agar pyaar na Nibha paye
Gustakhi na samajhna
agar dosti bhi na nibha paye
Bas itna jaan lena -
Jitni pyaar tumse kari thi
Na kabhi ki hai na hi kar payenge
Chodkar chale agar raah humari
Mudkar zaroor dekha kariye
Kabhi hum Yaad Aaye
To Is Mohabbat ki Kadar Zaroor Kijiye!!
Waah Sheena, it was beautiful.. appreciate the feelings hidden behind these lines..
ReplyDeletethese were very emotional!
ReplyDeletenice sheena
ReplyDeletethis was lines direct from heart
@ Kajal, Pulkit & Chirag
ReplyDeleteThanks Guys..
WOW! Beautiful lines. I could never write anything like that even if I wanted to. Funny thing love is :)
ReplyDeleteMan baavdi baavdi Buj sa laage ??!!:P
ReplyDeleteON a serious note..!!Seriously very good! ek dum open heart surgery kar di aapne!
keep it up
lovely lines ;D
ReplyDelete@ Ms.R,
ReplyDeleteI agree Love is Funny..
@ Rohan
"Man baavdi baavdi Buj sa laage ??" Iska ke matlab hai?? Socho, open heart surgery ekdam free of cost, aisa aur kahan milega :D ;)
@ Hashan
Thanks Dude..
beautiful feeling..!!!
ReplyDeletenice lines:)
ReplyDelete@ Yamini & Saim,
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in and your comments.
ahh!!!!
ReplyDeletedelightful!!
reading one of the best hindi poem in recent times.....it expresses a gamut of emotions and feelings frm the girls Persp
gud
welcome to WL,
from Ste:)
@ Ste,
ReplyDeleteWoh! Have been trying to reach you (your blog) wanting to figure out who Ste is..
My curiousity was aroused because I kept seeing your name but din't know your blog name.
oh
ReplyDeletewww.thesolitarywriter.blogspot.com
thats my blog...
me one of the cofounder of WL
others r sandeep and Asbah :)
hope u have a good time here.:)
simple and brilliant! likd it, Sheena! :)
ReplyDelete@ Thanks buddy :D
ReplyDeletesheena great...very simple but yet so deep...
ReplyDelete@ I, Me & Myself (Sorry don't know your name)
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by
beautiful! :)
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