March 9, 2009

Moment!


I still remember
her questioning eyes
focusing me asking me
Where once was love
the mumbling of her
trembling lips
the way she fortifies me
I miss now
while reciting quran
surrounding me with verses
her closed eyes and low voice
I remember
The sadness of her face
the paleness the fear
when I told her
I leaving her
making her single yet alone
she whispered
as I shivered
webbing of in happiness
confining pain away from me
she turned
giving of permission to leave
leave her alone on her own
I still remember
from rise of our togetherness till death of our love.
Oh how i can forget
the moment of love
the love of us


-illusiOn




PS(I dedicate this to myself by him... as he never can write poems [acc to him] so i dedicate this to myself by him :) my illusiOn my love)

13 comments:

  1. "I still remember
    from rise of our togetherness till death of our love.
    Oh how i can forget
    the moment of love
    the love of us"

    that was sweet insi :) a nice dedication :)

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  2. heheheehhehe!

    thnk u soooooooo much!

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  3. wow insi...namesake...i had titled one of my last posts here as "The Moment"...great to see a poetry on the same subject line..a sweet sweet dedication....touched the chords of my heart.......go go chote ustaad!

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  4. guru jee "dhanevad" :) [correct me if i am wrong]

    hehehehehe!

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  6. "dhanyavaad"....chote ustaad ;-)

    he he....keep churning out more

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  7. :) As i always say I ve fallen in love with the structure of ur poems

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  8. from rise of our togetherness till death of our love.


    lovely write :)

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  9. lovely poem..so touching insi..very deep too...loved it!

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  10. It is the best poem one could dedicate to themselves :) Loved it!

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