September 22, 2009
WHATS LEFT OF ME..!
I stand alone on this bridge,
Waiting for this lightning to strike.
To find you walking with someone else,
To see you sharing your smiles with everybody else.
I wonder if you can hear me moan,
Writhing inside with this pain of letting you go.
Oh! Baby, Don’t you see.?
I am dying a little inside everyday.
I wonder whats left of me..
Our sweet whispers lay scattered on my pillow,
My memory slowly turning into a dark hollow.
With my soul tearing apart,
I close my eyes and open them back,
To discover my blue skies turned grey with your depart.
My mind turned into an eroding barren land,
My sanity extinguished with a gushing wind.
The wind just passes by,
And it tells me you seem to enjoy your every moment going around hand in hand.
I wish I could revert the wind,
back to you,
To let you know,
I am going through hell,
Thinking about you with somebody else.
I wish I could revert the wind,
And let you know I miss your sweet talks,
Our vision for that future I used to stock
Our stolen moments of joy.
I wish you could see...
Of whats left of me..!
Your very own Alice in Wonderland..! I am curious by nature and I plan to live my life to the fullest. I am a mystery yet to be uncovered, So till then pull a chair and experience : Rashmi..! I am sure you wont be disappointed..!
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Wow! Poignant!
ReplyDeleteHi Dude ! I am from Nagpur ! what happened ? U from Nagpur too kya ?
ReplyDeletedude? Nagpur? comments come here duh!!
ReplyDeletenice poem rashmiji but i hope u write about something else than broken love too...something new!
I wish i could write so brilliantly..
ReplyDeleteA very good write up... But I agree with Abhrajit, why don't you try your hand at writing something different??
ReplyDeleteAnd where does Nagpur come in to this?? I mean, why here?? Duh!
ReplyDelete@ Dev...hunh..???
ReplyDelete@ Aarthi and Abhri..
well I have been told this by so many people..But i realised that this is what i derive my inspirtion from..
not that i am a sad and depressed person..( u guys know that)
its just that this is my genre..
but i will try and write somthing new as well...
and i am not some dev dasini...
One word: Lovely!
ReplyDeleteFantastic..:-)..You said you're not a depressed person..This is your genre..Not feeling something and still carrying it off so well is something which is completely genius..Hats off to you..:-)
ReplyDelete@ Amar...who said Not feeling a thing..?
ReplyDeleteThis is defnitly from the "feeling"..i cant carry off a poem without an inspiration..and this was way long ago..and this was just some past renderings..
Oh..I'm so extremely sorry..That was really dumb of me..
ReplyDeleteoh how life ,could open up to give fresh start ,to love ,share our lives as we both know and believed it should been ,I been trying get back to you ,
ReplyDeletethe days turned to months
now my heart weeps ,as I can't feel you ,near as always held .
I am scared
I never wanted ,you out my life ,Listen to many things ,you speak of me .
maybe I've loss
A Truth that beats with my own Heart ,will be
You
Two Fools that kept pushing each other away
Two fools ,that wouldn't pick up a phone ,or talk
two fools ,with a smile
Let go
rest our lives
those two fools
will always feel those beats of
"our hearts "
wiping away my Tears ,Screaming with my complete Soul to be Heard
I Love You
My Dreams ,you will always be ,maybe in life ,couldn't be together ,as I would gave
was no one that was there to Listen
Was always there ,to fix me
Was none that accepted ,after hearing truth
there was many that was there to Judge
As ,it must of seemed ,my heart ,felt nothing
as must seemed things I done ,was heartless
dreams ,you shall be ,with me that ,holds no judging ,only accepting ,with love ,we always knew
Pray ,
You hear my Heart
Hear my Prayer
washed with tears
take me with you