I stare to the sky gazing at the stars
They look shining brighter than ever before,
Is it that the sky is so clear,
or could it be cos the love is near
on a perfect winter chilly night.
As she and me sit in the snow like sand
And the waves crash the shore
We laugh, we kiss and we talk
With hands in hand together,
drawing pictures on sand
As the night is almost finished,
As along the ocean we walk
As the moon is fading fast
Another day together passes by,
And the time together ends by
Everything around us seems to melt away
faster than the sand in the hand
as night dissolves to the day,
she can see the twinkle in my eyes
As we walk hand in hand,
for one last time, for one last day
so romantically written
ReplyDeleteits one of the moments i've always longed for....moonlit beach, splashing waves, long talks and a loved one near
keep writing ~
thank you aparna, my 1st post here. glad to see you liked it.
ReplyDeletethis has been my ultimate fantasy too :). add music to it and its just magical.
wow.....the most romantic writeup that i read in the recent times...!!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful friend..!!!
keep writing..!!!
heyyyyyyyyyy Sam.. so good to see you here.. :D I am sure you will enjoy your stay..welcome to the family..
ReplyDeletep.s. will come back to read the poem again..:)
thank u yamini :)
ReplyDeletethere is a tinge of sadness in the post,if u read the poem carefully :)
its the last time together :)
thank you kajal for the invite n i feel great to be part of the WL :) hope to be active here :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the lounge Sam.
ReplyDeleteromantic souls are the most loved loungers, so urs was indeed a fitting first one!
Keep writing!
thank you pisku :)
ReplyDeletethats a remarkable start!
ReplyDeletevery well written sam!
i dont like the last times :(
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem sam... i hope and pray that it remains like that forever. amen
one of the most romantic! :)
ReplyDeletenice read!
thanks leo, this is a good start for me :)
ReplyDeleteamen .a :). it wud
ReplyDeletethanks pulkit
ReplyDeleteMe here brother.... nice post.. was awaiting your first since a long tym...! But finally u did....and with excellence.
ReplyDeleteGood man..keep rytng... :)
why for the last time.. :( so unfair!!
ReplyDeletethe last time has its own charm Kajal, its own magic, a moment of lifetime to cherish, something which would never return!!
ReplyDeletethank u nik :) did u follow my blog ?
ReplyDeleteWelcome to WL Sam! :)
ReplyDeletenicely written opening post! :)