Kneeling down on your knees,
You whispered "I Love You".
You walked away swiftly,
leaving me far behind.
I called you,
But you did not turn back.
I Saw your tear drop ,
On a red rose lying on the stone.
I would have replied "I Love You Too",
Only If I was Alive .
wow...very touching...
ReplyDeleteshort n sharp...lovin it...
the flow was nice..the last line was a shocker..
ReplyDeleteArun
ReplyDeleteMy fav topic, but couldn't write.. Short of time :(
Thanx dear..
Pink
ReplyDeleteYea shock for the dark cold night.. :p
Thanx kaju..
Pricked my heart at the end...
ReplyDeleteliked it !! ut again i want to point out, its not a 55 fiction :) a 55 poem maybe ;)
ReplyDeleteGood one dear
ReplyDeleteprincess
ReplyDeleteOuch chowwy for prickin ue tender hert dear :p
But thanx a lot..
Pretty
ReplyDeleteI think no matter wat i wanna write i end up writing poems :p
I ll remove tat tag..
Thanx dear for correcting..
Love
thanks fr accepting it dear !! u write amazing poems neway :)
ReplyDeletewow... that was shocking... I mean... the last line...
ReplyDeleteIt would have been better for 'Teary Wednesday' i feel.. :)
Lovely poem Blossom Blue..
Cheers..!!
Arjun
the last line was shocking.....so sharp...!!!
ReplyDeletearun
ReplyDeletetopic doesn't really matter dear..wat matters for me most is it touched ur heart :)
Thanx a ton
Yamini
ReplyDeletethanx dear.. m glad i shocked u :p
*sniff*
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