July 22, 2009

..love..


Titanic of my heart,
Sank in the ocean of your eyes
Stumps of my life,
Flung on the pitch of your hands
Tune of my notes,
danced on the voilen of your lips
War of my emotions,
started on the blast of glance
Movie of my story,
released in the theater of your arms
Castle of my dreams ,
shattered with the blow of your tears
Alas!Fire of my love,
burnt the soul of your heart

12 comments:

  1. awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

    my fav lines
    Movie of my story,
    released in the theater of your arms

    awesome

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  2. brilliant work Vidisha! I love the last two lines :)

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  3. chweet work vidisha...
    Loved it..
    Loved the metaphors in cricket n movie theatre...
    cute....

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  4. d start- "Titanic of my heart,
    Sank in the ocean of your eyes" n "Movie of my story,
    released in the theater of your arms" just left me spellbound!!..gud work gal..

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  5. thats some crisp poetry :)

    liked the read :)

    take care mate... cheers...

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  6. i jsut wanted to go on reading this .. sweet and unusually creative :) loved it :)

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