May 19, 2009

Cupid's Lunatics..


Mortals have only one love story...

For love has only one story...

Our story...


I met her...I loved her...

Madly in love...Deliriously in love...

Cupid chose us lunatics to stage his play...


Kisses , caresses , desire , intimacy , passion ....

We owned it all...

Her tender frame , drawn-out moonless hair , feverish love...

My own personal brand of heroin...


We were wrapped up in our own little love bubble...

No longer I cared , whether it was day or night...

No longer I dreamed , No longer we existed...

We breathed in our unique private paradise...


And then she died...

How..?? I don't know...

Lying in my arms...

Smiling her way to heaven...


I'm searching for the path to my guillotine....





P.S -  Good..??   Loved a line from Twilight...Couldn't match it..so stole it...Poetic license... :-) Pls don't mind...

23 comments:

  1. Lovely..umm...."My own personal brand of heroin?" Ooo..i love that line! And the way edward says it....ive by hearted all his lines..most of em!

    Loved it...it was nice and deep!

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  2. huh...u found that line...u must ve seen twilight a looot of times i think...

    n thanks for the appreciation...

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  3. Hahah.. Nice Arjun! If is's nice 'Sudrathula' Thappilla.. hehe..

    P.S. I meant only in Poetic lines ok..

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  4. I loved it Arun, you have it in you :)

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  5. @sonshu

    more than 50 times..??? he he.... :-)


    @nuchu...
    yeap..
    sudrathula thappe illa...

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  6. @aarthi

    thanks artie...
    I hope so..
    n also thanks for previewing it before...

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  7. awesome !! i liked it so very much !! love ur writes dude :)

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  8. twilight seems to be movie of the age. so many inspirations from it. including me. Awesome post. lovely tuesdays is just rocking, hey arun this was great stuff!!

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  9. Hey Arun periya poet aagita.....
    this really deserves a treat.....
    Wen nd wer is the treat???

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  10. this is so sad !

    very poignant, incredibly touching, but sad!

    i loved the :My own personal brand of heroin...

    and the first two verses, wow!
    you just placed the words very decorously together :) thoroughly enjoyed it!

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  11. @pretty me

    thanks prats..i luv urs too...


    @mav

    Thanks man...

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  12. @ziyaad

    Thanks bro...sar aaa??? naan ungaloda vayasula chinnavan...

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  13. @Sam

    yeah...Twilight has been inspiration for many posts here...

    n thanks man...

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  14. hardhitting.. left my mouth wide open.. sad.. very sad.. but in all this a very enchantic poetic expression.. kudos Arun..

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  15. @Kumar

    Poetlam onnum illa da...

    just a try...this is my first poem da...
    Glad u liked it...
    Huh..treat...??? get used to disappointment da ... :-)

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  16. @ Asbah

    Thanks u very much....
    wel...l i mentioned about a stolen line in the PS na...thats the line ....he he...

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  17. @Pink Orchid

    Thank u kajal...means a lot comin form u...poetic princess.. :-)

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  18. poetic princess aa? kadavule.. ennakku vidungu pa please. :) friend sonna podhum ennakku.. :) you write well.. :)

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  19. @ Pink

    when im in a good mood...I'm very generous with my words...but u deserve it friend...suits u...


    thanks once again..

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