July 22, 2009
LOVE AND THE CHALUKYA EXPRESS..!!
The palm trees pass by,
And I think of you…
The breeze sweeps through my hair,
Just like the way your fingers run through them,
The wet red mud reminds me of your breath,
Like the fresh scent of sun kissed asphalt.
My loose clothing clings to my body,
Like the tenderness of your skin against mine.
The train sways in a perfect motion,
The way it is when we waltzed in the rain,
In each others embrace,..
The smell of the country side,
Reminds me of the smell of your skin..
Wish you were here,
Wish I was there,
Wish we could go atop that hill ,
And fall in love over and over again…!
(this was somthing i penned down while traveling back, on a train from Mumbai to Bangalore..n the Chalukya express)
Your very own Alice in Wonderland..! I am curious by nature and I plan to live my life to the fullest. I am a mystery yet to be uncovered, So till then pull a chair and experience : Rashmi..! I am sure you wont be disappointed..!
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hey yu are beginning to impress me each and evry time
ReplyDeletethis was good...damn good
nice flow of words...
Very sweet and lovely one... very well written :)
ReplyDelete@ freelancer
ReplyDeleteglad to know that..hope the next posts also keep you at the tip of the iceberg..! :-P
am waiting fr it...btw call me FL
ReplyDeleteeveryone here does :D
liked it more as a work than a memoir...
ReplyDelete...good yaar..I luvd "My loose clothing clings to my body,
ReplyDeleteLike the tenderness of your skin against mine."
vry gud..:)
Marvelously crafted.......similes used are so apt nd perfect! beautiful! luvd it! :)
ReplyDeleteLove is so all around :)
ReplyDeletetake care mate... cheers..
the last four lines say it all !! too sweet and sad !
ReplyDeleteand u frm blore ?? good to know ! we had a blore loungers meet this sunday .. u can check the post in older enteries :) !
gd one
ReplyDeletemaast..maaast
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