June 5, 2009

TEN BLACK ROSES, HEART BREAK ONE


Ten black roses, heart break one
End of a lifetime.... under the sun
Nothing's changed..... just we two

Back to shit.............wherever you look
Love's labor lost...............halt of an era
A dying heart bleeds somewhere here
Creme de la Creme, a memory from afar
Kiss of the angels turned to a filthy barb

Roses started and roses brought the halt
Ode to the love that now i am paying for
Six years of bliss now insignificant as a flea
Etched in my mind, the memories of thee
Struggled and tried... didn't end in a high


P.S|
tried an acrostic as well as a reverse acrostic....(lol...my invention)....happy reading


18 comments:

  1. Ver well done Mridul...

    Very creative I must say! :)

    Kudos to you! :D

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  2. @ aarthz
    thanx gal...and its FL...ok...lol

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  3. reverse acrostic... very creative dude...
    must have been really difficult to write this..
    Great work dide..

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  4. @ arun
    thanx mate...got this silly idea last night...so wrote it...hehe

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  5. i wrote one reverse acro ! took em two days !! but this was really perfect !! loved your words :)

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  6. @ prats....
    gee thanx gal....thanx to yu actually

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  7. Wow, cool! Reverse acrostics are a good idea actually! They are probably hard to write ^.^
    roshwrites

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  8. Omg! This looks tough! But nice flow too wow!

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  9. @ roshwrites....
    its ain,'t much hard...if yu giv ur heart to it

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  10. @ R.V
    na r...it ain't dat hard...do try

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  11. @ pulkit
    thanx dude...ispires me to write more

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  12. @ hashan da
    thanku...apunar pora bohut xikibo ase

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