Soul that was drenched in tears
tears of pain, i only have now
now i feel, why did i ever wait for you
For you i left all those who loved
Loved me and made me special
special times they wanted to see
see me with you, to live in joy
joy of my life, which i wished you to be
Be it for any reason, i am lost
lost in my Dreams in search of you
you never cared alteast to turn back
Back of my window, you have been a dew
Dew of love i wished to see
see in my special man, thats you
you are found a rock at heart
at heart, i still love you
tears of pain, i only have now
now i feel, why did i ever wait for you
For you i left all those who loved
Loved me and made me special
special times they wanted to see
see me with you, to live in joy
joy of my life, which i wished you to be
Be it for any reason, i am lost
lost in my Dreams in search of you
you never cared alteast to turn back
Back of my window, you have been a dew
Dew of love i wished to see
see in my special man, thats you
you are found a rock at heart
at heart, i still love you
i just now got up.. will come back to read this poem when I am in my senses.. :)
ReplyDeleteaww :( love hurts.. i agree!
ReplyDeleteanother loop poem from you, i am learning before i take my take :)
@The pink Orchid
ReplyDeletecome back soon Kajal i am waiting..!!!
@.a.
ReplyDeletethanks dear.....waiting to read you..!!!
Yamini, you write lovely lovely poems.. :D
ReplyDeleteand this was one lovely poem! :D
ReplyDeletewow, u already into chain poems! :) cool re!
ReplyDelete@the pink orchid
ReplyDeletethanks dear..!!
@Pink orchid
ReplyDeletethanks again..!!
@leo
ReplyDeletethanks yaar....WL taught me ..!!
u have mastered loop poetry so well !! good one again :)
ReplyDelete@Pretty Me
ReplyDeletethanks dear...and master??? not better than you yaar...you are the mistress in it..!!!