July 22, 2009

CONVERSATIONS...The other side!


'Promise you won't go'
'I promise'
'Love you'
'Lots?'
'Hmm'

Why do I hear those lines even today… after you have left me stranded.

Would you never come back and ask me the same thing again?

Can you hear it? I can…
'Love you'

'Lots?'

'Hmm'

Come back to me… will you? Please? Will you?
P.S.: Just tried to write a sad sequel to Freelancer's post. Am sorry FL if it has not come out well.

17 comments:

  1. this is gng to bring tears..if ppl knew its depth

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  2. This brings tears already :(
    beautifully sad ...send me a sigh!

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  3. Not come out well..??

    are you like kidding me..Its beautifully written...crude but very very beautiful.

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  4. @ FL,

    Thanks ... I am sure it will... :)

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  5. @ Rashmi,

    Thanks girl! :) Glad you liked it! :D

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  6. hmmm... sad....
    Prats' haiku came to my mind...
    sing it to ur heroine

    "live to the fullest
    so says the time,moving on,
    no rewind allowed!"

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  7. @ Arun,

    Yea, its sad! :(

    But it'll all be fine da! :D

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  8. ...so sweet i think u hv writtn wat was in ur heart..!!

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  9. sorry to say this but u write a lot better than this....just my opinion, i felt this write was not so good compared to what you generally write.

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  10. and i comment from an objective view

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  11. i agree with Abhri .. but when i know the feelings behind it, its as painfula s anything ..

    sigh!
    cheer up swt hrt ..
    *hugz*

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  12. @ Abhri,

    Very very true... I realised it the moment I finished writing this... Was just waiting to see if someone feels the same way! :)

    Thank you! :)

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