tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post2317683369353656097..comments2023-11-03T18:40:49.451+05:30Comments on The Writers Lounge: True friendsSandeep Balanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09497006740037526922noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-37819557013810036862009-07-11T10:03:35.000+05:302009-07-11T10:03:35.000+05:30he he... not a fiction...??
I knew halfway thro t...he he... not a fiction...?? <br />I knew halfway thro the story... Its kinda related to u... :-)<br /><br />n there are still a few errors da... try to correct em...Arun Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15632850254083824460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-25298490060828943242009-07-10T18:19:53.723+05:302009-07-10T18:19:53.723+05:30A very realistic post :)
.....Could have been bet...A very realistic post :)<br /><br />.....Could have been better.....<br />[If fictional names would've been used,how they met, etc.....] but still nice one! <br /><br />^_^Where thoughts are Word$https://www.blogger.com/profile/12718707284598840777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-60940479936442127412009-07-10T08:06:58.162+05:302009-07-10T08:06:58.162+05:30@The Bard,
This can be related to nyone's life...@The Bard,<br />This can be related to nyone's life cos it happens with many frnds.....Dr.Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13667986692719342451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-6397997023454980582009-07-10T08:06:18.051+05:302009-07-10T08:06:18.051+05:30Thanx RoshniThanx RoshniDr.Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13667986692719342451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-8109216794958589342009-07-10T00:07:30.631+05:302009-07-10T00:07:30.631+05:30fiction or watever,was impressed by it as relate 2...fiction or watever,was impressed by it as relate 2 it dude ;)"THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"https://www.blogger.com/profile/01259526056401693310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-6027650545247112822009-07-09T21:19:44.552+05:302009-07-09T21:19:44.552+05:30Good one for 1st attempt!Good one for 1st attempt!roshwriteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17611039995057962490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-63931516550563130032009-07-09T21:05:28.961+05:302009-07-09T21:05:28.961+05:30Thanx Vidisha for the comment....
Well this was my...Thanx Vidisha for the comment....<br />Well this was my first piece of fiction......<br />So only.....Dr.Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13667986692719342451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-75347715718650875992009-07-09T12:10:43.937+05:302009-07-09T12:10:43.937+05:30..ur frst tk off was nice but ya I agree wid FL ur.....ur frst tk off was nice but ya I agree wid FL ur sms stlye do tk its charm away...neways keep writng for d best..!!ViDiShAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09575769838570546253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-61321755363425210312009-07-09T11:21:43.091+05:302009-07-09T11:21:43.091+05:30yeah sorry bro.... actually i wrote it as a sms on...yeah sorry bro.... actually i wrote it as a sms only in my mobile..... so only the errors..... i'll correct them now......<br /><br />Thanx for the comments bro......Dr.Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13667986692719342451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-20250706007784441412009-07-09T11:12:14.799+05:302009-07-09T11:12:14.799+05:30hmmm....nice theme bro
but...there are a few gramm...hmmm....nice theme bro<br />but...there are a few grammatical errors and a few tense errors too....dun mind me saying it<br />and one more thing<br />you have written some of the words in sms style english...that tends to take the charm away bro...<br /><br />on the brighter side, the story is not fiction at all...it happens with lot of us, glad you have made people realise about it.<br />keep writing to keep improving....<br />cheersFreelancerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086169141995651713noreply@blogger.com