July 22, 2009

CONVERSATIONS...The other side!


'Promise you won't go'
'I promise'
'Love you'
'Lots?'
'Hmm'

Why do I hear those lines even today… after you have left me stranded.

Would you never come back and ask me the same thing again?

Can you hear it? I can…
'Love you'

'Lots?'

'Hmm'

Come back to me… will you? Please? Will you?
P.S.: Just tried to write a sad sequel to Freelancer's post. Am sorry FL if it has not come out well.
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17 comments:

  1. FreelancerWednesday, July 22, 2009 8:06:00 PM

    this is gng to bring tears..if ppl knew its depth

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  2. roshwritesWednesday, July 22, 2009 8:28:00 PM

    good one Artz... good sequel to FL's

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  3. mysterious galWednesday, July 22, 2009 8:34:00 PM

    This brings tears already :(
    beautifully sad ...send me a sigh!

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  4. RASHMI RAOWednesday, July 22, 2009 9:02:00 PM

    Not come out well..??

    are you like kidding me..Its beautifully written...crude but very very beautiful.

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  5. NyxWednesday, July 22, 2009 9:18:00 PM

    @ FL,

    Thanks ... I am sure it will... :)

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  6. NyxWednesday, July 22, 2009 9:19:00 PM

    @ Rosh,

    Thank you my li'l one! :D

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  7. NyxWednesday, July 22, 2009 9:20:00 PM

    @ Nabila,

    Hugs to you girl!
    :)

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  8. NyxWednesday, July 22, 2009 9:20:00 PM

    @ Rashmi,

    Thanks girl! :) Glad you liked it! :D

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  9. Arun KumarWednesday, July 22, 2009 9:21:00 PM

    hmmm... sad....
    Prats' haiku came to my mind...
    sing it to ur heroine

    "live to the fullest
    so says the time,moving on,
    no rewind allowed!"

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  10. NyxWednesday, July 22, 2009 9:23:00 PM

    @ Arun,

    Yea, its sad! :(

    But it'll all be fine da! :D

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  11. "THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"Wednesday, July 22, 2009 10:45:00 PM

    left me sad n pained as took me back in time :(

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  12. ViDiShAWednesday, July 22, 2009 11:11:00 PM

    ...so sweet i think u hv writtn wat was in ur heart..!!

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  13. ArvThursday, July 23, 2009 10:14:00 AM

    awwwwweeeee

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  14. hThursday, July 23, 2009 11:38:00 AM

    sorry to say this but u write a lot better than this....just my opinion, i felt this write was not so good compared to what you generally write.

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  15. hThursday, July 23, 2009 11:39:00 AM

    and i comment from an objective view

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  16. PS the PratsieThursday, July 23, 2009 11:47:00 AM

    i agree with Abhri .. but when i know the feelings behind it, its as painfula s anything ..

    sigh!
    cheer up swt hrt ..
    *hugz*

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  17. NyxThursday, July 23, 2009 8:16:00 PM

    @ Abhri,

    Very very true... I realised it the moment I finished writing this... Was just waiting to see if someone feels the same way! :)

    Thank you! :)

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