June 16, 2009

A conversation

They met an year after the breakup.

"Did you ever miss me"
"Just for a few months.."
"And then you found someone else?"
"No... I stopped missing people."
"Don't tell me that.. You can't do that"
"Its upto you to beleive... I am not going to convince you like before"
"But you said people rarely change"
"Did you not change?"
"In what way ? I still love you"
"Yes, you might still love me.. but you don't trust me anymore"
"But.."
"but i guess you never did" and she walked off.

22 comments:

  1. y always sad stories about relationships..y cant things work out..if things are perfect there wont be stories.. so i guess a writer thrives on pain more than happiness. :)

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  2. i really write when i am in pain .. happiness doesnt make me write about it .. thanks for the read Abhri !!

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  3. Trust!! Its really important na.. for any relationship to work out.. !

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  4. yes Thoorika !! its everything to begin with :)

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  5. Trust! Sigh!

    Relationship! Sigh!

    God...! I don't find words anymore... such situations have become so common... happens with each and everyone these days! Sigh!!

    :) Nice convo Prats! :)

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  6. ok Abhri .. I will start following it from you :P

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  7. @Artz : your comment reminded me of a statememnt i made sm years back .. will write about it some time !!

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  8. wow u remember a statement an year old :O aap shank pushpi lete ho kya memory ke liye? :D

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  9. its said that at times, too much trust isn’t adviced!!.. as that trust is mistook as freedom and misused..

    anyways, interesting views PRETTY ;)

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  10. why does a bad incident make us wonder if things were bad from the very start?

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  11. nice one Prats....a very touching nd interaction portrayed by you....masterclass as always! likd it! :)

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  12. Short , sharp n slappin at his face...
    nice write...

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  13. @Hashan : smile dear !! it looks good on u :)

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  14. @Raash : i agree .. thats a biiig sinking feeling !! :(

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  15. This is great... it's to the point! Wonderful :D

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  16. loved it.....
    its was serious as well as humourous.... :D

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  17. hey pretty, u’ve been mailed my ‘analysis’ of the same with a lot of effort.. go thru n reply by EOD!!..

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  18. i think someone needs pot here :P

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