Plz read be4... versions from..
My version is only from the Guy's point of view of things after the conversation ....
Where did it all go wrong ?
Was i too much Possessive ? Was I over-controlling ?
I tried to be a good lover. I was a good lover.
I loved every little fragment of her.
Every little glance, every little smile,
every little word out of her lips.
Intense pain now it is, her very lips cursing me.
A year of Love. A year of rift.
Now, minutes into my eternal loneliness,
I think back into our love
Love at first meet.
"How can this be, love so quickly ?" I was dubious
"Love doesn't linger and wait. It seizes without notice" she replied...
She was instinctive... I believed in reasons...
Reason - My heart's mighty foe...
Yet, I fell in love...
How can I, her love deny ?
The alluring angel, staring at my eye.
Thus begun, our journey of love.
Thinking back, now, alone , i get a new perspective on me and my love , she and her love. Our love was mutual, yet not the same. Her's was romantic, head in the clouds passionate and utopian. Mine was down to the earth practical, analytical and always in pursuit for logic.
We were two different people when our love emerged.
We were changed when our love ceased,
Different from our own selves.
In cupid's game of hearts... we were two mis-matched toys.
And we've lost the game even before the game began.
In cupid's game of hearts... we were two mis-matched toys.
ReplyDeleteAnd we've lost the game even before the game began.
could relate to it ! sigh!! only if HE could understand it too !
u writing is lyrical, u have a gift..cheers :)
ReplyDeletei agree with Abhri !!
ReplyDeleteWaaah waaah! Kalakurey Arun!
ReplyDelete"We were two different people when our love emerged.
We were changed when our love ceased, "
Loved these lines when i read it!
@pretty me
ReplyDeleteso it was a story out of ur life .."The conversation"..??
n thanks prats...
@h
ReplyDeletethanks Abhri... very much for ur appreciations...
@Nuchu
ReplyDeletehe he... romba thanks nuchu...
ReplyDelete“In cupid's game of hearts... we were two mis-matched toys.
And we've lost the game even before the game began”
“two mis-matched toys”-maybe is what everyone may agree. But doesn’t anyone remember the saying “FAMIALARITY BREEDS CONTEMPT?”.so don’t you think that even some are mismatched, they can still be together or the difference in them makes every day something new to discover??
Whatever said,life thrives on one funda-COMPROMISE.sometimes both couples have to or one might’ve to. That’s only because that LOVE makes them to do it. Moreover true love is what as someone said is like a ghost-heard everywhere, but not seen by anyone!!..So it will be foolishness if one decides to walk away from it..
now read mine shortly!!
ReplyDeleteexceptionally well written!
ReplyDeletereminds me that compatibility is very essential in relationships
keep writing wonderful posts like these
no dear .. the conversation was not real .. it was oure imaginary ... something which will never happen ... but the other posts talk something similar to my tryst with love !
ReplyDelete@bard it looks like you are forcing your conclusions :)
ReplyDeletewe are just entitled to opine right?
a fool in ur eye can be a sage in other's
cheers...
@Aparna
ReplyDeletethanks so much...
happy to see u u in lounge once again..
n i will keep writing..
@bard
ReplyDeleteThats a great outlook... very optimistic... n practical... Its kinda my outlook on love n life..
This version by me is just the Guy consoling himself after his lost love... :-)