April 12, 2009

Miss you still

I lied when i said
i let you free now
It wasnt just difficult
i really did not know how!

I abused when you went
away from my life
It was just the hurt
that took over for a while.

I cried hard after you
called to say goodbye
It was the first time
i knew,you were my smiles.

Months have passed but
your place is still there
reserved just for you to
come and reclaim it my dear.


P.S : reading mohita's and vinay's poem just let some memories take over me for a while ...

16 comments:

  1. beautiful!
    loved it!

    regards
    PULKIT
    (http://19goes20.blogspot.com)

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  2. I am honoured!!

    This was another wonderful,random creation from your end,,and just as always,I feel in love with the words.

    May the two of you,be together once again!
    Forever.

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  3. so nice Prats..!!

    I abused when you went
    away from my life
    It was just the hurt
    that took over for a while.


    yeah... it was just that the hurt took over.... nice line.. :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  4. i told u, u are just sooo good! :)

    brilliant would be an understatement! :)

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  5. i agree with all of d above... !!

    The main reason; i could connect. Very well........
    Its similar to what happens when u read my poems girl!! As u connect so did i...... Beuatiful!

    This led me to my memory lane.

    Awesome prats....! keep writing.....
    nik..

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  7. I cried hard after you
    called to say goodbye
    It was the first time
    i knew,you were my smiles. <-- so profound !

    I can understand now why you are the angel with broken wings :)

    Great going prats ! It always a delight to read your poems.

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  8. Very nice Prats..:))
    all the words all the lines are brilliant . Beautiful poem !!

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  9. I abused when you went
    away from my life
    It was just the hurt
    that took over for a while.


    So true..It happens all the time..

    Lovely poem..

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  10. @Pulkit : Hellos .. and thanks for the read :) keep reading !

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  11. @Mohita : Sosweet of you to wish so good !! and all credit to your lovely poem !! thanks :)

    @Arjun : Glad you liked the poem !

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  12. @Leo : Well... you know wat crap i wrote before this one .. this one was a saviour !! ;)


    @Hashan : Thanks as always !!

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  13. badiya....
    I hope there are many ppl over here who can relate to this post.....

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  14. @nik : thanksie !! i sure do connect to your words .. glad you liked mine ..


    @Ragz : and its a delight for me to see such good words for me :)

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  15. Thanks Hashan, charu, uzra and Vitruvian boy !! glad to see ur comments :)

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