January 13, 2009

What love meant to me...

Again i got inspired from Pink Orchid's poem to write what love was to me :


Teddies i loved,but
not more than your hug
Music i loved,but
not more than your voice
Choclates i loved,but
not more than your kiss
Movies i loved,but
not more than our life
Friends i loved,but
not more than your love..

Still,doubts you had..
explainations you wanted..
questions you asked..

Harsh words became a norm..
and love gave just tears..
time was ripe to move on..


Teddies i have many,but
miss your caring hugs
Choclates i love still
but miss your stolen kiss
Sad music fills the void
where your voice once ruled
No movies can really show
the pain love left me in
Friends i have many around
but your love is missed always !!

14 comments:

  1. Sigh! Misunderstanding.. And love..Pain all go together..what can I do?

    Love is what gives and love is what takes!

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  2. awweee Prats... sounds like exactly what came to my mind after i read my own poem..
    love brings with it a lot feelings sad,
    but we still love the feeling of love,
    for all the things good and bad.. :)

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  3. Love is what gives and love is what takes!

    perfect said Rashi !!

    sigh !!

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  4. Song by Corrs..Listen to it... Are you guys online?

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  5. hey that was good...I liked espcially the third para...Short and Sweet :)

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  6. Awesome one Prats..!!

    Comparison and reasoning would never make love- love, if I'm ryt?? :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  7. Sensational...!

    what a beautiful poem prats...!
    and i agree with arjun... comparing and reasoning would never make love pure!

    vinay.

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  8. thanks "pink orchid" .. glad that i could match your frequescy :) !!

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  9. @Pretty me: you are a wonderful poet.. keep it up :)

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  10. Thanks for the liking Anurag :) m gald !

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  11. very correct Arjun... thanks for the read :)

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  12. wow..nice, simple and so sweetly presented
    i liked the poem very much

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  13. Thanks Vinay :)

    @Naveen : m glad :)

    Thanks Aparna :)

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