He turned imaginatively and found none! Where was she? He pinched himself and found he was awake. Was this a dream?
She came down from heaven, just to make his evening special – after all, she promised to be with him on their 25th anniversary – and she had come!
The train whistled – the journey was on.
wow tan....you would like to read a short story on the same thought from my stable:
ReplyDeletehttp://yembeeyae.blogspot.com/2009/04/moment.html
Sometimes our same line of thought scares me...terror fridays..he he...
Wonderful piece bro...there is something about this thought that gives me goosebumps everytime i think about it. "The Moment" was my tribute to this wonderful thought. "The last visit" by you evoked the same sentiments...simply wow!
Will read it now...
ReplyDeleteAnd mate, dont be scared - I'm married now :)
And if it is so, I should be scared - for you are not married!!!
ReplyDeleteOooooooooooooOOOOOOOooooooo..... Howling!!!
:P
he he he he....25th anniversary tak toh meri bhi shaadi ho chuki hogi...bacchon ki bhi shaadi ho gayi hogi....if i go on to see that day :-)
ReplyDeleteNo, I dont want a promise from you to be with me on that day - If we are worlds apart - please stay apart!!
ReplyDeleteLOL
(Terror Friday transforming to LOL Thursday - something's wrong!)
he he he...I know what's wrong. It's my presence :-) Let there be laughter :-) Amen!
ReplyDeletehe he he....
OooooooooooooOoooooooooooooo *howling*
wow....... am speechless......
ReplyDeletewonderful; Tan !! its a sweet kind of spooky !
ReplyDeleteKinda spooky, but loved the thought behind it :)
ReplyDeleteCheers
*PEACE*
beautiful thought Tan..!!!
ReplyDeleteYes it is spooky... Pleasantly spooky, I guess..
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ReplyDeletecreepy
weird
chilling
n Awesome...
cute bhootiya story ....hehe..Good one Tan !!
ReplyDeleteIt's spooky... My mind set today doesn't make me feel its cute.. hehe :P
ReplyDeleteCheers..!!
Arjun