June 5, 2009
TEN BLACK ROSES, HEART BREAK ONE
Ten black roses, heart break one
End of a lifetime.... under the sun
Nothing's changed..... just we two
Back to shit.............wherever you look
Love's labor lost...............halt of an era
A dying heart bleeds somewhere here
Creme de la Creme, a memory from afar
Kiss of the angels turned to a filthy barb
Roses started and roses brought the halt
Ode to the love that now i am paying for
Six years of bliss now insignificant as a flea
Etched in my mind, the memories of thee
Struggled and tried... didn't end in a high
P.S| tried an acrostic as well as a reverse acrostic....(lol...my invention)....happy reading
Categorized As
Acrostic Poetry,
Freelancer,
reverse acrostic
few things about me-
# hate anything related to calculus
# addicted to Le Parkour, KFC, Manchester United FC, playstation, beer, texting, Twitter and anything abnormal
# neither am an atheist nor do i follow Scientology...i just live for da moment
# have a severe Tendency of day dreaming...lols
NothinG lasts Forever, so LiVe ii up, drinK iT down, LaugH it off, avoid the bullshiT, take chances and never have regrets.......'coz at one point, evrything you did was exactly what you wanted...
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lol!
ReplyDeletecute...:)
Ver well done Mridul...
ReplyDeleteVery creative I must say! :)
Kudos to you! :D
@ gulabo
ReplyDeleteglad to see yu here
@ aarthz
ReplyDeletethanx gal...and its FL...ok...lol
reverse acrostic... very creative dude...
ReplyDeletemust have been really difficult to write this..
Great work dide..
@ arun
ReplyDeletethanx mate...got this silly idea last night...so wrote it...hehe
i wrote one reverse acro ! took em two days !! but this was really perfect !! loved your words :)
ReplyDelete@ prats....
ReplyDeletegee thanx gal....thanx to yu actually
Wow, cool! Reverse acrostics are a good idea actually! They are probably hard to write ^.^
ReplyDeleteroshwrites
Omg! This looks tough! But nice flow too wow!
ReplyDeletewonderful :)
ReplyDelete@ roshwrites....
ReplyDeleteits ain,'t much hard...if yu giv ur heart to it
@ R.V
ReplyDeletena r...it ain't dat hard...do try
@ pulkit
ReplyDeletethanx dude...ispires me to write more
@ hashan da
ReplyDeletethanku...apunar pora bohut xikibo ase
awesome!!
ReplyDelete@ mona....thanx gal
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