May 7, 2009

You remain

I had a good time again today in the Lounge, after quite some time. Liked it much. All it has done is to remind me of my olden days in here. And a few words just fell out of my mouth. Reminded me of those eyes – reminded me of those poems, comments and replies – of that eternal comfort! These are those few words:

Even when in pain
In the deepest of my heart
You’ll always remain

11 comments:

  1. kya bat hai TAN bhai
    memories of the lounge will always remain in our heart

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  2. yeah direct dil say :) Haiku remains my favorite genre :)

    loved it!

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  3. as chirag would say,

    vadiya! :)

    nicely done!

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  4. Thanks mates... I just want to tell everyone here that

    ... all the time I spent here
    ... all the moments I chatted
    ... all the Friends I got here
    ... all the special things I shared
    ... and all the COMFORT I felt here

    ................. will REMAIN :)

    All these and TWL Will remain ... somewhere, deep inside... always!!

    Thanks to all of you :)

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  5. Asbah,

    Haiku is my fav too... I feel this as building blocks for so many other formats of Poetry Writing...

    Thanks for reading me :)

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