May 9, 2009

I'm waiting...! :(

I'm waiting
I'm waiting for this plant to grow
That one day it becomes a tree
And from all the burdens it sets me free!

Twenty girls I liked
Twenty five I proposed
Thirty slapped me
And therefore I tied this rope!

You know not the pain
We hold in our little hearts
The way we run after you
And you make us see the stars!

Damn all these damsels
I've now decided
Agonised is my soul
I feel alienated!

I trusted in you
Your 'No's have hurt me
All my savings
You've made me spend all the money!

I water this plant every day
Let it grow
And to end my agony
I've tied this rope!

P.S.: This is a poem filled with humour. A new attempt from my side. Please bear with it even if it is not funny! :P

This has been cross posted from my blog - PRAGMATIC UTOPIA.


  1. lolz....

    Dowry!! Dowry!! he must have got Doery as a reimbursement for tieing that knot..... :D :D

  2. Hahaha... Good one and an apt pic as well.. Terrific

  3. lmao....n the tree and he lived happily ever after

  4. @ Vitruvian,

    Dowry?? He didn't get a girl and you are talking about the dowry??

  5. @ Zendagi,

    Thank you so much! :P


  6. @ Freelancer,

    This wicked world doesn't even let people to die on their own terms. Poor this guy would have to wait for this plant to grow into a tree! :P

  7. he hee...comic poetry...
    I think he's still having a teensy bit of hope about getting good with gals...atleast before the tree grows....

  8. lovely!! :D cute poetry.. and funny.. :D

  9. it was a fun read .. but a mesage was there too !!!


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