I lied when i saidi let you free now
It wasnt just difficult
i really did not know how!
I abused when you went
away from my life
It was just the hurt
that took over for a while.
I cried hard after you
called to say goodbye
It was the first time
i knew,you were my smiles.
Months have passed but
your place is still there
reserved just for you to
come and reclaim it my dear.
P.S : reading mohita's and vinay's poem just let some memories take over me for a while ...
beautiful!
ReplyDeleteloved it!
regards
PULKIT
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)
I am honoured!!
ReplyDeleteThis was another wonderful,random creation from your end,,and just as always,I feel in love with the words.
May the two of you,be together once again!
Forever.
so nice Prats..!!
ReplyDeleteI abused when you went
away from my life
It was just the hurt
that took over for a while.
yeah... it was just that the hurt took over.... nice line.. :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
i told u, u are just sooo good! :)
ReplyDeletebrilliant would be an understatement! :)
i agree with all of d above... !!
ReplyDeleteThe main reason; i could connect. Very well........
Its similar to what happens when u read my poems girl!! As u connect so did i...... Beuatiful!
This led me to my memory lane.
Awesome prats....! keep writing.....
nik..
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ReplyDeleteI cried hard after you
ReplyDeletecalled to say goodbye
It was the first time
i knew,you were my smiles. <-- so profound !
I can understand now why you are the angel with broken wings :)
Great going prats ! It always a delight to read your poems.
Very nice Prats..:))
ReplyDeleteall the words all the lines are brilliant . Beautiful poem !!
I abused when you went
ReplyDeleteaway from my life
It was just the hurt
that took over for a while.
So true..It happens all the time..
Lovely poem..
one word! poignanat!
ReplyDelete@Pulkit : Hellos .. and thanks for the read :) keep reading !
ReplyDelete@Mohita : Sosweet of you to wish so good !! and all credit to your lovely poem !! thanks :)
ReplyDelete@Arjun : Glad you liked the poem !
@Leo : Well... you know wat crap i wrote before this one .. this one was a saviour !! ;)
ReplyDelete@Hashan : Thanks as always !!
badiya....
ReplyDeleteI hope there are many ppl over here who can relate to this post.....
@nik : thanksie !! i sure do connect to your words .. glad you liked mine ..
ReplyDelete@Ragz : and its a delight for me to see such good words for me :)
Thanks Hashan, charu, uzra and Vitruvian boy !! glad to see ur comments :)
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