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The Kiss
Her : I'm sorry. Forget what happened. That will be best for us.
Me : Do you think that just a sorry will make everything go away?
Her : Well, all I can do is apologise for that night. Just forget what happened.
Me : What about the kiss?
Her : It didn't mean anything.
Me : A Kiss Always Means Something...What did it mean?
Asbah's take on the same and her twist:
The Kiss (Her Side of the story)
Him : I'm sorry. Forget what happened. That will be best for us.
Me : Do you think that just a sorry will make everything go away?
Him : Well, all I can do is apologise for that night. Just forget what happened.
Me : What about the kiss?
Him : It didn't mean anything.
Me : A Kiss Always Means Something...
Him: Sometimes few things have no meanings. Nothing, I'm sorry. I'm not for you, trust me.
Me: Smiles.
Him: thankyou! thankyou for understanding.
Me: Smiles again.
Him: Goodbye!
*a gun shoot, sound of a bullet piercing in the skin, smell of something burning, the red color over the carpet and the floor.*
Me: Smiles. when I kissed you I told you one thing; if I wont be yours sweetheart, remember you wont be anyone else's.
Sandeep's version of the continuation:
Continued from above.........
I dashed out of his house and walked towards my car fuming and cursing myself for trusting a cheat. My tears seemed to have dried up. Probably he was not worthy enough to deserve them. I had no feeling of remorse within. No sooner had i reached my car that i noticed a bouquet of blue roses, which were my favorite, kept atop it. I was clueless about what this meant. With trembling hands i reached out for the letter tucked in between the flowers.
"Love....Happy April fool's day!My dumbhead...how could i ever afford to let you walk away just like that....
You sealed our love with that kiss.
It meant the world to me.
I love you."
I stood there dumbfounded. My throat went dry all of a sudden. My legs seemed to give away. I gathered myself and rushed to his house. He lay there in a pool of blood.
Me: Ohh...What have i done? Ohhh god!!
Him: ..............
Me: Am so sorry dear...am so sorry...Please keep your eyes open...Stay awake...Please..Oh God!
Him: ..............
Me: Here....take this gun and shoot me. I dont deserve to live. Not without you. Please.
Him: ..............
Me: Please say something...Please...I wont be able to forgive myself ever.
Him: ..............
Me: Shoot me....Kill me....Curse me....Please.......Say something....Ohhhh Godddd...
Him: ......A....KKKK.....KKiss.......Always......mmmm.....means sss.......somethinggg..................aaaaahhhhhhhhh........ ........... ...... .... .. . . . . . . . . .
Ste's take on the Kiss:
Continued from above.........
I shrieked and screamed.I called for help,but I could not see anyone in sight.The place was dark.I was scared and afraid.My throat went dry of a sudden and my voice went low. I was scared .
Me:Why did I kiss you dear?
Him: ...........
Me:Am so sorry dear...am so sorry....Please keep your eyes open....Oh god please help me....
Him: ..........
Me: Dear, please say something.
Him:....I....stilllll ....love....you..
Me: Oh god! please save him.
Him:..I .... want to kkk......kiss you.....
Me: oh dear, lets go to the hospital..
Him: I...
Me: yes ...I....
Him: .....I...
Me: yeah go on....
Him:..... I stilllllll .....looo.....love...youuuuu....
Me: dear,lets go to the hospital..
Him: ...I waaannnt ttt tooo live.....wiiith yyou...aaah
Me: Oh God!!.... please help.
Him: kkkk kissss mmmm .....mee...aaaaahhh.
Me:dear....
Him: pppp pleease....aaah.
Me: dear....shoot meee....curse mee......i dont want to live a life without you.All started with that kiss.... Why did I kiss you??
Him:......A....KKKK.....KKiss.......Always......mmmm.....means sss.......somethinggg..................aaaaahhhhhhhhh........ ........... ...... .... .. . . . . . . . . .pleasseee kkk ...kiss ....mmm meee.
Me: * kisses him*
Him: .... aaahhhh.......lllloveeee youuu...aaah....remem..bemmbbr meeee.....
Me: ......
Him:....A....KKKK.....KKiss.......Always......mmmm.....means
sss.......somethinggg..................aaaaahhhhhhhhh........ ........
(And he closes his eyes.)
Me: cries...
##Would love to see more of such chain posts here on WL.
sheer brilliance.. I am amazed at the way this went.. I might come up with something.. :)
ReplyDeletehnnm nicee :)
ReplyDelete*smiles*
ReplyDeletestibu read your part now.. it is marvelous. .. i am praying for an inspiration to take it from here.. :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting write, made my evening refreshing. Flawless continuation from second and third part.. good one ppl :)
ReplyDeleteGood one, and with everyone's perceptions added to it make it even more wonderful! Cheers! :)
ReplyDelete:) brought back old memories...i loved the way you guys took the story forward..really nice. :)
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDeletesomeone at his best !!
yesh yesh...Balan
*thinking*
who will follow up??whoz next..
Very nice one... :)
ReplyDeleten btw I think this is the perfect end... I once read somewhere 'If something appeals to the eye, stop! Don't add anything more... ' This was regarding while drawing or painting... Guess same applies here, but then again, with the kind of brilliance people have, I am still wondering 'who's next'...
ReplyDeletenice interesting versions
ReplyDeletehats off for your creativity
Echoing Adi,
ReplyDeletebrought back memories :)
I actually have been thinking about it two days back, thankyou for posting ste !