May 19, 2009

Chaotic Useless Words

My friends and family are always with me...
Then why did i get lost under the roof of my own house...
All the stars were out at night....
Then why did i cry in the dark...
O heart of mine.. Why did you cry...
Im sorry for giving you away...
But life is all that...
You give your heart..
And you lose your heart...
Just then my crying eyes said...
Theres just this deep sadness in your heart...
All your heart needs is a friend...
A friend he can bleed out to...
He can no longer hold all the sorrow within...
Dear friend..
Just listen to what my heart has to say...
My heart says dont ever be afraid to do what you want..
Things are never easy...
You'll probably will end up alone...
But dont be afraid....
Give it your all...
So there are no regrets in the end...
Even though you'll probably end up crying anyways...

8 comments:

  1. deep, thoughtful, with a message... LPS kudos for writing this one..

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  2. wow...thats intensely written....nice one friend..!!!

    I think this is the best one..!!!

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  3. @LPS : u wrote my story here ..

    Things are never easy...
    You'll probably will end up alone...
    But dont be afraid....
    Give it your all...
    So there are no regrets in the end...
    Even though you'll probably end up crying anyways...


    i live by this mantra !!

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  4. slight repetition, but man o man, you have imagination, needs polishing though.. work on your pieces before you post them here, this is not to offend you, just a friendly suggestion :)

    and also, stick by and keep experimenting here, you'll gradually improve :)


    wishes,
    asbah

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