Titanic of my heart,
Sank in the ocean of your eyes
Stumps of my life,
Flung on the pitch of your hands
Tune of my notes,
danced on the voilen of your lips
War of my emotions,
started on the blast of glance
Movie of my story,
released in the theater of your arms
Castle of my dreams ,
shattered with the blow of your tears
Alas!Fire of my love,
burnt the soul of your heart
Sank in the ocean of your eyes
Stumps of my life,
Flung on the pitch of your hands
Tune of my notes,
danced on the voilen of your lips
War of my emotions,
started on the blast of glance
Movie of my story,
released in the theater of your arms
Castle of my dreams ,
shattered with the blow of your tears
Alas!Fire of my love,
burnt the soul of your heart
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
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Movie of my story,
released in the theater of your arms
awesome
brilliant work Vidisha! I love the last two lines :)
ReplyDeletechweet work vidisha...
ReplyDeleteLoved it..
Loved the metaphors in cricket n movie theatre...
cute....
d start- "Titanic of my heart,
ReplyDeleteSank in the ocean of your eyes" n "Movie of my story,
released in the theater of your arms" just left me spellbound!!..gud work gal..
@FL...thnks..I too luv tht line..
ReplyDelete@thnks rosh..!!!
ReplyDelete@thnks Arun..!!;)
ReplyDelete@thnks...Bard...!!!:)
ReplyDeletethats some crisp poetry :)
ReplyDeleteliked the read :)
take care mate... cheers...
:D maast
ReplyDeletei jsut wanted to go on reading this .. sweet and unusually creative :) loved it :)
ReplyDelete@thnks Arv..
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