May 22, 2009

Tortured soul !!



I am
a ugly demon
Don't trust my smile
Don't enjoy my touch
Don't walk my way
my teeth are like knives
my touch are like claws
my walk leads to hell
F!#k your hopeless world,
I am blacker than the black
living in agony
Tortured eternally
I am lost
My pain won't end
I have not died !!

11 comments:

  1. Terror is out !!!! nice start dude :)

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  2. Thank you pratsie, Bhargav !!
    Its 1.41 AM in night...I am on hunt..buhuhahahaha !!

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  3. "F!#k your hopeless world,
    I am blacker than the black"

    Right... F!#k this hopeless world!

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  4. Arre hashan bhai...I think its time you gave your bathroom mirror a nice wipe...the demon...teeth like knives..claws etc. are illusions being created coz of the same. Everything will be fine

    :-) :-)

    Wonderful poem bro..and what a bhutiya start to the day....*Zee horror show music plays in the background*

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  5. Super fanatabulously fantastic!! Do I need to say more??

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  6. chilling...n awesome...especially the lines
    F@%k your hopeless world
    im blacker than black..
    awesome...

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  7. @ Sandeep

    Today i've changed the bathroom mirror and got shock of my life..How "beautiful I am"
    Thank you..Thank you * wiping khushi ke ansoo*

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  8. Thanks Yamini :)

    Hahaha...Thanks Sheena..thats enough :D

    Thanks Arun..

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