May 19, 2009

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So wats up?.. what u doing... I hope ur doing okay.. Im doing alrite i think... Trying to deal with life.... Do you miss me?.. i hope you do a little a bit.. I hope you remember me... I hope you know that im still there... I want you to know that i think about you atleast 10 times everyday ....A part of me doesnt want you to miss me... And wants you to move one... And forget about me...And be great and happy and awesome like you are... So you keep smiling your beautiful smile forever... A part of me wants that you never forget me.. And that you miss me now and then... But thats just life... It isn't supposed to make sense.. But one thing i do know is that i hope i see you in the afterlife... So that we can share our life experiences... So that we can catch up.. So that we can once again say to each other...So wats up....
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11 comments:

  1. AnonymousTuesday, May 19, 2009 4:43:00 PM

    this is a good write !! but ... u need to polish it a bit .. sorry if u mind this .. but i dnt want u to ignore these thoughts u pen ... make them alive !! create a bond with them ..

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  2. Lonely Perverted SoulTuesday, May 19, 2009 4:57:00 PM

    i started writing suff like this a couple of months ago.. so i dont know what can i do better...

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  3. AnonymousTuesday, May 19, 2009 5:11:00 PM

    if u dnt mind, i will try to edit it .. will mail u directly .. plz leave ur id here ..


    ps: i hate to see sm write wch i know cud be better .. call me crazzy !

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  4. Lonely Perverted SoulTuesday, May 19, 2009 5:17:00 PM

    you can mail me at lonelypervertedsoul@gmail.com

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  5. hTuesday, May 19, 2009 5:22:00 PM

    This is real cool. If u see my blog around a year ago u wud be amazed to see similiar posts. I like the sound of this write. Really good. I differ with prats on this one coz i think some thoughts are better like this raw, with an unfinished touch to it.

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  6. Lonely Perverted SoulTuesday, May 19, 2009 5:28:00 PM

    thnx H...

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  7. Arun KumarTuesday, May 19, 2009 5:29:00 PM

    lovely write...n welcome to the lounge...
    I like it as it is...as h said...RAW...and awesome..

    different people...different views... :-)

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  8. AnonymousTuesday, May 19, 2009 7:04:00 PM

    when did i say i did not like this ?? i loved this thought !! coz its so true and human !!

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  9. AnonymousTuesday, May 19, 2009 8:18:00 PM

    good stuff.

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  10. AnonymousTuesday, May 19, 2009 10:15:00 PM

    after life is so far away, i dono if i can wait for that long!

    I know what you mean, i am struggling with something similar :)

    although not in terms of love etc, but i can understand :)

    keep writing.

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  11. Lonely Perverted SoulTuesday, May 19, 2009 10:45:00 PM

    Thnx for all the nice words people...

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