अगर तू मुझको पढ़ रही है, तो मुझसे ज्यादा खुश और कोई नहीं... ये महफिल तेरी सजाई हुई है... ये रौशनी तेरी की हुई है, ये आलम तेरा किया हुआ है... तू कहती है मैं भूल जून - तू कहती है मैं पास न आयुं... लेकिन मैं जून भी तो कहाँ जाऊँ? हर गली तेरी घर से होके गुज़रती है... हर रास्ता तेरे रस्ते से जुर जाती है... दिल कहता है के मैं तुझे भरी महफिल में रुसवा कर जाऊँ, और तू कहती है के मैं चुप ही रहूँ... बेबसी, नाकामी और तेरी याद मुझे सोने नहीं देती... मैं भटकता रहता हूँ उन्ही गलियों में, जहाँ से कभी तू गुज़रा करती थी...
तेरे बिन ना जीना है ना मरना,
बिन तेरे ना है एक पग भी चलना
तेरे बिना सुना है आलम सारा,
बीते दिन ना आएंगे लौट के दोबारा
वो बीते दिन क्यों याद आये,
पल पल मुझको तेरी ही याद सताये
शयेद कभी तुझे भी हम याद आयें
तेरे बिन सुनी है मेरी दिलकी वो राहें
बिन तेरे ना है एक पग भी चलना
तेरे बिना सुना है आलम सारा,
बीते दिन ना आएंगे लौट के दोबारा
वो बीते दिन क्यों याद आये,
पल पल मुझको तेरी ही याद सताये
शयेद कभी तुझे भी हम याद आयें
तेरे बिन सुनी है मेरी दिलकी वो राहें
beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pulkit...
ReplyDeletetrying to read this with great difficulty.. any possibility of translating it to english.. id love to read it fast.
ReplyDeleteHmmm.... that would take some time and will be more like a Data Entry work that I dislike most...
ReplyDeleteany volunteers?? :P
No issues, managed to read it now, lovely, reminds me of a song tere bina..
ReplyDeleteRosh, are you talking about the song :TERE BINA, by Abhijeet Sawant?
ReplyDeleteWell if that’s the song, let me tell you that this is my favorite number. This was presented to me by someone who loves me. And from that time, I have heard it some… hmm… million times!! I just like that song…
Sorry, if its not the same one which you mentioned
Tan it is the same song.. i love it too, cant say ive heard it a million times. and i did get the joke.. FAN AND HOT..:)
ReplyDeleteI was sure you would get that - for you are a far better reader... thanks for all the support and encouragement ...
ReplyDeleteI am happy that its the same song we talked about... isnt it wonderful?
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ReplyDeletethat's fantastic TAN
ReplyDeletekya baat hai lajawab composition
this 4 lines from my side
"vo mil jaate hain kahani bankar,
dil me bas jate hain nishani bankar,
jinahe hum rakhte hain apani aankho main,
kyo nikal jaate hain paani bankar"
Deewana... Is all I can think of, after reading this post.. :)
ReplyDeletebarhiya hai Tan :) I always inspired by you sirjee.. will come up with something like this.. mur hindi bor beya kintu ;P
ReplyDeletetan, can u plz increase the font size of this? its so difficult to read for me! :(
ReplyDeletei know its beautiful because of all these compliments above, but i want to read it too!
nice one...but i think the font size matters here...!!!
ReplyDeleteits dificult to read such small letters..!!!
Thanks Chirag... those were wonderful lines... thanks again :)
ReplyDeleteZendegi
ReplyDeleteThanks for the WORD... it defines me a lot... but mostly, I remain so for wrong reasons... and hence, so much so!
Hashan
ReplyDeleteDo write... mur Hindi o tenekai bhai.. moy try koriyasu ... tumi o kora... likhte likhte love ho jayega... ;)
Vinay and Yamini
ReplyDeleteI did not know about the font. I just posted it as it was - I think I need to increase the font size. I will do it tonight from office, if I get enough time. Thanks for showing interest :)
Well mates, I could not wait myself... here it is with Larger Font Size... Hope you will be able to read it this time... :) :)
ReplyDeletewoww
ReplyDeletebeautiful ... .gr8 bro
yep! now i read properly! :D
ReplyDeleteand yeah it was BEAUTIFUL indeed!
thanks Tan!