May 22, 2009

Ashes Of The Wake !!


Dark
days
lead to
darker nights
I am awake with
black poetry,Frozen out of time
I need a sleep ,give me the sleep,the eternal sleep !!

13 comments:

  1. Hashan,

    dark dark darkness
    all what you harness
    .... is pure gold
    Ashes of the wake OR Tortured soul!!

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  2. wah
    waah
    waaah
    waaaah
    waaaaah
    waaaaaah
    waaaaaaah
    waaaaaaaah
    waaaaaaaaah

    Mindblowing...Mindnumbing...Mind it :-)

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  3. u r on a roll !! wow !! this definitely gets a reply :)

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  4. Loved it!! :)

    *Thinking of how to reply*

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  5. nice Fib..!!!

    I think the terror thoughts are nicely put only in a fib....as i see them mostly written that way..!!

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  6. Ahhh.. brilliant is an understatement "I need a sleep, give me the sleep, the eternal sleep.. Phew!! A very different style of writing.. Maan gaye aapko!!

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  7. God..pls i pray...
    dont bless this tortured soul with sleep...
    For im waiting for more of his black poetry...

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  8. Kinda same Tan :)) ..hehe

    @ sandeep
    Thank you sirjee :) Mind it :P

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  9. Thanks Pratsie :) read the reply, it was awesome..


    hey RD..thank you da :)

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  10. Thank you Yamini :)
    yes..it starts with 1 syllable and ends with 13 syllables, so last line you can make a punch line !!

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  11. @ life goes on

    Thank you so much :))..
    waise bhoot sooot se mujhe bohot darr lagta hain :P

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  12. Hehe..Arun, Pray for the blessings man :)

    Thanks for loving my writes !!

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  13. woah.. man.. awesome..!!

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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