May 22, 2009

Ashes Of The Wake !!


Dark
days
lead to
darker nights
I am awake with
black poetry,Frozen out of time
I need a sleep ,give me the sleep,the eternal sleep !!
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13 comments:

  1. TanFriday, May 22, 2009 3:44:00 AM

    Hashan,

    dark dark darkness
    all what you harness
    .... is pure gold
    Ashes of the wake OR Tortured soul!!

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  2. Sandeep BalanFriday, May 22, 2009 4:08:00 AM

    wah
    waah
    waaah
    waaaah
    waaaaah
    waaaaaah
    waaaaaaah
    waaaaaaaah
    waaaaaaaaah

    Mindblowing...Mindnumbing...Mind it :-)

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  3. AnonymousFriday, May 22, 2009 9:29:00 AM

    u r on a roll !! wow !! this definitely gets a reply :)

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  4. NyxFriday, May 22, 2009 9:59:00 AM

    Loved it!! :)

    *Thinking of how to reply*

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  5. Yamini MeduriFriday, May 22, 2009 10:40:00 AM

    nice Fib..!!!

    I think the terror thoughts are nicely put only in a fib....as i see them mostly written that way..!!

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  6. Zendagi MigzaraFriday, May 22, 2009 11:33:00 AM

    Ahhh.. brilliant is an understatement "I need a sleep, give me the sleep, the eternal sleep.. Phew!! A very different style of writing.. Maan gaye aapko!!

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  7. Arun KumarFriday, May 22, 2009 2:17:00 PM

    God..pls i pray...
    dont bless this tortured soul with sleep...
    For im waiting for more of his black poetry...

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  8. hasHAN hazaRIKAFriday, May 22, 2009 2:33:00 PM

    Kinda same Tan :)) ..hehe

    @ sandeep
    Thank you sirjee :) Mind it :P

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  9. hasHAN hazaRIKAFriday, May 22, 2009 2:36:00 PM

    Thanks Pratsie :) read the reply, it was awesome..


    hey RD..thank you da :)

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  10. hasHAN hazaRIKAFriday, May 22, 2009 2:39:00 PM

    Thank you Yamini :)
    yes..it starts with 1 syllable and ends with 13 syllables, so last line you can make a punch line !!

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  11. hasHAN hazaRIKAFriday, May 22, 2009 2:41:00 PM

    @ life goes on

    Thank you so much :))..
    waise bhoot sooot se mujhe bohot darr lagta hain :P

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  12. hasHAN hazaRIKAFriday, May 22, 2009 2:42:00 PM

    Hehe..Arun, Pray for the blessings man :)

    Thanks for loving my writes !!

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  13. ArjunFriday, May 22, 2009 5:21:00 PM

    woah.. man.. awesome..!!

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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