May 19, 2009

Red Rose..


Kneeling down on your knees,
You whispered "I Love You".

You walked away swiftly,
leaving me far behind.

I called you,
But you did not turn back.

I Saw your tear drop ,
On a red rose lying on the stone.

I would have replied "I Love You Too",
Only If I was Alive .

15 comments:

  1. wow...very touching...
    short n sharp...lovin it...

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  2. the flow was nice..the last line was a shocker..

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  3. Arun
    My fav topic, but couldn't write.. Short of time :(
    Thanx dear..

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  4. Pink
    Yea shock for the dark cold night.. :p
    Thanx kaju..

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  5. liked it !! ut again i want to point out, its not a 55 fiction :) a 55 poem maybe ;)

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  6. princess
    Ouch chowwy for prickin ue tender hert dear :p
    But thanx a lot..

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  7. Pretty
    I think no matter wat i wanna write i end up writing poems :p
    I ll remove tat tag..
    Thanx dear for correcting..
    Love

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  8. thanks fr accepting it dear !! u write amazing poems neway :)

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  9. wow... that was shocking... I mean... the last line...

    It would have been better for 'Teary Wednesday' i feel.. :)

    Lovely poem Blossom Blue..

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  10. the last line was shocking.....so sharp...!!!

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  11. arun
    topic doesn't really matter dear..wat matters for me most is it touched ur heart :)
    Thanx a ton

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  12. Yamini
    thanx dear.. m glad i shocked u :p

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