Twisted Chooriyan...

(Sincere apologies for posting this rubbish... but just could'nt resist myself... !!)

Tooti chooriyan lekar baithi thi haath mein,
Jab aaya kahi se woh raat mein,
Aansu poche mere aur kaha,
“Roti ho kyon, main hoon naa saath mein!”

“Aa teri chooriyan judva doon,
Inko fevicol se chipka doon,
Ya kahe to tere liye,
Unbreakable chooriyan banva doon?”

“Paise ki tangi hai aaj kal,
Kaanch ki chooriyan, pehna naa kar,
Toot jaayegi jo fir ye chooriyan,
Nayi chooriyan naa de paoonga lakar!”

“Utaar phenk ye chooriyan,
Hai hamara pyaar ek atoot bandhan,
La badha de ab apni kalai,
Pehna doon tujhe sone ke kangan!!”

nayi chooriyan

usko chooriyan bahut bhaati hain,
naye naye rang ki choriyan
woh roz hi khareedti hai.

sambhal kar unhe le jaati hai,
sabhi chooriyon ko chamka kar
indar dhanush si dibbe me rakhti hai,

kabhi chooriyan uski jaan thi,
unke rang chamak aur uski kalai
me khanak,yeh uski pehchaan thi.

aaj kalai uski maang ki tarah sooni hai,
par chooriyan vo fir bhi ikatthi kart hai,
kyonki uski jaan ab uski beti me basti hai.

Previous poems on choriyan to be read here

Choriyan! (the journey continues)

It is an answer to what pratz wrote. She said.. chooriyan

CHOORIYAN!

Mujhe ik bar phir,
Yadon ki nagri main,
Janay ka hukum mila,
Main ne tooti chori nikali,
Rakht-e-safar ko bandha,
Dhaltay suraj ko gawah bana,
Main us dais main ja utra,
Jahan haseen pal kuch bitaye thay,
Kuch roop suhanay dikhay thay,
Us raat ki sari narmi phir,
Ankhon main aj utri thi,
Jis raat sitaare roshan thay,
Main ne jab uski kalai thami thi,
Phr chooriyan main ne pehnai theen,
jo saaz ki manind bajti raheen,
Wo raat suhani kitni thi,
Main sooch main ussi ki doba tha,
K pass chori walay k wo nazar ayi,
Meri ankhain utheen phr hileen,
Rokeen phr tehr gayeen,
Usay kitnay rooz bad aj daikha tha,
Ankhon k rastay dil main utartay,
Najanay kitnay pal beetay,
K uski nazron ne mjhe ghaira,
Mera bandha hisar tora,
Wo taiz dorti ojhal hoi,
Magar main ye daikhta kaise,
Usay rookta kaisa,
K mere dehan main to bas,
Wo do nazuk khali kalayan theen,
Wo kiun aj khali theen?
Kia mere hijr main aisa tha?
Main to ye samjhta tha,
K usay aj bhi choriyan achi lagti hain!

-illusiOn~

Guys I guess I have heaten up the battle here "chooriyan" fever is on hope you guys are enjoying urdu/hindi poems here. Your comments are especial for all of us.. Please do comment though there is no race here I bet all are best on their own work! Enjoy~

One thing more please do keep labels same so that we can easily relate the poems.. Hope no one will mind that :D

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Choodiyan aur Rishte

“Chand choodiyon ke intezaar me
Paagal roye rehti hai
Hasti khelti thi pehle
Jane kyun ab khoyi rehti hai

Har subah sadak pe
Sooraj ki laali jab chaati hai
Nange pawn wahan ye
Khoyi si Daudi jaati hai

Sheher ke simt tikaye nazren
Jaane Kisko khoja karti hai
Har aati bus se utarte logon me
ek jaana chehra dhundha karti hai

bikharne ke baad bhid logon ki
ek udaas aansu gaalo pe therta hai
Fir unhi Bheegi jhuki aankhon se
Sooni kalaiyan taka karti hai

Kuch soch wahi palken utha ke
Fir wahi simt dekha karti hai
Chand chudiyon ki intezaar me
Paagal roye rehti hai”

“ kuch gehre khayaalon me
din bhar khoya rehta hai
chand tooti choodiyon ko
akele me chooma karta hai

jab aur log ghanti sunne pe
khaane ko jaaya karte hain
ye kuch note roz mod k
ek dibbe me jama karta hai

Guzarte waqt bazaar se
Roz wahi gali tham jaata hai
Rangeen choodiyon ko pyaar se
Dekhe jaye jata hai

Ek chehra fir ankhon pe
Kuch der theher jaata hai
Saabut choodiyan ka rang use
Zeher sa chubha jaata hai

Dobaara Fri kuch soch ke
Who note gina karta hai
chand tooti choodiyon ko
akele me chooma karta hai”

**You can say this is in response to Illusions and Prats post or may be it's extension but please don't compare me with them..i am new to hindi poetry..correct me ..where i am wrong.

Chooriyan

Inspired by Insi's poem Tooti chooriyan

rangon bhari chooriyan
mujhko sadaa se pyaari thi
kaanch ki ya laakh ki
inki har adaa lagti nyaari thi.

us roz vo mere liye
kaanch ki chooriyan laya
meri kalai ko chooma
aur naazon se pehnaya.

har choori ne jo mujhe chooya,
dil uske saath bandh gaya
us din sahi maayne me
chooriyon se mera naata ban gaya.

par jab juda hone ka waqt aaya
chooriyon ne dil ha haal jahir kiya
main to chup rehna chahti thi,
par vo toot gain,aur dard zahir kiya.

hum dono roye,main dard ke bahaane,
aur vo mere dard ke liye roya
har choori jo toot kar giri,
aisa laga maine usko hi kho diya.

aaj bhi main uske intezaar me
raah par nazar tikaye baithi hoon,
vo fir aayega mere liye chooriyaan lekar
aisi ummed me haath soone rakhe rehti hoon.

kise ye samjhaaon man ki baat,
Chooriyaan aaj bhi mere ko bhaati hain
par nahi pehanti unko aaj kal main
kyonki vo us aakhri raat ki yaad dilati hain.

Tooti Choriyan! (Bangles)

Tooti Choriyan! (Bangles)

Wo kehti thi choriyan,
usko pyari hain,
nazakat ki alamat hain,
Sharm o haya k paikar ki,
Dilfaraib zarorat hain,
So is bar main ne ussay,
Kuch kanch ki choriyan pehnain,
Labon se choom k hathon ko,
Uski khusboo dil main basai,
Magar bichartay waqt ye hoa k,
Main janay ko mura to,
Unhi choriyon ne uski,
Nazuk kalai ko zakhmi kar dala,
main madad ko bhara magar behtay khoon ne,
Mjhe rooka mjhe tooka,
so main uski ik toti chori uthayaye chal dia,
aj bhi aksar main jab yadon k dais jata hon,
wo toti chori saath nikal leta,
Unhi zakhmon se khoon rasta,
mehsos karta hon,
Mjhe ab choriyan achi naheen lagteen,
k ye toot jain to dil ki manind,
Zakhum ghaira deti hain,
Par shayed usay ab bhi,
Choriyan achi lagteen hon!

- illusiOn~

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