Living to meet you onceonce in the reality of my love
love that i felt in my dreams
Dreams that i wish to love now
Now i feel alone
alone in the world
world that seemed best before
before i know you in the Dream world
World, i may leave one day
Day, before i get to see you, if it is
is the fear i am living in dear
dear, my soul, will it rest in peace
Peace you shall bring to my life
Life long i await for it to find
Find the love, find you and then
then, both of us together i wish to bind...!!!
love that i felt in my dreams
Dreams that i wish to love now
Now i feel alone
alone in the world
world that seemed best before
before i know you in the Dream world
World, i may leave one day
Day, before i get to see you, if it is
is the fear i am living in dear
dear, my soul, will it rest in peace
Peace you shall bring to my life
Life long i await for it to find
Find the love, find you and then
then, both of us together i wish to bind...!!!
I m all starry-eyed in a dreamland. Shueet! :)
ReplyDeletethank you Ms.R..!!!
ReplyDeletei second Ms. R,
ReplyDeletei liked it better than the other one! :)
keep penning yammi! :)
u r gettin better n better! :)
@Vinay
ReplyDeletethanks dear...i hope one day..i make it perfect..!!!
Thsi is so much good !!! loved reading this ... m itching to write one too !!
ReplyDelete@Pretty Me
ReplyDeletethanks yaar....ooking forward to read yours...!!!
lovely!! :D loop rocks and your attempt of it too!
ReplyDelete@The Pink Orchid
ReplyDeletethanks dear...!!!
first piece by you too, that i read!
ReplyDeleteanother loop poem, hmm! good one :)
I will try my hands on it soon too i guess ;)
and you my dear, are no wonder a valuable addition to the lounge. welcome in :) (although this may be a little late :P)
@.a.
ReplyDeletethanks yaar...looking fwd to read yours..!!!
happy writing.!!!