July 22, 2009

LOVE AND THE CHALUKYA EXPRESS..!!



The palm trees pass by,
And I think of you…
The breeze sweeps through my hair,
Just like the way your fingers run through them,
The wet red mud reminds me of your breath,
Like the fresh scent of sun kissed asphalt.
My loose clothing clings to my body,
Like the tenderness of your skin against mine.
The train sways in a perfect motion,
The way it is when we waltzed in the rain,
In each others embrace,..
The smell of the country side,
Reminds me of the smell of your skin..

Wish you were here,
Wish I was there,
Wish we could go atop that hill ,
And fall in love over and over again…!

(this was somthing i penned down while traveling back, on a train from Mumbai to Bangalore..n the Chalukya express)

11 comments:

  1. hey yu are beginning to impress me each and evry time
    this was good...damn good

    nice flow of words...

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  2. Very sweet and lovely one... very well written :)

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  3. @ freelancer

    glad to know that..hope the next posts also keep you at the tip of the iceberg..! :-P

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  4. am waiting fr it...btw call me FL
    everyone here does :D

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  5. ...good yaar..I luvd "My loose clothing clings to my body,
    Like the tenderness of your skin against mine."

    vry gud..:)

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  6. Marvelously crafted.......similes used are so apt nd perfect! beautiful! luvd it! :)

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  7. Love is so all around :)

    take care mate... cheers..

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  8. the last four lines say it all !! too sweet and sad !

    and u frm blore ?? good to know ! we had a blore loungers meet this sunday .. u can check the post in older enteries :) !

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