Well my first attempt at writing a story......
But late publishing.....
Once upon a time in the recent past there were two frinds, a boy and a gal...... They were such close frnds..... The gal used to tell everything to the boy and also the vice versa...... Where ever they went and whatever they did both told each other very frankly..... The two frnds were so close that others were very much jealous about the relationship..... Now let's see the seperate characters of the boy and the gal..... The boy was a gem..... He was so genuine and very decent in all matters..... The gal too was good natured..... She loved the guy soooooo much as a frind to the extent tat she couldn't even pass a day without talking to the guy..... The affection she had was also reciprocated by him..... Now enters a third character inside the happy lives of the two friends..... A character tats gonna demolish their friendship..... Thats 'possessiveness'..... Both became very possessive of each other..... The guy didn't show it outside at all but the gal was expressing her possessiveness..... But at a stage the possessiveness lead to a lot of troubles between the two...... They started fighting with each other...... At last their happiness was lost....., the guy who loved the gal very much came to a conclusion that she'll be happier if he left him..... Though he loved her a lot he hid his feelings and started showing anger towards her..... At a stage the fight became so serious tat the two friends parted their ways..... The guy missed the gal very much but was happy to see tat the gal is happy cos of the anger she had on him...... 'Who gives a damn what she thinks abt me.... She is happy thats enough for me' thought the guy......
But he was wrong...... The gal wasnt angry over him at al....., she thought that the guy startrd hating her nd tat he thinks tat he'll be happy if she leaves him..... Keeping this in mind the gal stopped talking with him......
What a friendship right???
The affection between the guy nd the gal isn't love..... It's just friendship.....
True friendship......
It's a work of fiction...... Any relation with reality is purely coincidental nd not intentional.....
It's my first attempt at story writing...,, so forgive of the story was horrible.....
Story inspired by many movies......
I blog at -->> Its Raining outside
Once upon a time in the recent past there were two frinds, a boy and a gal...... They were such close frnds..... The gal used to tell everything to the boy and also the vice versa...... Where ever they went and whatever they did both told each other very frankly..... The two frnds were so close that others were very much jealous about the relationship..... Now let's see the seperate characters of the boy and the gal..... The boy was a gem..... He was so genuine and very decent in all matters..... The gal too was good natured..... She loved the guy soooooo much as a frind to the extent tat she couldn't even pass a day without talking to the guy..... The affection she had was also reciprocated by him..... Now enters a third character inside the happy lives of the two friends..... A character tats gonna demolish their friendship..... Thats 'possessiveness'..... Both became very possessive of each other..... The guy didn't show it outside at all but the gal was expressing her possessiveness..... But at a stage the possessiveness lead to a lot of troubles between the two...... They started fighting with each other...... At last their happiness was lost....., the guy who loved the gal very much came to a conclusion that she'll be happier if he left him..... Though he loved her a lot he hid his feelings and started showing anger towards her..... At a stage the fight became so serious tat the two friends parted their ways..... The guy missed the gal very much but was happy to see tat the gal is happy cos of the anger she had on him...... 'Who gives a damn what she thinks abt me.... She is happy thats enough for me' thought the guy......
But he was wrong...... The gal wasnt angry over him at al....., she thought that the guy startrd hating her nd tat he thinks tat he'll be happy if she leaves him..... Keeping this in mind the gal stopped talking with him......
What a friendship right???
The affection between the guy nd the gal isn't love..... It's just friendship.....
True friendship......
It's a work of fiction...... Any relation with reality is purely coincidental nd not intentional.....
It's my first attempt at story writing...,, so forgive of the story was horrible.....
Story inspired by many movies......
I blog at -->> Its Raining outside
hmmm....nice theme bro
ReplyDeletebut...there are a few grammatical errors and a few tense errors too....dun mind me saying it
and one more thing
you have written some of the words in sms style english...that tends to take the charm away bro...
on the brighter side, the story is not fiction at all...it happens with lot of us, glad you have made people realise about it.
keep writing to keep improving....
cheers
yeah sorry bro.... actually i wrote it as a sms only in my mobile..... so only the errors..... i'll correct them now......
ReplyDeleteThanx for the comments bro......
..ur frst tk off was nice but ya I agree wid FL ur sms stlye do tk its charm away...neways keep writng for d best..!!
ReplyDeleteThanx Vidisha for the comment....
ReplyDeleteWell this was my first piece of fiction......
So only.....
Good one for 1st attempt!
ReplyDeletefiction or watever,was impressed by it as relate 2 it dude ;)
ReplyDeleteThanx Roshni
ReplyDelete@The Bard,
ReplyDeleteThis can be related to nyone's life cos it happens with many frnds.....
A very realistic post :)
ReplyDelete.....Could have been better.....
[If fictional names would've been used,how they met, etc.....] but still nice one!
^_^
he he... not a fiction...??
ReplyDeleteI knew halfway thro the story... Its kinda related to u... :-)
n there are still a few errors da... try to correct em...