Life would have been different
If we were Together
I would have been livin my life
But You left me, and i forgot to breathe
Looking back all i get is a tear
Wish you were here very near
groaning at the wickedness of my fate
I realise Now its too late
waking up with wet eyes i miss you !
Wish i never would have met you
Deep scar in my heart is not healed
The evil side of you is revealed
I hate you, as much as i love you
I cry at night thinking of you
Losing you was part of the game
For you played it so lame
My love for you is pure, i cry no more
For you will stay in my heart forever
As the Star fall down, i wish for you
My heart silently whispers *I MISS YOU*
lovely heartfelt lines there..
ReplyDeletethat was one very involving post!
ReplyDeleteloved the expression :)
@Pink
ReplyDeleteThanx dear :)
@Pulkit
ReplyDeleteThanx dear.. :)
Beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThe many evils of love ;)
ReplyDeleteI loved these lines...
"I would have been livin my life
But You left me, and i forgot to breathe "
I love this kinda poetry. So must say, it was a nice one :)
touching!
ReplyDeleteBut im hoping this is fiction.
smiles
Amzing !!
ReplyDeleteI just love silent whispers:D
ReplyDeleteheartfelt lines
ReplyDeletewhispered silently
to the little heart
that was livin in silence
despair and angst...deadly combo for poetry always:)
ReplyDeletegood one!!!
I never wish to miss him.. But, he finds way to miss me..
ReplyDeleteNice post girl:)
shhh!!!!!1
ReplyDeletei can hear ur heart whispering
hahaha.....girl.. .u rock.....really awesome
My heart silently whispers *I MISS YOU*
ReplyDeletemy heart drooped at these lines...lovely...
@Migz
ReplyDeleteThanx honey :)
@R
ReplyDeleteThanx dear !
Me too love black, emotional poetry.. I make sure the reader identifies oneself wit whateva i write :p
@Pisku
ReplyDeleteI might say its a fiction or i might jus confess tat somewhere someone might have felt it.. It could be me or it could be someone else.. :p
@Hashan
ReplyDeleteThanx dear :)
Glad u love silent whispers, but be alert u might jus miss her whispers ! :p
@Yamini
ReplyDeleteThanx dear :)
@Numb
ReplyDeleteThanx dear :)
@Princess
ReplyDeleteHey doz r sweet lines.. N wateva u said is true. :)
@Solitary
ReplyDeleteThanx dude :)
Ya i agree i ROCK ! LoL :p
@Me
ReplyDeleteThanx a ton honey :)
i juz luved dis post dear....
ReplyDeletetouching....
these lines.... a perfect starter, no doubt
"Life would have been different
If we were Together
I would have been livin my life
But You left me, and i forgot to breathe...."
u keep rockin hon. Kudos...!
@vil
ReplyDeleteAwwwww ! M sooo damn happy..
chooo chweeeeeet of u..
Thanx hon For all d support.. :)
hmm! how'd i miss this brilliant read? :O
ReplyDeletedonno! sorry! :)
u write so well vasudha!
LeO
ReplyDeleteThanx a ton dear :)
God's grace