February 2, 2009

My Butrfee !


My Butrfee!
I can feel her still,
She, so dead in my hands,
Thought i didn't mean too,
But she was killed by me,
As I took her breath,
Butrfee! I am so sorry,
Holding you in hands,
And feeling you,
Was a dream of mine,
But seeing you dead,
This reality holds my breathe,
Your wings were my inspiration,
Easpecially the design and combination,
They were like you Butrfee!
Beautiful and adorable,
I know its so bad of me,
The apology of mine,
After killing you,
But Butrfee!
PLease Beleive me!
Losing you was even worse for me!
As I still miss you!
Even after so many years!
You inspire me
Oh my butrfee!
I love you!
-Illusion
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Dear readers i dedicate this poem to the butterfly (butrfee) killed by me her feel is still with me..

9 comments:

  1. cuteee and sweet .. it has a tinge of pain in it ..

    but whats with the spellings dearie ??

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  2. Loved the sentiment of the poem and the uniqueness of it all..

    The spellings are kinda killing it! Small silly ones but please correct them!

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  3. sweet.....silly spelling mistakes exist..but this one is so sweet that it overshadows the silly mistakes....u will surely improve on ur spellings in due course...till then dont stop...keep churning out stuff...

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