
Ten black roses, heart break one
End of a lifetime.... under the sun
Nothing's changed..... just we two
Back to shit.............wherever you look
Love's labor lost...............halt of an era
A dying heart bleeds somewhere here
Creme de la Creme, a memory from afar
Kiss of the angels turned to a filthy barb
Roses started and roses brought the halt
Ode to the love that now i am paying for
Six years of bliss now insignificant as a flea
Etched in my mind, the memories of thee
Struggled and tried... didn't end in a high
P.S| tried an acrostic as well as a reverse acrostic....(lol...my invention)....happy reading

lol!
ReplyDeletecute...:)
Ver well done Mridul...
ReplyDeleteVery creative I must say! :)
Kudos to you! :D
@ gulabo
ReplyDeleteglad to see yu here
@ aarthz
ReplyDeletethanx gal...and its FL...ok...lol
reverse acrostic... very creative dude...
ReplyDeletemust have been really difficult to write this..
Great work dide..
@ arun
ReplyDeletethanx mate...got this silly idea last night...so wrote it...hehe
i wrote one reverse acro ! took em two days !! but this was really perfect !! loved your words :)
ReplyDelete@ prats....
ReplyDeletegee thanx gal....thanx to yu actually
Wow, cool! Reverse acrostics are a good idea actually! They are probably hard to write ^.^
ReplyDeleteroshwrites
Omg! This looks tough! But nice flow too wow!
ReplyDeletewonderful :)
ReplyDelete@ roshwrites....
ReplyDeleteits ain,'t much hard...if yu giv ur heart to it
@ R.V
ReplyDeletena r...it ain't dat hard...do try
@ pulkit
ReplyDeletethanx dude...ispires me to write more
@ hashan da
ReplyDeletethanku...apunar pora bohut xikibo ase
awesome!!
ReplyDelete@ mona....thanx gal
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