?? how could you write my future beforehand?? :P

When we shared our thoughts, when we weaved dreams together....when the hopeless me came to you and always felt that care and comfort with you around....when many a times i cried talking to you about my deepest feelings...when many a times i smiled with the hope in your words....

And someday i started calling you Princess!! courtesy FB pics :P ... And i love that..princess! You are really very special to me dear...you know it all...i dont need to specially write a post for that...i have said that many times and i could have said all this through mail too...which i have done already.... but then i wanted it here too!! Its your blog..your baby....so how can i leave this space....this is where i met you for the first time...so glad i did!!! I still remember the first time we interacted....i commented on some post..it was that 'a kiss definitely means omething' version of lover which was altered by you guys and i commented there long time back...almost an year na....and there were three people there...you, twin, ste....and i joined the comment box where i was introduced to you!! Ahh...lucky me!! ;)

And ya...enough of your hiding haan!! Please come back na!! I miss you!! We all do!!!
And we all love you a lot Asbii....me, ste, twin, mona...aah...five fingers!! And 5 fingers se yaad aya Asbah...ste the duffer has removed himself from the 5 fingers blog!! mad pagal bevakuf ste!! Anyway..huh!

And as you know...the lil reserved me....one who opens up only with friends....so i am a miser in saying i love you, miss you, hugs etc etc to people coz i say it only when i mean....cant even say it just like that! So when i say i love you a lot yaar...you know how special it is!! hehe ;)

I know you had a lovely day!! Wishing you a lovely and awesome life dear....i'll pray that every moment of your life is full of love!! All your dreams will come true!!

Lotsss and lotsss of loveeee.......
Yours
Pri :)

OFFICIAL CLOSING - ML CONTEST!

The Writer's Lounge Moonlight Picture Contest is now officially closed. We have received the mail with the official entry from 19 of you, 20 posts totally. These are the ones considered for the contest.

Prose:
1. Glory In The Making - Aarthi
2. Where Angels Tread - Urvashi
3. Moonlit Sky - Anurag
4. Moonie Help Me Please - Roshwrites ( Roshni )
5. The Last Flood - Tan
6. Why Me - An Ordinary Gal ( Riya )
7. Color of my Life - The Solitary Writer ( Stephen )
8. Her Beautiful Life - Thoorika
9. Kinginni The Anklet - Sandeep Balan


Poetry:
1. Rani ka Chanda - Chirag
2. Koun Hai Jo Mere Sapno Mein Aata Hai - An Ordinary Gal ( Riya )
3. When You Are Gone - Freelancer ( Mridu )
4. I Wonder What You Are - For U..From Me ( Madhu )
5. Alone I Stand There - Yamini Meduri
6. A Wait Under The Moon - I, Me & Myself ( Shweta )
7. Towards Eternity - Shruti
8. Memories of a Romance -Shraddha/April@TheSelfLoveProject ( Shraddha )
9. Under The Weeping Moon - Purple Haze ( Hashan )
10. Take Me To You - Princess Sonshu ( Sonshu )
11. Heavenly Longing - Leo ( Vinay )


We thank you all for the participation, and look to such enthusiastic support for our next contest which will be coming up soon.

With this post, the readers choice award polling is thrown open to the members of the writers lounge. The members are requested to send their vote by mail to the admin id ( writers.in.lounge@gmail.com ), one choice for prose and one for poetry. mention the number and title of story specifically, so as to avoid confusion. Please do not vote for your own post, if you have participated. The voting will be open for 1 week time, and will close on 24th Sept 2009, thursday at 3:30pm IST. Members who have not participated can also vote for their favorite among these posts.


Results will be announced asap.

Regards,
WL Admin Team.

September 18, 2009

Unfinished drink

The wind was strong and he hurtled pass the sidewalks. He had to reach fast. His first and last sanctuary. Thank God it was near to his house. On the way he saw happy people, couples huddled in the cold, why don’t these guys get a drink he thought wistfully. His head was drowsy in thoughts. At the age of 27 he was quite successful. Made his bucks and saved his ass. Yes, he was smart in making money, and equally inept in the matters of the heart. Fear not, a mushy love story does not follow but a depiction of gross error of judgment.
The street lights flickered. A few stray dogs trotted ahead of him. The dimly lit bar came to view. It invited him with a foul demeanor. It was warm inside. The place always looked bigger from inside. He always sat at the corner directly facing the bartender. The bartender was gross. His scruffy face looked like an ex-convict. He had hair growing out of his nose. His lips were parched and black. His eyes almost lost in the sockets. A few strands of hair tucked safely behind the ears. And his trademark yellow Hawaii shirt. He always wore that on a Friday. An ugly man’s smile is sweeter than that of an Adonis’s.
“How was the week Sir?”- asked Ramu.
“Same as usual, how’s your daughter?”-Mr.
“She is better”- Ramu smiled.
He always started with whiskey. That helped his tongue get bitter. He tried the special prawns with it. This was heaven. The place had started to get sparser. Night proceeded without any fight. There were normally some fights. But he was always alone so he could be a innocent looker by.
The bar grew dimmer. He went into his thoughts. He played every scene frame by frame. The way it had happened that day was a movie playing before his eyes. He could at last be himself and enjoy the life of a freaking retard. That’s what he called himself lovingly.
Ramu sat beside him .
“Aapke chere pe kuch likha hai, kahaani bataayiye na”- Ramu pleaded.
Ramu loved his stories. He took a sip of his own Mc Dowell’s and looked across to the last hours of Chandna Bar.
“Ramu what do I do best”- Mr. asked
“You sell yourself well”- Ramu answered. This part of the story was common to all Friday nights. So Ramu knew the answers very well.
“Ok, so today we are selling a product which helps people choose appropriate places to build houses”- Mr.
“Ok, so land prices and locations Saheb?” –Ramu grinned.
“My Ramu, you should work with me”- Mr. grinned.
“Ok, so I was selling this to some real estate agency.”- Mr.
“So?”- Ramu.
“So nothing”- Mr. said.
“The story didn’t end sir”- Ramu revolted.
“You will see the rest”- Mr.
Ramu didn’t ask any more questions and went on to cleaning the tables.
It was difficult to gulp down the remaining whiskey. He was feeling nauseated. Then he opened his notebook and started writing.
“I have started taking notes too late. The bar is about to close. Today I couldn’t even tell Ramu a decent story. I think the time has come when I won’t get any more ideas. I won’t get any real ideas to write my story. The filth is consumed by the filth. The rich consumed by the poor and poor devoured by the rich. There’s no difference now between Ramu and me. There was no difference before too, but now it’s apparent. I give up everyone I have done my part. I have showed the treachery there is to this day prevalent in the major parts of the city. The frame that irks me most is why the real estate smiled in that defunct way when I signed in my product to him. He could not know where I get my ideas. How did he know that my product was dangerously infamous? Stop stop it stops just now. No more procrastination, no more fears. I do good business. I can’t care about heartbreaks.”
Loud banging noises echoed in the nearly dark bar. One bullet caught ramu in the chest, one took Mr. in the head. The only picture left for the morning newspaper was the unfinished drink, left unattended, left strong.
Famous writer dies of gunshot over family feud
Mr. Jayweer Biswas died of a single bullet injury to his head. He finally the case against his brothers of disputed property. His two greatest works.. TheLand of the Fathers and Brother’s share a Room, both loosely and tightly involving his life long fight for his paternal property in North Kolkata finally ends in what can be described as a tragic ending. His high profile in the literary world had always showered much animosity over his younger brothers. They could not win a case and this man earned millions writing about it. This shows his versatility and ingenuity. But finally someone ended it today. Ironically in his last book he mentioned about the end being futile as the beginning. Though this seems vague, it makes sense now. His last work the unfinished drink spoke about greed as a never ending peg of whiskey. And today the pictures on the front page of the daily show to us that legendary writer has punched a message to all warring families fighting over disputed lands. He is survived by no one, but the interesting fact is that his father wrote in his will that in the event of demise of my youngest son before any of his brothers my whole property will be donated to the Missionaries Of Charity Kolkata.

September 17, 2009

Enoying the kill

As a child I had never owned a toy gun or even one of those tanker trucks. The closest I must have come to so called boys’ toys was probably a car. I had my dolls, my mini kitchen sets, my building blocks and some gender neutral games like carroms and scrabble. But a few days ago, a friend suggested trying out some text based mafia games on Facebook. At first I laughed it off, what could I possibly get by shooting and robbing imaginary targets? But my friend insisted and I joined in thinking lets see whats the big deal about?

I belong to a generation where video games were considered a luxury in most cities in India and being the studious student I was, I was taught to look down upon these useless addictions J So when I started playing combat games on Facebook, I had no idea what fan following these games had. But man, was I hooked. Suddenly I completely understood why exactly were people all around me so excited to grow one new virtual crop, make virtual billions, ice some cold-blooded killer or earn the tag of a knife thrower.

I also discovered that out of my virtual mafia team members, majority were girls. Another friend told me about this growing trend that around 30% of the hardcore gaming market in India now comprised of women. So I thought why not check this out. When I set out to do the story I discovered that all over the world, online gaming companies were coming up with new websites specially targetting women. Most of these were casual online games (70% of the market for these hand-eye co-ordination and easy click games is women). But there was a growing number of combat and strategy games that were being added to these sites constantly. In the US, women in the age group of 30-40 were slowly capturing almost half of the total market for all sorts of hardcore (violence included) games.

The women gamers I met were a bigger surprise. One would expect that someone interested in such games would probably be a rebellious character, maybe a young college goer with a piercing or black coloured nail polish. But Dhiranjana Pais was a homemaker who looked like your typical bahu in full salwar kameez and a huge bindi. She was hooked to Halo, Hitman and Counter strike and had been initiated into gaming by her brother in childhood. So addicted is she to the game that she uses an old N-Gage phone just because it is designed better for gaming. Another woman I met was an office goer and for her lunch break was the time to play racing games and beat her colleagues at strategy.

But during all this time what I kept wondering was that a male player would get exciting assignments like rescuing a damsel in distress and then having her as a virtual girlfriend. A female player would have to pretend being straight because the game would only give her a girlfriend! But then I discovered that the women oriented sites had games like Rescue your boyfriend. But it’s a long way off to equality when it comes to game world female characters. Only once in a while do you have a Lara Croft, otherwise the combatants are generally taken for granted to be men. But if gaming companies are to be believed, this too is soon changing. Maybe soon in the future you could choose whether you want to be a male operative or a female one. Till then I shall just be sugar and spice but nowhere close to nice while I shoot my targets away.


P.S. You would find the same post at my official blog too, just clarified, lest anyone think this piece has been plagiarised. And you could check the story I did at
http://ibnlive.in.com/news/game-for-a-game-30-pc-hardcore-gamers-women/101572-11.html

WL ANNOUNCEMENT: ML CONTEST ENTRIES NOT RECEIVED!!

We have got more than 30 entries posted here at the Lounge from various members for the WL Moonlight Picture Contest, with some members posting more than one entry as well. We are happy to see the response to the contest. However, we have got the e-mail with the entry wished to be entered in the contest from only 12 of you. The official entries as of now are:

1. Glory in the Making by Aarthi
2. Where Angels Tread by Urvashi
3. Heavenly Longing by Leo
4. Towards Eternity by Shruthi
5. Moonlit Sky by Anurag
6. Take Me To You by Princess Sonshu
7. Moonie Help Me Please by Roshwrites
8. A Wait Under The Moon by Shweta
9. The Last Flood by Tan
10. Rani ka Chanda by Chirag
11. I Wonder What You Are by Madhu
12. Alone I Stand There by Yamini
13. Why Me by An Ordinary Gal
14. Koun Hai Jo Mere Sapno Mein Aata Hai by An Ordinary Gal
15. Color of my Life by The Solitary Writer
16. When You Are Gone by Freelancer
17. Her Beautiful Life by Thoorika
18. Kinginni The Anklet by Sandeep Balan
19. Under The Weeping Moon by Purple Haze

Please finalize your single entry, one for prose and one for poetry, (if u've written both) by 17th Sept 2009, Thursday 12:00 noon and send to the WL Admin ID (writers.in.lounge@gmail.com) . We will send to the judges soon and announce the winners.

Thanks,
WL Admin Team.

The tides are still high..




Pic Source : Hey that's me..!!


To the love of my life..

A n a N y a

There's magic around and the tides are high,
Our love is powerful;it's touching the sky..
There is a force in the waves from our heart,
Love is flowing from us right from the start..

It's been long and old since i found my princess;I found you,
But how do i tell you that the feelings are still fresh and new..
How do i tell you that you're still the one i love and will be forever,
Love from my heart;affection from my blood will go away never..

I still get a smile on my face when someone says your name,
I still want just you;I want no money no fame..
I still get shivers down my spine when you say you're mine,
It still twinkle up my eyes;it still makes my heart chime..

I wanna be your prince charming from the very first day,
That wish made me crazy;that wish made me say..
Say those eternal pure words which are meant only for thee,
I've so much love in my heart;I wish it was visible;I wish you could see..

Things may get worse,things may get bad,
Don't be upset for a moment,Don't be sad..
Don't think all those songs were a lie which i made for you and sang,
Because your prince charming hasn't died he'll be back with a bang..

You're my baby,you're my girl;you're the one i love the most,
The tides are still high,they are not on the coast..
Close your eyes and hold me steady and tight..
Let's fly over;Let your magical eyes be our light...

dnt lemme forget...





wassup WL...
this is my second post ova here... i really hope u ppl wud gimme som more tips to improve...
AviNasH...

September 16, 2009

Before breaking news

On our channel yesterday we paid a tribute to Doordarshan turning 50 years old. We had the most recognisable and the first news anchor of India Salma Sultana on the show. I don't know how many of you remember the lady with a severe face who always sported a flower behind one ear and read the news on DD. When Rajdeep Sardesai asked her that you were in an era where there was no breaking news, the lady wittily replied, "Hamare zamaane mein breaking news nahin, rukawat ke liye khed hai hota tha." That brought so many memories of watching movies where right at the time of the climax when the killer was going to be revealed or the villian was going to be shot, suddenly there would be a black out and after a few seconds it would state 'Rukawat ke liye khed hai.' Man I grew up with all of that.

I was born the year Indian TV saw its first cricket world cup broadcast and what fortune we won that cup. Now looking back I sometimes feel I am very old. Many people today dont know what a great achievement it was for a family to buy a TV and then to switch from black and white portables to 14 inch colour. Today we are in the hometheater age. Maybe it was this feeling of achievement that Onida TV exploited when it came up with the tagline 'Neighbours envy, owners pride.'

The thrill of waiting for Sunday mornings that started early with Rangoli, went on to mythologicals and then to the favourite cartoons and special children's shows. The Jetix generation would probably never know how excited we used to be by He-Man and Spiderman cartoons and how eagerly we would wait for weekends for the latest episodes. We also waited for the Sunday evening movies and the only show my friends and I were allowed to watch during our exams was Chitrahaar.

Serials were about families and the troubles of the aam aadmi and aam family. Clean fun, no extra marital relations, no vamps, no generation leaps, only realistic, normal people like you and me. Social messages on Nukkad and Rajni, emotional sagas on Buniyaad and Humlog, short story wonders on Malgudi days, Mitti ke rang and Potli Baba ki. Comedies did not mean mindless aping of regional accents or tomfoolery, but clean fun with situations and liberal use of puns. Idhar Udhar, Ye jo hai zindagi, Mr. Yogi, Flop show and Dekh bhai dekh come to mind, shows that can be watched even today with equal pleasure. If it was science you had turning point. DD had something for every genre. If it was thrillers and detective shows that you liked then you had the amazing Byomkesh Bakshi, Tehkikat and Reporter. If it was travel and culture you wanted then you had the unbeatable Surabhi. I remember getting the first rush of watching a romantic story when they telecast Kashish. You had regular quiz programmes. Afternoons were about educational and women oriented shows. India's first daily soap Shanti was quite a revolution in women oriented programming. And DD had some really cool year ender and summer vacation programming.

And your serials didn't have to have only Gujaratis, Punjabis or Bengalis as central characters. You had even Kashmiris play central characters in Gul gulshan gulfam. You had UPites in Neem ka ped and Talash. You had a Maharashtrian in Wagle ki Duniya. Malgudi days had essentially south Indian characters. Truly unity in diversity.

I remember seeing how news evolved from lines just being read out by an anchor to showing some pre edited visuals, to news magazines like World this week and Newstrack, discussion shows and then to the current style of news stories and live telecasts. DD had tied up with CNN to get the live telecast of the Gulf war and thats when for the first time they had started bulletins in the afternoons also. There are countless stories of how politicians used to sabotage news telecasts because DD was after all the government mouthpiece.

But somewhere along the way after Cable tv was allowed in India, the bureaucracy started dictating more and more terms to the government channel. Viewers moved on to fresher looking programming (though I must swear that even shows on Zee and Sony were much better then) and as the viewership declined, producers also stopped giving fresh shows to DD. DD bosses also being slaves of bureaucracy were not really bothered because their salaries were probably not based on the channel's TRP's. The channel declined fast after that and today hardly anyone watches it.

But give me a Byomkesh Bakshi, a Surabhi or a Malgudi days anyday over a screeching, dramatic woman trying to choose a husband or a foolish whacko trying to outsmart other people in some random house or jungle. Give me atleast one show that I would write about 20 years after it got over.

Silver Moon Light...


Sara closed her eyes tight, dived deep into the blanket, but still couldn’t sleep properly. Not more than five minutes, she popped her head out; took a deep breath. Got up and sat on the bed with her blanket draped tightly on her. She moved her hands aimlessly on the bed. There was no one other than her; empty.


A breeze brushed her. She looked out. The sky looked adorable with stars and the stunning moon. She felt the breeze carried some message. Somebody was trying to call her, tell her something. Spreading her hands on the bed she closed her eyes. For the last few years she had shared this room with someone special, never had slept alone over here except for the last two days. It was all fun to be on this bed at any point of time.


She heaved a deep sigh


Again the breeze came. She got up from the bed and headed towards the window. With her moist eyes she saw the full moon. She felt as if it wanted to say something to her. Did she see a smile coming from the moon? They always used to imagine moon with smiles. With a shade of sadness she remembered how they used to get imaginative talking about moon. They used to humanize the moon and were their next best friend. They enjoyed the peaceful pearl colored moon rays that were showered upon them.


She went upstairs, opened the door and reached the terrace. The trees surrounding her house were not in their best of moods. The intermittent breeze was trying its best to wake them up and make the leaves dance with it. It seems they are also not in a mood. A heavy sadness prevailed over the area. She came to the corner of the terrace and stared at the moon. Moments flew and the moon winked at her. Rather she felt so. She pinched herself to check reality. Another stare at the moon she felt the moon was calling her: trying to say something.


She ran downstairs, past her bedroom, living hall and the main door in a jiffy and rushed on to the rocky garden outside her compound. Reaching onto the top of that rocky garden she looked up to the sky. The moon was shining more brightly showering silver rays. Panting, she could feel the presence of someone. She held her hands high pointing the moon. A cool breeze came from nowhere. She embraced herself tight. This is the spot where they used to chat about life, love and children, the place where they used to sing songs together, fight with each other under the moonlight, the place where they sat together in union with the nature.


Emma, I miss you…You were more than a twin sister to me. Hope, your untimely death will not part us away. Come hug me…


She could feel; the hug. The breeze, moonlight and the night hugged her.

From somewhere, Emma hugged her.


Word Count : 499

My comeback

Hiya friends.....
Am posting after a very long time......
I've named this a comeback because I am back.....
I am back crazier than before...,..

"I wad cornered in a dark world,
Felt very lonely in this materialistic world,
Felt like I was swimming IN a sea of sorrow,
But you entered my life,
All turned topsy turvu,
Am immersed in the sea of happiness,
My joy knew no bound,
very elated I am,
my feet no longer feel touching the ground,
'Thank you',I wanna tell,
but don't wanna separate u from me with a thanku you note,
am re-entering the blogger world,
I missed the lounge a lot,
you made me realize it,
am glad that you are with me....
-My voice towards my conscience.....

MoM - August 2009


Dear Members,

We are proud to announce that Abhrajit aka h  and Freelancer are our Member of Month for August 2009. The Results are as follows.

#1. Abhrajit (3 Votes)
#2. Freelancer (3 Votes)
#3. Vidisha (2 Votes)


Congratulations to the winners. Winner will get the MoM badge soon.
The Following members are being considered for MoM- September 2009 based on their recent activities at the Lounge -

1. Vidisha
2. Rush_me
3. Shraddha/april@theselfloveproject
4. Amar
5. Yamini Meduri
6. Cilla
7. Yeshu
8. Princess Sonshu

The selection is purely on the basis of their activity at the lounge during last month.

The voting process will continue to be the same wherein the members are required to mail their option to 
writers.in.lounge@gmail.com

Please send in your doubts or queries to our mail id. Our Admins would clear your doubts, if any.

Remember we need to select the best.

Cheers,
The Writers Lounge Team.

MoM of Writers Lounge since October 2008.
October 2008 - Sandeep Balan
November 2008 – Priyanka
December 2008 – Ste
January 2009 - Prats and Leo
February 2009 – Aparna
March 2009 – Prats
April 2009 – Kajal
May 2009 - Hashan
June 2009 - Arun Kumar
July 2009 - Aarthi
Aug 2009 - Abhrajit and Freelancer
Have a great month ahead!

September 15, 2009

Letter

Prompt @ Carry on Tuesday

He had got the phone call already
He knew she was dead
She wanted to be a soldier
Fight for her country
So she did
But she was dead now
Two babies in his arms
And
That letter that she had written
.... for his birthday
It had come by post now....
That letter sat before
him, unopened,
propped against a coffee mug



Photo by Nukeit1 at Flickr

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Presenting the Truth Book…


 

My very first encounter with the Truth Book was when I first began living my real adult life. No that didn't come at 18. Contrary to the way the world has demarcated ages into different stages of life, a life stage rarely begins at a particular age. So I thought I was an adult when I turned 16. And then at 18 I was happy to have the official label. But it was only after I turned 23 that I really felt like an adult. That was when my life was screwed up.

So I can begin by telling you how my life was flowing smooth with everything being top notch in character and then how things began to get ugly till the point where everything was as twisted as it could get and I didn't even know where to begin unravelling. But that story would only bore you. Or worse, invite your comments. That is not the purpose of this write up. I wanted to introduce you to the Official Guide to Understanding the World, your Life, Yourself and Everything else in Between. Or in short the Truth Book. You probably have your own copy, but that hardly matters. Because each one's is quite unique in the sense that every individual copy is indeed individualized. And the second reason why it won't matter is because more than half of you aren't even aware that you have your own copy. Only when your life is so screwed up that nothing else makes sense, will you dig into your mind, heart, soul, memories, feelings and so on to discover a copy of your own. So since I've discovered my copy I thought of sharing it with you.


 

  1. When I first began living this adult life I thought I was a free bird. I believed that I no longer would be bound to my parents telling me what to do or commanding my actions. Of course that equation has changed. But if I thought I could do whatever I felt like according to my own free will, I was mistaken. And that was Truth No. 1 - YOU WILL ALMOST ALWAYS BE MISTAKEN.


     

  2. ALMOST EVERYBODY ELSE WILL THINK OF YOUR PROBLEM AS A NO-BRAINER, BELIEVE THEY HAVE A SOLUTION FOR IT, OFFER IT TO YOU AND THEN MAKE YOU FEEL FOOLISH FOR NOT HAVING THOUGHT OF THE SOLUTION AND INDEED FOR HAVING FORMULATED THE PROBLEM IN THE FIRST PLACE.

    Ahhh… how true that rings in my head! I only have to look at my grade sheet, and as if it isn't enough that I have scored lower than the lowliest of the lows and have to slog like an ass for the rest of my two terms if I wish to swerve clear of the mess I have already made once, that I encounter people, on a per day basis, who seem to know how to deal with my problem and better still who enlighten me, believing with immense (but surely good) faith that I haven't already thought about it before.

  3. GUILT AND REGRET WILL OCCUPY A MAJOR CHUNK OF YOUR FEELING SPACE

    So that is what is constant in my life these days.


     

    Why couldn't have I studied harder?

    I knew this was going to happen!

    How could I do this?

    Why didn't I devour every word of every page of every single book?

    I wish I could undo this and undo the time that went by

    I can't do this anymore!

    Damn the quiz!

    Damn the presentation!

    Damn the project!

    Damn the exam!


     

  4. THE GUY YOU HAVE A HUGE CRUSH ON WILL ALMOST INVARIABLY BE COMMITTED TO SOMEBODY OR WILL NOT WANT TO BE COMMITTED AT THIS POINT

    On the first part of the statement…

    The good ones are always taken!


     

    And on the second part…

    Really now! How can it be almost invariably? I think it's just me


     


     

    So much for my Truth Book Revelation for now. More follow ups to come in as and when life throws any light onto the shadowy text!


 


 


 

overheard conversations - trouble or therapy?

i once saw a movie 'henry poole is here' in which, initially, the little girl records people's conversations around her because of some childhood mental trauma when she stopped talking. i wonder how it feels to listen the conversations already done, again and again and again. it becomes a rhythm in a way. every syllable is a world in itself. every word is a universe. or, well, so it seems.

commuting by bus everyday, meeting unique samples of people on every trip, i can say, is the most rewarding of all social human experiences. because you see, bus is a public transport system and if you start thinking of their possible family backgrounds, by gauging their dressing and what things they are carrying, and then overhear what they are talking, obviously too loudly, then it blends into something even more profound!

two university students board the bus, one guy and a girl, madly in love. it shows, they say. the guy has one green covered book in his hand and a blue pen. the girl, in contrast, is heavily loaded with heavy books, a cup of coffee, a set of keys, her ipod, her cellphone, various shiny things dangling in and out and to and fro from her loud red bag. opposites attract, they say.

"f***, there's no seat. oh wait, there's one at the back, you go and sit there.", says the guy.

"i don't give a damn. you can go and sit.", snaps the girl.

"listen, you are carrying all these books and all, just go and sit there."

"what do you care? you are all the same!"

"now what is this?"

the girl ignores, looks straight ahead.

at the next stop, they both get off the bus.

moral of the story, you ask? figure it out yourself. once ashton kutcher, in a movie, "what happens in vegas", said, "men and women are not supposed to co- exist[!!!]" (i inserted the exclamation marks).

actually there is a moral of the story: as much hard it sounds when someone says to us to focus, in this world where so many things are going on all around you and even far away from you, it makes you wonder whether it is all worth it: whether it is all just trouble or therapy?

overhearing conversations have taught me a lot about life (sounds like a cliche) but have wasted more of my time too. next time, you have a similar experience, feel free to share what you learnt.

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hi to all the readers,

thanks for taking time to read my first post on "the writers' lounge".

just a few points-

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and i am one of those bloggers, who reply to the comments by visiting commenters' blogs not just by replying "@ so and so" on my blog. i value my readers. i believe interaction is a two way thing. :)

have an awesome time!

September 14, 2009

a new blog of mine

hello everyone
today divas so on this day ima starting a new blog where i will write my stories
so check this blog
http://chirag-lekhani.blogspot.com/

From nothing to something..!!

Well we all mature,become something from nothing(of course academically otherwise i feel every person is superior in his ownself).And suddenly everything changes just in an instant.Everything goes in a opposite way.Wondering how?Like this..

1.When you're nothing you wake up as you want,in your shorts,hair and beard all grown up,sit with a coffee(which ofcourse you order your mum for that and she curses you for it everyday),a news paper in hand reading all the news in the world which has nothing to do with you but still is fun in some way..
Now when you're something,you become a professional.You've to be properly dressed as anybody can land up at your place even in the morning(why don't these people stay at their place i wonder sometimes then i figure out may be the flush at their bathroom is not working so they're coming here).You don't have to order coffee it comes without asking because now you're earning and you sit with a news paper reading about shares,fiscal policies,budget and the most boring things in this entire world..Now that's very boring and depressing..!

2.When you're nothing nobody has any concerns for you,you can do the hell you want no one will bother asking about you(He's a loser,let him do what he wants they think)..
Now when you're something everybody is suddenly all concerned for you.Neighbours,relatives,their relatives,watchman,newspaperwala,dudhwala,everybody,just everybody making your life hell leaving you on privacy.

3.When you're nothing your parents say 'No girl is ever going to marry you'.At that point you take is as a offence and you boast yourself saying 'girls would die for me'.You want it very bad.But nobody believes you.
When you're something,suddenly you're the most eligible bachelor in town with everybody trying to find a girl for you.You think 'i'm nothing','A girl will get destroyed if she marries me'.You don't want a bit of it but you've to take it.

4.When you're nothing you can always say 'Don't worry my father will look after it',worrying about nothing.And no matter what you do,your father will look into the case(Ofcourse at the same time he'll tell you everything wrong you've done in your entire life and he'll tell you that you're useless).
When you're something,you're on your own,your father will say,'You're a man now,take care of it,till when will you take your parent's help?'And suddenly you're in this harsh world all on your own,all screwed up.

5.When you're nothing you can act the hell you want.If you're sitting in a cafe,you can make faces,laugh out loud enough to make it hear to the whole world,make fun of everybody sitting around,act like complete spoiled kid.
Now when you're something suddenly you've to enter the world of sophistication.Sit properly,act properly and make your life a complete boredom.

Friends i don't say that we should be nothing all our lives,ofcourse we've to be something,something everybody is proud of but in this process we should not lose the small lil lovely moments of our life which give us the inner peace.And that peace will only come when that kid in us is always alive somewhere.Become something,but don't let that kid die.Live life on your terms.World will be a better place to live in and you'll be a better person too.

Regards
aMaR..

a man becomes

lit cigarrete high brows curls in his hairslimy nose sweaty face and a look forlorn

can't get up can't sit down, his ass hurts

not for reasons you think yay it's coz he fell from a tree

what was young jim doing on a tree

didn't every thrill kill a man before he was a man

and when does a man become a man

is it age or just sanctuary

is it wisdom or mere selfishness

a man becomes a man says jim

when he falls down from a tree and hurts his ass

a man becomes a man jim says

when his heart breaks no more

when he sits beside the woman on bed

and quietly puffs his marijuana cigarrette

a man becomes a man jim says

when his fingers move caressing ova

never too deep and never to dip

and his smile is as nonchalant as it comes

a man becomes a man jim says

when his days are outnumbered you see

when he is lost you see

down can't get up and can't sit down

a man becomes a man jim says

when he hurts his ass dumb you see

cricket quiz - 5

The cricket Quiz will be posted every Friday and the answers to the quiz must be sent to me via email (christopherdavid007@gmail.com) on or before Wednesday. Therefore the last day for this quiz is 23rd of September. Please write in the subject cricket quiz.

The answers will be published every Friday with another set of questions along with the winners of previous quiz. Answers to Cricket Quiz - 4. Please note the next quiz will be published only on the 25th.

1.) Name the first bowler to take 600 test wickets.
Shane Warne

2.) Which two batsman share the most ODI century opening partnership?
Sachin Tendulkar and Sourav Ganguly

3.) Which ground hosted the first ever international test match?
Melbourne Cricket Ground (MCG) Australia vs. England in 1877.

4.) In 2004 which batsman set a World Record with 497 test runs between dismissals?
Sachin Tendulkar. He scored 241*, 60*, 194* and 2. And Yes I am a huge fan of Tendulkar.

5.) Name this bowler,[HINT - He played for Northamptonshire].
Frank Tyson.

The Winner(s) of the Quiz are, Deepak Balamurali, and Chirag Joshi.
- Congrats.

This weeks questions are,
1.) Which legendary Indian spinner has the figures 12-8-6-1 (read as overs-maidens-runs conceded- wickets) against East Africa in 1975 World Cup?

2.) Which Australian captain was nicknamed 'Captain Grumpy'?

3.) In which city is the Gaddafi Stadium located?

4.) Which year was the Wisden Cricketer's Almanac first published?

5.) Name this famous English batsman [In the Picyure] . [HINT - He played for Surrey]

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Lets dance along the waltz of winds.


Okay, so I tried to come up with something ‘different’ and I hope it is something ‘different’. You guys would know better. I’m amicable to all the suggestions or comments you guys may have to give.
Enjoy. Cheers :-)

While I hope for future to be
as pleasantly warm as winter’s sunshine,
as refreshingly cool as the summer morning,
as beautifully colourful as the rainbow,
as crystal clear, from the dust of mishaps
as the tears of immortal joy.

While I hope for future to lie
in the arms of clouds,
and shower the rain of love
on my deserted soul,
and take me to the bank of river with the flow,
and place me in the boat of affections,
to take me to the island of perfections.

While I hope for sun to rise from my doorstep,
for moon to sneak in my embrace for rest,
while I hope for stars to shine with the extreme zest,
Will you be the ‘one’ to give my hopes a nest?

Come, hold my hand and let us fly
over the mountains of disappointments,
and let past vanish in a whirl of dust.
Let us reside in the valley of new ‘hopes’.
And let the ‘love’ hold us closer and tighter.

Let us fly through the fog of obstacles,
through the thick and thin,
let us reach where ‘You’ and ‘I’
would dance along the waltz of winds.

Tattoo

Sunday Scribblings Prompt - Tattoo

I have no Tattoo
Its so permanent
It scares me away
I can never have it
Its not for me
No way
Yes!Laser can remove them
But I have no money to waste
Its not for me
No way


Photo by Ste3ve at Flickr

I do LOVE Henna Tattos
They fade away
That's more my style
They never over stay
I had the best for my marriage
It was so dark and pretty
When i look at the pictures
I wonder if that really was me

Photo by Alhowat at Flickr

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September 13, 2009

Been There, Done That... Will DO It Again!

Ever since I came back from Chennai on 28th July, days passed by like whooooosh! :)
It was time again...time for Penguin to meet her Grasshopper. After spending a few days in Bangalore and meeting up some uber cool people, Penguin was waiting at the railway station for her train to Chennai... the train that was scheduled at 11.45 PM. I reached the station at 9.30 PM... so technically I had 2 hours for myself and my random thoughts that were crowding inside my head. Ever read 'P.S. I love you'? ... I love that book...or wait, may be I hate it! Why? Simple, because its so damn romantic!!
After flippin' a couple of pages, Penguin was lost in her thoughts... thoughts about_____!! (Fill it up yourself...). I somehow love reading books... imagination runs freely! :P

My train finally arrived...and after safely keeping my baggage, I reached for my berth and took out my mobile from my bag.


'FL??'
'Yep...ssup missy?? Enjoying huh??'
'Loads.... reaching Chennai tomorrow morning. Can you meet?'

Next morning I reached Chennai and I was greeted by my friend Sowmiya's message! I was waiting for Grasshopper's message, but I really knew it that he would be sleeping... sleeping like a drunkard... lol! And you know what...?? When I was in train, Mr.Grasshopper actually messaged me asking if I wanted him to come and receive me at the station. Lol! I know he loves his sleep and hence I did not want to disturb his morning dreamy sleep and there he was sleeping...without any disturbance! :P
Someone didn't even message me that morning. Finally after waiting for around 5 hours, I took up my phone to make a call. By that time, all my patience had gone for a toss! The call got connected, and it started ringing... almost when the call was about to get disconnected... I heard a voice...
'Hello Penguin.'
'What are you up to?'
'Oh, I just woke up sometime back. My friggin' alarm didn't ring.'
 'Nice! What plans? Come to Anna Nagar. Mom wants to meet you.'
'Ok, Sure. Will be there in 1 and a half hour atleast.'
I was angry on him, remember? I mean he didn't call me only! But the moment I heard his sleepy voice, it was all gone. He finally came to Anna Nagar and I went to pick him up on scooty. He came, met my mom. My mom likes him so much that she teams up with grasshopper to tease me! :P

 We were off to where... umm... no idea! We thought about it for a few moments and finally ended up deciding to go to the same place where it all began... Mocha... and once again, it was Mocha callin'. The place is not very good as such... but the fact that it all started there makes it special for me. The fact that that was the place where I realized that he was a great guy... a great friend... someone who can listen to the endless crap that I talk... someone who would charm me back even if I fight with him like an idiot. Finding a place to sit in Mocha was difficult this time. But in a few minutes, we found a good place to sit. We sat and as it has always been, we talked and laughed and fought and made up for it and laughed again and hugged. Grasshopper has always been special for his Penguin... I have seen loads of ups and downs (mainly downs) with him... but, there is something that keeps us together and I don't want to know what that something is. Grasshopper, for the very first and may be the last time, I am giving you all the credits for keeping our friendship alive. Had it not been you, we would have surely parted ways by now!

After hogging on sandwiches and blackcurrant cooler, we called up Heena and asked her if she could meet us. She agreed. At about 5.30, we walked our way to Ishphani. Heena came, we all chatted for almost an hour and it was again...time for me to go home! Sigh! Grasshopper dropped me at T.Nagar and we bid goodbye with a hug! :)

You know what, sometimes I have a hundred reasons to hate him... but I also have a thousand reasons to be with him. I wasn't well when I reached Chennai, but I felt just fine...superfine when I was with him. There is something more than love or friendship. I always say that there are a few relations that do not have a name. Penguin-Grasshopper one is one of them. My heart races when he is around... also when he is not around and his thoughts crowd my mind. It aches to part... it pains to say 'bye' to him... I talk to him for hours together, but many people call me introvert... does that mean that my heart speaks to him...? Yes!

This time when we said 'bye' to each other... it wasn't paining much! Why? Because I knew that we were destined to meet over and over again.

I am back home... but not completely. I missed a part of me somewhere... and that somewhere is Chennai... I hope Grasshopper keeps it safely!


*RESUMES WAITING*

Who I am..??


You wanna know who I am
I am what I see in your eyes
when I look at you
I am the one your heart cares most
I am in the ticks of your wall clock
I am in tears of your joys
I am in the reflection of your mirror
I am your first ray of hope
I am your shoulder to cry on
I am close to you in your dark wintery nights
I am in the every beat of your heart
I am the one who's awake in your dreams
I am in the castle you live
I am your smile,I am your tear
I am in creases of your morning bedsheets
I am your fragrance,I am your anger
I am your past ,I am your future
I am on train you travel every day
I am in the drops of rain that touches your soul
I am everywhere,I am everything
I am your shadow,I am your fear
I am your day,I am your night
why you wonder who I am
when you know who I am
Everyday you ask me this
and everyday I repeat you same these lines
Doctors say you have lost your memory
and I say have you lost your senses
you don't remember me anymore
look straight into my eyes
hold me in your arms as always you do
feel me touch me
this is who I am
I have no identity without you
my life is not worth living
when you are not a part of it
every morning I knock at your door
just in the hope that one day
you will remember me
but it's hell when you give those strange looks
my life has just become
a walk from my home to your home
this never ending journey is what all my fate
with all my broken heart I pray you oh god
either take my memory too so that
I may not go through this pain all day
or bury me under that ground forever
so that my soul may rest with her fathomless love
that may not die even till eternity

Take me back....Bring her forth



A Penguin-Grasshopper post


The days that separated us finally realized that it was useless postponing the inevitable.
Chennai| the land of idli and dosas, the place which boasts of the second largest artificial beach in the world, the place where you can find the most horrid auto-wallas and the place where dreams do come true (if you wish so so hard).


'FL??'
'Yep...ssup missy?? Enjoying huh??'
'Loads.... reaching Chennai tomorrow morning. Can you meet?'


Who was she kidding?? Of course i can! She knew that, I knew that. And you folks know that too...


'ofcoz...'
'hmmm ok..wil let you know the time. Wake up soon. Love ye'


Soon happened to be a bit too late. I woke up by 11 in the morning. Darned alarm! It was not even 48 hours since we parted, still i was itching to be with her, around her, near her, whatever-her! (Oh! we guys met in Bangalore for a couple of days :P)
She rang up soon. I had to meet her by 2. Aunty wanted to meet me! I kinda like her mom a lot. She's damn sweet. So i showered, emptied all my bro's deo over myself, checked myself in the mirror for 'bout a zillion times until bro finally picked his lazy ass up and kicked me out. The weather didn't look to bad. It actually rained the night before. Its a wonder that even the sun decides to hide himself when she is around.


I reached Anna-nagar before time and waited for her highness to present herself. She came in a scooty, wearing a MJ tee, weaving in and out of traffic before finally halting on seeing me. She looked ravishing....erm....great actually! I had do sit behind her and off we went! I reminded her that i was still not married and didn't want to be dead so soon. But then realized that it didn't matter anymore. SHE was HERE! I can guarantee that my heart beats faster around her than the pace of the rising speedometer on her scooty. Met Aunty, and then off we went. 


Mocha has become a home sweet home for us. Holding hands, looking into each other's eyes has become much more frequent since the last time we met in Chennai. Blame it on Bangalore. Penguin specifically told not to write 'bout Bangalore days without her reading it first. Coz nearly 80 percent of the post will have to be censored and edited before being published here. *sigh*


I was hungry...and she seldom eats. Ordered hookah and sandwiched while i looked around for a better sitting place. She found it first. hehe... a cozy corner lounge type area where i cold finally lie down and keep my head on her lap while i get lost into her eyes again. We chatted, we laughed. She looked great. Did i mention it already? i guess so. Can't stop saying that at all. The scent of her skin still sends me shivers down my spine. I can see goosebumps erupting on her skin when am inches away from her neck. Her breathing becomes heavy and then i back off. Kinda love turning her on :P


The poor Mocha waiter had to come and tell us to sit a few meters apart. Silly bloke! Spoilt the mood....hehe... The pecks on the cheeks have been replaced by something far more better and far more controversial to write 'bout it directly here. :P


We sat for nearly 2 hours and then walked the short distance to CCD to meet Heena. Spilled all the secrets of Bangalore to her and for a moment she was still.lols. Dropped her back to T.Nagar. We both have stopped waiting and praying to meet soon, coz we know we would...one way or the other.


The next day...she was gone yet again. Only the memories remain and the magic, vivid as ever...never to diminish, never do die down. The sun rose again and she was home. 
But her heart...its still here...waiting to be tamed...all over again.


                                         the waiting game resumes...

September 12, 2009

Fear

SunlightImage via Wikipedia

I sit in the darkness of daylight,
a shadow on the wall
seeking colors while lingering in grays.
No one is here but silent enemies,
malice and doom,
fear mongers whistling away the day.
Outside, green glistens beneath a sky so blue
it hurts my eyes.

In the old days, a step into sunlight and warm
smiles muffled the mindless ramblings of gloom
before he could warn of murkiness ahead
fraught with dread and isolation.
I did not see it then.
Darkness hiding, waiting for a moment when
my tears would dampen the ground beneath my feet.
No, I did not see it then.
Instinct left without checking in.
It was unfortunate, a result of a windy day.
I lost my grip on a weightless wish that floated away.
I could not save it or the spirit that once lived
in the folds of a new day.
Just a window framing sky is all that remains.



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Virginity and ambition

There is a new movie in town called Kaho na Kaho. Of course you may never hear of it leave alone go for it, but what you must know about is the wonderful tagline they have come up with for their poster. It reads, hold your breath darlings, "Ambitious woman always loses her virginity." (You don't believe me, please check out the poster at the Dadar station.) What I would really like to do is find out if the actresses of the movie consider themselves ambitious or not :-P And the million dollar question who was at the helm of the marketing and copywriting for this film?

A friend of mine on seeing it commented so does that mean unambitious women don't lose their virginity? Most of us do at some point of time or the other isn't it? So I fail to understand what is the connection between ambition and virginity? Let me refresh their knowledge of history a bit. Long ago there was an ambitious Tudor princess in England called Elizabeth and you know what she went on to be called the 'Virgin Queen' of England. Any Brit worth his salt would say that she was very very ambitious. Whether she lost her virginity later on is still a matter of debate.

Case in point 2. Can you then explain to me the fact that in the US there are a lot of teenagers who lose their virginity and also drop out of school/college? Some of them end up as housewives too. So unambitious (the conventional definition, not mine) isn't it? And yet they have lost their virginity. So will they now be called ambitious? Actually why go to the US, there are many women in our country who are married off early and remain housewives and marriage does mean a loss of virginity (unless your husband is gay), so are they ambitious or unambitious? I am really confused here.

As I was researching on this topic I found out that some great literary geniuses like Jane Austen, Shaw, Lewis Carrol and W.B.Yeats were celibate. They were all ambitious. Oh heck there are two men here, how could I forget. Men are supposed to be ambitious, natural instinct and all that so it doesn't matter if they are virgins does it? In fact there are people in the West wondering if celibacy means more productivity? (For the simple reason that celibacy means no severely close relationships, no surrender of control of your life to another human being and therefore you could do what you want and not because virginity is sanctity).

But is virginity about ambition or is it about preparedness for a sexual life? Why the drama over virginity? If you look at history closely one of the most obvious reasons to ensure virginity of a bride was so that the successor born to that particular woman is surely that of her husband, a ploy to ensure that property goes to a genuine member of the bloodline. (However the devil in me wonders what if a woman loses her virginity to one man and bears the child of another, who was to tell in the era of no DNA tests?) And why is only a woman's ambition or virginity an issue? If a woman has to necessarily be a virgin, who is to guarantee that the man she marries is a virgin? A man can be ambitious or not ambitious, but it never affects any of his choices in life. But an ambitious woman is always a BITCH (Babe In Total Control Of Herself btw).

So is this tagline talking about the casting couch? If so, is it only the ambition of the victim to be blamed for the existence of such an institution? So what will they say about ambitious men who sleep with men for jobs? (Yes it happens you know). But well, we have a tendency to always blame the victim. If a girl gets raped, she has invited it and if a guy/young boy is raped by another man or woman, he didn't have the guts to fight back. It is always the victim's problem. And hey what ambition do rape victims have I would like to know because even they lose their virginity.

There will be many who will denounce me as trying to corrupt the value system of the society. All I want to tell them is that I am not advocating mindless sex, all I am saying is that virginity is not the measure of character or lack of it. Nor is ambition the measure of when you will lose it. Ambition at best is just the measure of where you see yourself in the future not even how the world sees you, because everyone has their own definition of ambition isn't it?

P.S sorry for any loss of coherence in the post, the ridiculousness of the whole thing just made me a bit angry.

The Verdict

The judge is almost shouting at the top of his voice, “Order, order in the court”, while simultaneously tapping his gavel. The gallery is very noisy. Everyone there is laughing.
A court hearing is in progress. MIND, the plaintiff versus HEART, the defendant.


The celebrated case: HEART over MIND or MIND over HEART?


The witness on the witness stand is in sweat testifying to convince the judge that the HEART must be followed and not the MIND. He further attested that he saw her heart, beating so fast every time she saw him. And he further uttered that he would hurt when they can’t be together and would miss her terribly in her every absence.
The counsel for the MIND shouted, “Objection, your honor”! But the judge, with a suspicious smile on his lips, implied, “Objection overruled!”
Finding no defense at all and feeling he’s losing his case, he finally said, “that is all, your Honor”, the counsel expressed to the Judge.

The counsel for the defendant was requested to step up and present his witness, too.
The witness took his oath to speak only the truth and nothing but the truth.
“Mr. Witness, what have you to say of the plaintiff”? asked the counsel for the plaintiff.
“I think, the MIND should rule over the HEART”, said the witness in a very airy disposition. “Because,” he added, “the MIND always thinks what is right, always decides what is right and he is a fair judge of one’s feelings, like you”.

“Objection your honor”, says the counsel for the defendant.
“Objection sustained”, the judge said and a tap on his gavel went loudly.
“Yes, Counsel for the defendant, what have you to say”?
“I objected because the witness is unfair, he is hard-headed, he has no feelings at all and I guess, he must be sick in the mind and definitely, he has no heart at all”.

The people in the gallery laughed loudly while clapping their hands.
After a long rebuttal, the judge ordered that the verdict be read. He looks so tired and weary handling the case since time immemorial. Maybe, it’s high time that he renders the verdict now.
THE VERDICT: After hearing both sides of their sworn testimonies and statements, and by virtue of the power vested in me by law, I, the Fair Judge, do hereby order that this case be closed and that the MIND should never rule over the HEART because this will surely kill people in love. And this would result to a gruesome, bloody end which will extinct the human race. Spare the human race. Let’s procreate! To sustain their existence! And that would only happen if the HEART will rule over the MIND. Let the MIND act as fiscalizer only over the decisions of the HEART. I further declare that the MIND is found guilty of manipulating the feelings of the HEART. And therefore will be sentenced to LIFE IMPRISONMENT over the HEART.


Then the gavel went, Tap! Tap! Tap!
Laughter from the gallery is heard again. And then the laughter faded… faded…faded…away… and there’s no one left in the gallery except the poor judge who rendered the wrong verdict because he believed in all his intellectual capacity that the MIND should always rule over the HEART. Poor, celibate Judge, he never learned a lesson and surely he will die a pauper at heart.

September 11, 2009

WhErE AnGeLs TrEaD..........


She gazed at the sky... Hoping to find some familiar face amongst the hide and seek of the moon and the clouds... Hoping to get a glimpse of the life which existed beyond the clouds - the life whose stories where known on earth as Fairytales....!!


She remembered the day she had been sent down to Earth... She had to give up all her powers and wishes, and to live a life as human being till the next brightest full moon, when the moonlight would make even the night shine as a day. She had hoped that this night she could return back to the heavens and once again be "An Angel of Love"


Yes... She was an Angel...Angel of Love… She made the lovers and Soulmates meet on this Earth... She helped the humans to find their Partner... Yes, she was the one who created miracles, coincidences and brought two souls together on various occasions and united them. But then, one day...


One day, she had done what she was forbidden to do... She came on earth to make a Prince meet his Soulmate... But she herself fell in Love with the tall and handsome Prince whose eyes seemed to be speaking a thousand words... who had a strong Aura around him… She fell in Love with him and she just could not let the Prince fall in love with someone else…


She went back to Heaven and demanded that she should be made the Prince's Soulmate... She argued and argued. Until she had got punished... And her punishment was... To live on Earth as a human and make two lovers meet without using any of her powers and understand the true meaning of Love and finding Soulmates- a Meaning which she would never understand as An Angel.


Today, was the day when one of her friends (the friend made by her when she came on earth), had met her Soulmate and finally they got married. The gleam in their eyes when they vowed to be with each other forever and ever made her feel that this was the knowledge her heart was yearning for.... This day, she realized that “No power can stop the souls from identifying their Soulmates….” No power can stop from Uniting them or no power can separate them…Angels could only help them to tread on the right path. She thought her time on Earth was now complete. Maybe, she could now go back to Her World.....


She gazed up at the sky…….


The moonbeam shone on her face as if trying to brighten her up and welcoming her........ :)


Word Count: 437

PS:- Hi all at WL. I am Urvashi and this is my First post here.. Hope you all like it...!!

September 10, 2009

Moonlit confession


In this moonlit night
I have one long confession
lingering my heart from a long time
It's time to free it and let it to your heart
before this poised moon hide behind hazy clouds
I have something deep within to tell you aloud
beneath this beautiful face you see everyday
is a devil rising high everyday
strangling me from telling you truth
from day I say you on that busy train
I had spent many sleepless nights
I still wonder how one fine day
destiny fall on my ground
and took me to your world
your charming smile steal my heart
we sail so long on the ship called friendship
holding tears when nights were dark
shedding each other under sunny days
you penetrated deep inside my soul
knocked down my hidden window
stole my darkest fear
molded me into what I am today
how hours turn to days and days to years
I never realized until that day
when I saw you with someone, so close
my heart ripped out of my chest
tears spilled out of my eyes
I felt sudden pain that choked me so long
right from that day I realized
how will I feel if I loose you someday
my world was upside down
I turned back to look at past
not a second passed without your thought
I kept moving thinking you were all mine
but I broke down when reality hit me hard
these scars still bleed many time
then took some transformation
and my feelings changed for you that night
I cheat you on your scared ship
I crossed my barriers of being your friend
new dream built around in my eyes
where you were there for me every time
dreaming about you when I woke up
I found love standing at my door
hiding it I moved so far with you
but now it seemed I am failing
to hide it any more
so under this vast dark sky
I am standing here to confess
that till this waves rise and fall
till this moon shine in that sky
I will love you...I will love you..
I know you may not love me back
but I can't stop loving you now
and its getting deeper day by day
It's not your fault that I landed up here
but It also true I can't hold it anymore
I can never be same friend of yours
I can never love you the way you want
now its upto to your whether you want me
or throw me out of your life:(

word count:440

Memories of a romance

One Single Impression Prompt 80 - Romance

All those years ago
On a night like this
You had touched my heart
You told me that I was your love
I could feel it in your words
I could feel it in your eyes
Hope of a bright future
Shimmering though the moonlight




So much time has passed
Life has evolved
No matter how many differences
No matter how much of a plight
When I think of that day at Dona Paula
That day with the shimmering moonlight
I know in my heart
We will find our way
No labyrinth can keep us away.


Shraddha

Word count : 96

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Admin Announcement - Moonlight Contest

Dear Members,

As you all are aware that there is a contest going on at the lounge - The Moonlight Picture Contest!

With numerous posts coming each day, it is quite possible that the other Admin Announcement posts may have gone unnoticed. The lounge is currently open only for the posts that are for the contest. Since we have a lot of new members, we would like to clarify that all of them (including the old members) should refrain from posting any other stuff apart from the stories/poems for this contest. The lounge will be open for every other post from September 12th, 2009.

This is just to ensure that the contributions for this contest don't get lost and people who contribute get maximum support as well as dedicated readership. If anyone does want to notify other lounge members of a new post on their blog, please feel free to use the Shoutbox. We regret the inconvenience caused. We guess it should be a great experience reading different takes on the given picture. We are just facilitating the same and ensuring that your stories get read. A humble request to all talented writers here on writers lounge to try their hand and churn up a story/poem for contest. Writers Lounge Rocks! And you all make it rock! Cheers!


Meanwhile we noticed a few posts which were not for the Moonlight Picture Contest. We have safely moved those posts as drafts. The respective authors are requested to kindly reschedule their posts for Sep 12. Also note that 're-posting' is only allowed on weekends!



P.S.: We will be posting the details of the Readers Choice Awards very soon.


 Till then,

Keep lounging!
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September 8, 2009

Glory in the making ... contd



Continued from Glory In Making...


I hope Artz does not mind my stealing a para from her work, Just to keep the continuity. :)



Glory does not last long. Dreams shatter and we get hit hard on the face. Kriti was a good girl but it was difficult when the old lady passed away. Her distant relatives threw Kriti to square one. Abondoned her and there she lay again where she was before. All this happened years back. There was a difference this time. Kriti was stronger.


Her cell phone rang.


"Hi I am Ajay, i wanted to meet you today"


"Me too"


"I'll pick you up from Chandni Chowk near Babu's sweet shop, that's ok right?"


"On the way to your home can we stop at the lake near Keshav colony, I need five minutes"


"Yes , I have heard about your ritual, no problem as I hear that makes you even better"


She cut the phone. And started getting ready for the discourse.


It was routine now, the dress, the makeup , the drill. She looked at the mirror. It was ok now she would forget the rest.


"The wind started to blow and the dark clouds made way for the moon to appear. She raised her head to see the moon beaming and smiling at her. She remained perplexed for the next few minutes, unsure of what these signals meant."


"Hurry up will you"- Ajay called from inside the car.


She got ready for the drill. She had to kill her soul again. The needle was her friend. In the misty moonlight cocaine shot up through her veins like frenzy. She jerked to keep standing and took two deep breaths. She took one last look at the moon, was it smiling in sarcasm? she gave a fuck! Her face stern now and then the everlasting smile of the moon found her face. So reachable yet never even close to reality, the mystics of the moon and now Kriti herself. Seen and loved by all but seldom ever touched. Kriti turned still hazy and walked towards the car. Her hair shining in the moonlit night.


Glory In Making...


Kirti stood there gazing at the moon and her eyes brimming with tears. She worked as a domestic help at the Kapoor’s. A domestic help… that meant no freedom, no education… in short, no life!
She had always thought that her master was a good man. That night was different. He returned home, completely drunk! When all the others in the family had slept, Mr. Kapoor entered Kirti’s room and had sexually assaulted her!
‘What did I do to deserve such a fate? My mother deserted me when I was four and ever since then I have been struggling… for a living, for a respectable life. They say my mom was a prostitute and call her names. I never wanted to be someone like her and hence, I ran away from all of them. And today again I am at one such juncture in my life… I am being forced in to something that I know will ruin my life forever! Help me lord… and tell me, do you think I deserve this?’ she cried giving rise to a million other questions inside her.
She was sure of at least one thing… she was not weak. She was a fighter!
The wind started to blow and the dark clouds made way for the moon to appear. She raised her head to see the moon beaming and smiling at her. She remained perplexed for the next few minutes, unsure of what these signals meant.
Suddenly she felt a comforting touch on her shoulder. The old lady sat next to Kirti and asked her the reason behind her tears. Kirti told her everything that she witnessed and felt. The old lady patiently listened to everything and she hugged the little girl.
‘What is your name my child?’ the old lady enquired.

‘My problem is much bigger right now that these silly things like my name… can you please help me? Anyway, my name is Kirtishe said feeling irritated and traumatized.

‘Kirti means glory… and there will be a day when the whole world will know you. You are hurt, I understand. But I know you are not weak. Life means struggle… each one of us face it at one point or the other. And trust me, every problem has a solution and your problem has its own.’

The old lady took Kirti with her to the little home that she ran for homeless children. Kirti found a new home where she was made to study, to learn other vocational activities which would help her in future.
At times when she felt low and lonely, she would walk to the same place and would gaze at the moon and see moon would be back smiling at her. Kirti had found a new life for herself; she knew it that she would make it big one day! She promised to herself that she would prove everyone wrong who said that a prostitute’s daughter would have to be a prostitute herself. Glory in making!
Word Count : 500
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P.S.: Hey guys, I have been absent from the lounge for almost a month now. Sorry! :P
But I am back... How have you all been? 

Love,
Artz!

When you are GONE


When you are gone, i know not life
Doomed to remain your unwed wife
The magic that you once invoked
The nightmares change the dreams you showed---
       Like a raw nerve sliced by a knife.

The zeal for life just got erased
Moment you stepped into the blaze
Sealed with your thoughts, am all alone--
       When you are gone...

The full moon lits the path unknown
To the place where we both belong
Together beyond life and death
I am coming....just keep the faith
The deathly waves carry me on---
         When you are gone....


Word Count| 95


P.S| a Rondeau form of poetry.
{A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabA aabbaA.
Lines 9 and 15 are short - a refrain (A) consisting of a phrase taken from line one.The other lines are longer (but all of the same metrical length).
1st para (Quintet)- aabba rhyme scheme, syllable count-8
2nd para (Quatrain)- aabA rhyme scheme, syllable count-8
3rd para (Sestet)- aabbaA rhyme scheme, syllable count-8
(syllable count excused for Lines 9 and 15 for a Rondeau poetry)}

Snuffed Out



Painless
Harmless
Useless
Lifeless
The moon makes the Painless, Harmless light
Snuffing out my Useless, Lifeless Plight.




P.S| a Tyburn form of poetry.
(A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables. The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.)

Word Count| 17

September 7, 2009

Heavenly Longing


Pearly moon, show thy face,
Reflect thy light on these waters;
So halcyon they are right now.
Lead me to him who awaits me,
A star by your side was my love.

Rising tides embracing the wind,
Take me when enraged is the sea;
There many miles below, a dock.
A vessel so fine, rests there alone,
My love waits there, for wedlock.


Dark night, I pray, engulf me,
I wish not to see the light again;
My wait, it shall not end soon.
Only a star, I wish now to see,
It is he, smiling beside the moon.

Wedlock in heaven, for us waits,
Just get to his side soon, I must;
For his wait has been very long.
Just a moment more, here alone,
Then by his side, where I belong.


Word Count: 133
Submitted for WL Moonlight Picture Contest, Poetry  and crossposted to my blog.


Official Announcement - Moonlight Picture Contest


After getting an amazing response to the Moonlight Picture Contest...which saw close to 25 entries posted on the lounge so far, we are extending the date of the contest for a few more days…the contest now officially ends on the 11th of September, i.e. Friday! We witnessed quite a lot of entries for the Contest… all of them were fantastic! In all till now, we have received 13 entries for the Prose Category and around 15 entries for the Poetry Category.
Thanks a lot for the overwhelming response.

Further, we would like to declare open the "Readers Choice Award". The story/poem which gets the maximum votes from readers would receive the "Readers Choice Award" badge. Loungers are required to mail us the name of the story/poem which they rate as the best along with the author’s name if possible.

One member has to vote for one prose and one poem. Please note that the Readers’ Choice for Prose and Readers’ Choice for Poetry are separate awards.

We are waiting for more entries from all you people. Let’s make this Contest a hit!! :)
We also make a humble request to readers to comment on stories and poems to encourage the participants of the contest!
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September 6, 2009

Kinginni - The Anklet

When we die, we become stars. Forever shining and up there for people we love most”, told Ammalu to her 5 year old girl.

But Amma, you won’t even be able to see or hear me from far up there”, Kinginni frowned.

Molu, you were named Kinginni which in our native tongue means the anklet. The sound of these anklets will inform me. There is always an invisible umbilical cord that connects a mother with her daughter, no matter how far she is”, Ammalu tried reassuring her daughter, wiping away tears which she had so valiantly fought for the past few months.

This conversation was still fresh in Kinginni’s mind though it had taken place two years back. Ammalu had passed away that very year, leaving Kinginni with her maternal grandmother and fisherman brother Velan. For the last two years, like a ritual Kinginni would head to the rocky beach towards the other end of her adopted home on every birthday of hers and converse with the brightest star closest to the moon. The sound made by her anklets would echo all around announcing her arrival. She would open her heart out to this twinkling star and share every single thing that had happened in the last one year. And the star would shine brightly while Kinginni smiled, fade out when she cried, twinkle at her complaints and bathe Kinginni in the cool moonlight when she would yearn for her mothers touch.

Today was her birthday. But things had gone terribly wrong. Kinginni had lost her anklets two days back while playing near the beach. She had spent the last two days crying. The new white frock her uncle gifted her this morning had failed to cheer her up. It had been raining heavily for the past few days and today was no different. As soon as it stopped raining towards the night, Kinginni made a dash to her spot. There was an eerie silence all around and the place sounded unfamiliar today without the echoes of her anklet. With a heavy heart, she glanced towards the sky. She let out a gasp on seeing the sky without a single star. Tears swelled up in her eyes and she rushed back unable to handle the shock.


Kinginni ran along the beach with the stream of tears gushing down her cheeks. She felt something prick her legs which made her stop. She had almost dismissed it as a thorn. But the shine of that object made her dig the surface of the sand only to reveal her anklets. Kinginni could not believe it. She thanked the sea for this gift on her birthday and rushed back to the spot, the anklet adorning her leg. The place echoed in rhythm to her pace as she sprinted to the corner. With a smile on her lips, she looked towards the sky in anticipation. And like God’s play, a strong wind blew the black clouds above revealing a bright twinkling star besides the moon.

Word count: 500

P.S.: Sorry for the late entry friends. The Onam celebrations back home in Kerala had kept me hooked. How could i not participate in a contest held by the beloved lounge? :-) The founders are always counted in by default...aren't they? Hope you all like the attempt. Keep rocking :P

Towards Eternity




Love me, love my soul,
Love me till eternity.
I want to take you with me
Towards eternity.

The infinite universe beckons us,
To create a world of beauty.
I know it won’t deceive me.
It calls us to live there forever.

Let’s go towards the endless sky
Far from the sea of sorrows.
Who knows whether there is a tomorrow?
The world here has only heartbreaks to offer.

See the loyal moonlit sky glistening,
I can see the horizon shining.
It’s happy to receive us,
I know it won’t deceive us.

Heavens are celebrating
Our homecoming.
Here I go towards the endless sky,
To merge into its vastness.

Now if I call you,
Will you come with me?
Towards eternity,
To be loved forever.


Word Count :127

September 5, 2009

Like in the great stories



"Is this how it was meant to be? All the stars have deserted us, I don't know if the wind is alive yet, and look at you, all covered by those dark clouds".
"Looking harder into the haze will not make it any clearer", said the moon, her best friend.
"But what wrong have we done? Why do we deserve this fate? I don't know if I can do this."
"We cannot weigh right or wrong of what has happened. By right we shouldn't have even be here."
"But we are!"
"Let this tale be about what we did, not what happened to us. Like in the great stories!"
"We don't know what to do. Can there ever be a happy ending now? How could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad has happened?"
"In every tale there comes a time when darkness seems to be the only way it can end. But are these the stories we remember? The one's that stay with us are those where the clouds pass and sunshine comes back, brighter than ever. It is not because the folks in those stories didn't come face to face with darkness or were any braver than us. They all had chances to turn back and leave the world to its fate. But they just kept going."
"Why?"
"Because they were holding onto to something."
"What are we holding onto? What are we fight for?"
"For all the good that is still left in this world".
"Amen"
--
word count #246
Inspired by Lord of the Rings
Written for "Moonlight picture contest"

I also write @ the world round me

Take me to you...

I stand beneath the dark clouds

Waiting for the wind to blow

To lift my feet off the ground

And take me to you...


It feels so black here

I hate this feeling of pain

Trapped on an island

Moon my only company


Its a place of passion

But it feels gloomy and dull

If you were here

I could feel the beauty and see the green


All i think about is you

Day and night standing here alone

Looking at the moon

It is smiling at my sorrow


I wait for the wind to strike

Lift me and take me to you..... 

Word Count: 107 words


Love

Princess Sonshu


PS: Sorry for the late one...

Moonlit Sky


She stood there, almost numb, as she saw the dark clouds gather over the moon.But she was looking for something else. Something which she thought, would haunt her for the rest of her life.

He went down on his knees that day as he proposed to her..."Would you like to spend the rest of your life with me,Anita?" The room went silent. She didn’t know how to react.Obviously she was happy, but a part of her heart wasn’t quite sure. The crowd of 5 people inside the room including Rishi awaited with bated breadth. “Yes!” came her reply and everybody in the room got what they wanted to hear. But was it a wholehearted yes, Rishi wondered!

“What’s the matter Ani?”

“I don’t know Rish, I just don’t know!”

“Have you found someone else in these last 2 years?”

“No that’s not the case Rish, it’s just that 2 years ago you were not a captain in the Indian Army”

“I see, you have a problem of me being in the army?”

“No Rish, I am worried about you…they have posted you in the north-west frontier.”

“Your concerns are uncalled for Ani, there is very little infiltration now-a-days”

“Still …Anything could happen”

“What do you want me to do Ani, Make sacrifices??

“Well somebody has to rish…ain’t it?

“I have made enough sacrifices to get into where I am now Ani…I am sorry I can’t leave that.”

She thought long and hard that night and had made her decision. I am sorry rish I can’t marry you.

He was heart-broken.

Can I have your number, she asked almost embarrassed

What’s the use Ani…Just incase I die…just look up in the sky and I will be right up there as a shining star, he bid her goodbye.

And there she was, looking towards the sky that night, but she couldn’t see any star…All she saw were dark clouds covering the moonlit sky.

Word Count:->324

September 4, 2009

A wait Under the moon


Another day has ended
The moon is all set to shine
The hope again shattered
Yet again, the wait for you never ended.

The same moon
Under which we made sweet love
The same stars that sparked the passion
The same sky
Under which you made love filled promises
And today I am alone and stranded
Looking for you in the twinkle of the stars
Searching for you in the brightness of the moon
Still all I get is an empty sky.

Thy words still ringing in my ears
Raising hope with rise of the sun
Hoping for some word from you
But the silence of my heart and soul
Echoes with the shining moon.

Future sought vanished with you
Eclipsing the happiness of my life
Twinkling stars mock at me
For they stand witness to the love I had
The love that you left brutally at the doors of hell
While I was waiting for the trip to paradise of heaven
Where u held my hand to a glorious life
Where my love was all you needed
Where there were no tears or any pain
Where the moon sheltered my love forever.
But the hand I seek has long gone
My love been betrayed
Tears blotch the present parchment
And the moon has hid amongst the clouds.

Still every morning
I wake up with a hope
To see the stars shining with you
To again let passions soaring under the vast sky
To fulfill thy promises of forever under the moon
.
Word Count: 257

Her Beautiful Life!


She saw the clock strike eleven and got up immediately from her bed! Then she started searching for her slippers in the darkness, trying not to make even a slightest sound. She can’t afford to let her mom know that she was trying to sneak out of the house. Tip toeing to the front door, she opened it quietly and crept outside. The darkness devoured her, making her quite similar to her shadow. At first, she took cautious tiny steps like an excited kid who is just learning to walk. Once she was far away from her home, she broke into one run. She can hear the big waves at the sea nearby, roaring away. She smiled to herself and headed in the direction of the beach. One can sense the excitement and happiness she is feeling at that moment, when she was heading towards her favorite place. Suddenly she stopped! She was speechless. The sight of the beautiful full moon caught her by surprise. Why surprise?! Because at that moment, she realized that her life is also so beautiful, just like that sight. The sight which showed the full moon playing hide and seek with the dark clouds! The clouds didn’t spoil the splendor of the moon in any way at all. Instead it created a mysterious aura around the moon. This made the moon look even more magnificent! She stood there silently, savouring the peace she felt, drinking in the beauty of the sky.

Suddenly, someone gave her a warm hug from behind. Someone stood right behind her, whispering in her ears, “Hey beautiful”. This time she was not caught by surprise! Instead she turned and smiled at him. The same smile, which made him fall in love with her and which made him propose her. The same smile, which she gave him when she said “Yes”!

As she rested her head on his shoulders, she thought, “Yes, Life is very beautiful indeed”

Word Count - 325

Hey everyone, how you doing?! I have been away for a very long time now! Sorry for no posts or comments. I am reading all the posts but no time to comment. This is my entry for the Moonlight Picture contest! Hope this (at least!) qualifies to find a tiny winy place at this blog : ) cos i read all the other entries. Really good, I must say !! :) Anyway, I am signing off here! Have a good weekend guys! Take care!!

Color of my Life.

All characters are fictitious and entirely based on the writers imagination.This work is based on the writers creative work.This is my come back post in Lounge after 2 months :D

I entered the art gallery jubilantly with a constant smile on my face.I was asked to judge a drawing exhibition.It was a special occasion for me and I felt honoured.

“This way sir,” the gallery incharge guided me through all the paintings.

“Tanmai wait!,” I stopped near a painting which grabbed my attention.It exhibited the tranquillity of mind.Such a wonderful painting it was.I stared at it carefully and tried to decode the hidden meaning behind the same.The painting was familiar to me.I failed to recollect my past memories,but the person was some one who was close to me.I leaned on the sofa in the Lounge.I was feeling tired as I learned about my futile love.She was Monik ,who hailed from the hilly region of Darjeeling.I still remember the words that she told me during our last meet.It buzzed on my ears.

“Tanmai,I want to meet the artist of that moongirl painting,” I said to the incharge.

“Sir,she is Monik Bisht,and yes she is on her way,” he replied.

“Oh!” a smile beamed through my face.She was the one whom I was searching for since ages. I failed to keep up to the promise,but I never thought that I would meet her after 7 long years.

“Hello sir!,” she wished me.

“Monik,Its me Anish!,”I said to her.

“Oh hello Anish Sir! how are you?,” she said with a straight face.

“Will you forgive me Monik,you would surely forgive me if you knew what happened that day?,” I said.

“Who am I to forgive you Anish..you just ditched me and threw me out of your life,” she said.

“Baba’s health was really bad that day,” I replied.

“I tried to contact you after getting the consents from my parents,” I said with a smile.

“And hey this painting was not supposed to be sold ,you remember” I said.

“Do you remember you were the girl and me the moon and we both inseperable,” I said.

“Yes! after a long eternal wait , I though it was illogical to place that painting at my house,” she said.

Her reactions suggested me that my absence had created a turbulence in her life

“Monik!till date I was still searching for you and I am glad that I met you here,” I touched her.

“Sorry Anish!,” She swiftly removed my hands from her shoulder.

“Don’t build castles in air Anish,I am not meant for you,” she said.

“Monik ! I am extremely sorry and please take that painting back,” I pleaded.

“Sorry Anish! many things have happened in this long 7 years,” she said and screamed “Ayushiiiii!!!,”

“Momma!Momma,” a girl of 4 came running towards her.

Tears trickled down my eyes as I learned that she was married. I turned aside to see the other paintings as she left.

I wiped the tears from my eyes.I waited for 7 long years to know that she was married .She was and she would be the color of my life.

“Sir,I need that painting,” I said to Tanmai.

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Word count:499 To read un edited version click here

The Incomplete Love Saga!

** Posted on behalf of Rashi!

She sat alone today where they sat together. This was their place where they shared all their secrets. They had met here. They had met when both of them had loved and lost. They supported each other in ways that no1 could understand. They laughed together and comforted when the other one cried. Together, they shared a bond that they themselves couldn't understand.

One day, she was on her way to meet him and she realized her broken heart hurt no more. She wasn't numb as before and she could feel. More importantly, she once again felt love. Friendship that had slowly evolved into love without her ever knowing it. The realization had to be shared. She had to tell that he had broken her shell, broken her resolve of never loving, of never giving her heart away, of becoming vulnerable once again. She reached their place. She saw him standing there, radiant as ever. There was something in the way the moonlight bounced off his face. Was it a smile that she saw on his face? Or was it her happiness that she could see on his face? She went up to him and hugged him and surprisingly, he hugged her back tightly too. Does he feel the same too? Hope and confusion in her heart.

He looked at her and said, " I need to tell you something." She smiled. He continued, " I have decided enough is enough. I know I cant get those years of my life back again. I need to move on. I have decided to take my life back. I know I can never love again but atleast I can live again."

She looked on, unsure of whether to be happy or to be sad. Never love again? Unknowingly, tears welled in her eyes. He took her face in his hands and pacified her. She decided it is best she not tell him of how she felt. He didn't need that now. Maybe one day, maybe some day.

Today, she sits here alone. Knowing not whether to be happy that he is living or sad that he isn't loving her.


PS: I know I have been away. But, I read this contest and just had to post. I have always been a part of everything that happens on the Lounge and I just couldn't not post. This isn't for the contest. This is just for all to know that I am here reading you always. Silently but surely. I feel exactly like story away from Lounge but I need that break and I hope when I come back, I will find the same Lounge that I love so much!

A special shout out to Kajal, Happy Belated Birth day girl! I did remember. How could I not remember a fellow Virgo's birth day?

Cricket Quiz - 4


The cricket Quiz will be posted every Friday and the answers to the quiz must be sent to me via email (christopherdavid007@gmail.com) on or before Wednesday. Therefore the last day for this quiz is 9th of September. Please write in the subject cricket quiz.

The answers will be published every Friday with another set of questions along with the winners of previous quiz.
Answers to Cricket Quiz - 3.

1.) Against which team did Sehwag make his debut as captain in tests?
Sri Lanka at Ahmedabad in 2005 -2006


2.) Who made a score of fifty or more (50+ runs) in nine consecutive ODI's for Pakistan?
Javed Miandad - 1987


3.) Which player has the magical match figures 19-90 (19 wickets for 90 runs)?
Jim Laker of England in 1956 at Manchester against Australia.


4.) Name the bowler who took a hat-trick against Kenya in the 2003 World Cup?
Brett Lee


5.) Name this bowler [In the Picture].
Sir Richard John Hadlee


The Winner(s) of the Quiz are, Deepak Balamurali, and Kirby Meehan.
- Congrats.


This weeks questions are,

1.) Name the first bowler to take 600 test wickets.

2.) Which two batsman share the most ODI century opening partnership?

3.) Which ground hosted the first ever international test match?

4.) In 2004 which batsman set a World Record with 497 test runs between dismissals?

5.) Name this bowler,[HINT - He played for Northamptonshire].


Poshin's World Cricket Quiz Score Board,
1.) Deepak Balamurali - 3 Points
2.) Kirby Meehan - 2 Points
3.) Armaan Ahmed, Stephen and Vikas Yadav - 1 Point


Moon can feel her pain

She was reading her bed time novel when Nupur's phone started vibrating. Avinash was calling. It was 12.35 in the night! “Hi avi! Kya hua? Itni raat ko... ??? neeni nahi aa rahi kya?”,she said giggling.

“look Nupz, majaak mat udaao yaar... tumhe pata hai na kitni tension hai... !!” he replied in a firm straight voice, expecting sympathy and concern from her, which she hardly got ever.

“oh god Mr Romeo, did you proposed her or not? I made you learn the lines na! Just call her up and be a man, show some god damn courage you Idiot”, she was still giggling.

“had it been you, it would have been so so easy, gosh! Just as Neha picks up the phone, I forget everything... even my name.” he was sounding low!

“look Avi, I think since last 2 years, you have eaten my god damn head over this girl, I think you should go for it tonight, she is your good friend now too and keep telling me how much she adores and respects you all the time... just tell her what you feel for her.” she replied with the same calmness and compassion with which Nupur had been dealing with Avinash for past 8 years.

“aur waise bhi... har ladki ka sapna hoga ki tum jaisa padka usse miley...” she said in a low tone and took a breath.

Avi kept the phone down. She smiled again and resumed her novel, muttering to herself... “pagal hai ye ladka.”

Avi and Nupz were best friends since school days, then college and now professional buddies, have faced so many ups and downs but were always there for each other.

Tee tee – tee tee, her phone started beeping again, she read a text message which was from Avi.

“I just proposed her, she said Yes :) wanted me to marry her soon. I am shocked, numb, thrilled and everything else that I can't express in words”. She called him up. “mubarak ho mr romeo, koi ladki bechari bewkoof ban hi gayi finally”, she said and started giggling again. “Nupz, tum kabhi toh serious hua karo yaar”, he said smiling. He was happy. She was happy because he was happy. “acha ab phone rakho, mujhe mere best friend se baat karni hai”,she said.

“haan haan jao, kal milte hain, tumhe pata hai waise... You are the best, I repeated exactly same lines to her what you told me to, I still dont know How you understand my emotions, more then I understand them, You are the best thing that ever happened to me, ab chane k jhaad pe mat chado...ahem ahem! Jyada ho gaya”, he said this and with voice of laughs, his tone faded away to single beep on phone line.

She opened her room and went out in the garden, she looked up! Moon stared from above. Seemed as if tears were shedding from cheeks of moon and moon light is carrying them and settling them on her eyelids. Her eyelids were wet. Her eyes were red. She cried. “only you knew that I loved him beyond all limits for all these years, I wish I would have agreed to your advice of letting him know about it”,”I wish... I wish...”

she came back running. Stormed into her pillow and busted to tears. She picked up a piece of paper and wrote on it the following lines from a text message which she had learn...

“Zindagi se humne kuch chaha hi nahi

chaha jise bhi usse kabhi paya hi nahi

jise paya usse kuch yun kho diya

jaise Zindagi mein kabhi koi aaya hi nahi”


she opened the window of her room and threw that paper up in the sky, peeping her one hand out. The air blows of chill, carried them up above, some where towards her best friend, the moon. Few minutes later, it rained, it rained as if the moon was crying, it rained as if its every droplet covered the beauty of her selfless true love. She looked up to the moon and allowed the raindrops to splash on her forehead. She smiled.




September 3, 2009

Reflections











What do you think of when you are on your own on a moonlit night?

Stories from childhood,

Forgotten and lost dreams,

Or of the grimness of the night?

What do you see when you see the pale moon?

The face of a love lost,

A teardrop in the pillow of night,

Or the light unhidden by the scars?

What does the tide tell you?

About rising expectations,

Simmering dreams,

Or about the ebb that might follow?

Why are you alone gazing at the moon?

To sigh at the beauty,

To weave new dreams,

Or to reflect on all that has gone and will come?

Word count - 106

P.S. Cannot call it proper poetry, nor is it prose, just thinking aloud I guess :-)

The Last Flood


The flood was bloody. And so was the aftermath. It has been a couple of days, since the silent river rose, roared and ruined the village. The time was frightening and was long lived – enough to engulf the whole village. The life-giving river that used to provide the villagers food and water became a monster that night, and ate up its own children. The tides rose above the banks and swallowed crops, cattle, trees, huts and everything else that beautified and glorified the village.

It left behind Mili alone, the daughter of the village milkman. She was away, at other end of the village, collecting blueberries for the market, next day. She was late and it was raining incessantly; she thought of spending the night with her ailing grandmother. She lived there and she lives to witness the repercussions of the flood that devastated her family, her village and all her dreams overnight!

She remembers the day when she first went to school. Her mother accompanied her till the river. She took a handful of water and sprinkled it all over Mili and asked her to take its blessings, since it was her first steps into a new life. She never knew then that the river would one day, do such grotesque a thing to wipe out the very village that worshipped and considered it their mother.

Mili walked by the bank of the river over the stones and pebbles towards the place where her house used to be, just the other day. She looked up – the moon was like a big aluminum plate, they used to eat on. The river was silent again, but the water in it was rushing downhill like never before. She never saw such haste in the river water. She wanted to ask them where they were going – after sullying her life. They seemed to speed through just to avoid her questions. She cried for the entire day – her tear buds were frozen and out of tears. She cried no more.

She reached the place and looked around – there is no sign of any inhabitance anywhere. Only the vestiges of the mud walls stayed to prove that there were people staying here. She walked among those broken walls and could find nothing but sand and trails of silt and shrubs that the water carried. There was nothing left to cry on or to call home!

It started to rain again. A sudden thought made her cold: is the water hastening to create similar mayhem in the other end of the village, where her grandmother was staying? She got scared! She looked back and ran over the stony riverbank. Her feet bleed but she never stopped but sped as if she was competing with the stream. As soon as she reached grandmother’s hut she ran in and hugged the shivering old woman. She asked, “What happened, Mili? Why did you come back?” Mili whispered in her ears, “Nothing Granny. Everything is all right – everything is silent!”



[Word Count: 500]

Moonie... help me... please



I was stood on the rocks and stared at the moon which was glowing in the dark, cloudy sky.
"My friend, there is a problem. What is it?" the moon asked me.
"Moonie, she ran away..."
The moon didn't say anything for a bit. Then he started whispering to a group of clouds who were surrounding him. A few seconds later, the clouds arranged to form an arrow pointing to the left.
"I don't know who ran away, dear. But something inside me is telling me, go left."

I smiled at the moon. Poor thing was trying to help me. How can I believe the moon? I mean, he's not supposed to speak! Why is he speaking? Let alone to me, a random girl who's beloved cat ran away! Oh my god. I've lost my mind. I'm crazy! Take me to a mental hospital...

"Please. Go left."
"Why?" I said, confused.
"Something is there. Something which can help you." the moon said happily.
"What's there? Tell me. Please." I said softly, tears brimming in my eyes.

"Go there yourself. Trust me. Something is there."

The next day
I stood back on the rocks like I had did yesterday. Obviously the moon was not there. I remembered what he had said... go left. I went left, looking around as I paced carefully. Suddenly I spotted a pawprint and gasped. A few yards away, Softy, my lil cat lay lifeless on the cold path.
Word count: 242
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September 2, 2009

..mera chand..


main sochti thi har waqt guzarne ki
uske saath jo asmaan par baitha
sitaron ke beech muskurata rahta hai
main chahti thi un sitaron ko jalane ki
jo gurur karte hai uske saath hone ka
phir kya tha ek din puch hi liya
"kya kuch pal guzar sakte ho mere saath"
woh shauk se chala aya mere paas
aur jab sitron ka gurur tordne ke liye
aasman ki ore dekha to hairan ho gayi
dekh kar us viran andhere ko
manno khamosh sa ho gaya ho sab
jin sitaron se jalti thi main
woh andheri wadiyon main ghum ho gaye
main bahut dhuki hui
yeh dekh kar woh bola
"kyon khush nahi pakar mujhe"
bheegi palkein utha kar main boli
"jab tum wahan par thee
hazaron sitare tumhari roshni main
timtimate the muskurate the
aur main samajti thi itraate hai
jalate hai mujhe,par aaj jana
apni khushi ke liye maine
hazaro ko ruswa kar diya
jaoo..tum wapas jaoo
main to zameen par rehkar bhi
tumhari hi roshini main rahungi
par agar tum yahan rahee
to yeh sitare gumrah ho jayenege"
yeh sun kar woh muskurate hue
un sitaron ke beech pahuch gaya
aur uskte jaate hi hazaro sitare
phir se sharmate hue apni ankhein
khole saare asmaan par chaa gaye
abb main bhi us chand par naaz karti hu
uske anchal main simte
har sitare par naaz karti hu
naaz karti hu us roshini par
jo har raat is asmaan ko roshan kar deti hai

words count:243

Waiting



I wait..
I wait for you..
In this eerie moonlight
thinking of you..
Didn't you say?
you miss me too?
Why you are not here?
Why is it me alone?
I feel depressed in this cold wintry night
if you think this is romantic
you are not very bright!!

Shraddha@theselfloveproject

my moonlight love :)






Moonlight shines upon your face
I gaze into your eyes
My heart begins to skip a beat
As I begin to realize

You bring to me a feeling
Which I have never felt before
A feeling of contentment
Happiness and more

I will always be beside you
Be your friend and lover
I promise you this day
There will never be another

Because we were meant to be
And that is without a doubt
I never knew what love was
Or what it was all about

And then you walked into my life
And showed me what I was missing
Truly you were sent from above
Only God could create such a blessing


word count 113

September 1, 2009

The good people


“what does that picture look like, it’s pretty though.”
“Maybe if the girl turns around it would be scary”
“You and your weird jokes”
“Maybe I am even wrong about the sex , hehe”
“You are the king of weird, maybe the person who made it must meet you, give all views and angles to his work”
“Nah! It’s pretty as it is, maybe some things should be the way they are”
“Like us, we will always be just friends?”
“What’s wrong in that?”
“There’s nothing wrong it’s just that with age things should mature too, like a relationship”
“Ok, I’ll read out fountainhead to you instead of champak while making love”
“That’s all you think about”
“But I am good at it, hehe”
“You and your stupid hehe”
“hehe”

word count-130

..bcoz...


continued from Riya Rocks post

She was fuming with intense anger,her eyes puffed with countless tears.She bent down and picked up a stone from ground and threw brutally in the sky,straight at the face of sparkling moon,hidden behind the hazy clouds in the dark blue sky.
"Why me....",she burst into tears with unendurable pain,fall on the ground,lie there lifeless weeping for the long hours.Her screams echoed on the solitary sea shore until no one responded.Her tears hit the rocks and shattered into thousand of pieces.Her life was strangling at that deserted land and there above in the vast sky,moon gazed with wistful eyes and mysterious smile,because he knew,what she thought was the finale,actually was the dawn of one of the most glorious and opulent sunshine.

P.s. We always tear apart at these moment but we never realize that life always has stock of best things for us in future until and unless it arrives and then we understand that everything happens for a good reason.I could not hold back my words that's why I continued your post Riya,I hope you won't mind.

words count: 175
 
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