June 16, 2009

A conversation

They met an year after the breakup.

"Did you ever miss me"
"Just for a few months.."
"And then you found someone else?"
"No... I stopped missing people."
"Don't tell me that.. You can't do that"
"Its upto you to beleive... I am not going to convince you like before"
"But you said people rarely change"
"Did you not change?"
"In what way ? I still love you"
"Yes, you might still love me.. but you don't trust me anymore"
"But.."
"but i guess you never did" and she walked off.
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22 comments:

  1. hTuesday, June 16, 2009 2:53:00 PM

    y always sad stories about relationships..y cant things work out..if things are perfect there wont be stories.. so i guess a writer thrives on pain more than happiness. :)

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  2. AnonymousTuesday, June 16, 2009 3:28:00 PM

    i really write when i am in pain .. happiness doesnt make me write about it .. thanks for the read Abhri !!

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  3. ThoorikaTuesday, June 16, 2009 4:15:00 PM

    Trust!! Its really important na.. for any relationship to work out.. !

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  4. AnonymousTuesday, June 16, 2009 4:18:00 PM

    yes Thoorika !! its everything to begin with :)

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  5. hTuesday, June 16, 2009 4:36:00 PM

    trust no one :P

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  6. NyxTuesday, June 16, 2009 5:01:00 PM

    Trust! Sigh!

    Relationship! Sigh!

    God...! I don't find words anymore... such situations have become so common... happens with each and everyone these days! Sigh!!

    :) Nice convo Prats! :)

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  7. AnonymousTuesday, June 16, 2009 5:03:00 PM

    ok Abhri .. I will start following it from you :P

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  8. AnonymousTuesday, June 16, 2009 5:04:00 PM

    @Artz : your comment reminded me of a statememnt i made sm years back .. will write about it some time !!

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  9. hTuesday, June 16, 2009 7:31:00 PM

    wow u remember a statement an year old :O aap shank pushpi lete ho kya memory ke liye? :D

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  10. hasHAN hazaRIKATuesday, June 16, 2009 8:45:00 PM

    :(

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  11. "THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"Tuesday, June 16, 2009 8:57:00 PM

    its said that at times, too much trust isn’t adviced!!.. as that trust is mistook as freedom and misused..

    anyways, interesting views PRETTY ;)

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  12. AnonymousTuesday, June 16, 2009 8:59:00 PM

    why does a bad incident make us wonder if things were bad from the very start?

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  13. MaverickTuesday, June 16, 2009 9:01:00 PM

    nice one Prats....a very touching nd interaction portrayed by you....masterclass as always! likd it! :)

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  14. Arun KumarTuesday, June 16, 2009 9:20:00 PM

    Short , sharp n slappin at his face...
    nice write...

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  15. AnonymousWednesday, June 17, 2009 12:07:00 AM

    @abhri : you.... GL !!

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  16. AnonymousWednesday, June 17, 2009 12:07:00 AM

    @Hashan : smile dear !! it looks good on u :)

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  17. AnonymousWednesday, June 17, 2009 12:08:00 AM

    @Bard : can u really tie anyone ??

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  18. AnonymousWednesday, June 17, 2009 12:08:00 AM

    @Raash : i agree .. thats a biiig sinking feeling !! :(

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  19. roshwritesWednesday, June 17, 2009 12:33:00 AM

    This is great... it's to the point! Wonderful :D

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  20. The Vitruvian BoyWednesday, June 17, 2009 4:22:00 AM

    loved it.....
    its was serious as well as humourous.... :D

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  21. "THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"Wednesday, June 17, 2009 9:56:00 AM

    hey pretty, u’ve been mailed my ‘analysis’ of the same with a lot of effort.. go thru n reply by EOD!!..

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  22. hWednesday, June 17, 2009 11:33:00 AM

    i think someone needs pot here :P

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