Again i got inspired from Pink Orchid's poem to write what love was to me :
Teddies i loved,but
not more than your hug
Music i loved,but
not more than your voice
Choclates i loved,but
not more than your kiss
Movies i loved,but
not more than our life
Friends i loved,but
not more than your love..
Still,doubts you had..
explainations you wanted..
questions you asked..
Harsh words became a norm..
and love gave just tears..
time was ripe to move on..
Teddies i have many,but
miss your caring hugs
Choclates i love still
but miss your stolen kiss
Sad music fills the void
where your voice once ruled
No movies can really show
the pain love left me in
Friends i have many around
but your love is missed always !!
Sigh! Misunderstanding.. And love..Pain all go together..what can I do?
ReplyDeleteLove is what gives and love is what takes!
awweee Prats... sounds like exactly what came to my mind after i read my own poem..
ReplyDeletelove brings with it a lot feelings sad,
but we still love the feeling of love,
for all the things good and bad.. :)
Love is what gives and love is what takes!
ReplyDeleteperfect said Rashi !!
sigh !!
Song by Corrs..Listen to it... Are you guys online?
ReplyDeletehey that was good...I liked espcially the third para...Short and Sweet :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome one Prats..!!
ReplyDeleteComparison and reasoning would never make love- love, if I'm ryt?? :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Sensational...!
ReplyDeletewhat a beautiful poem prats...!
and i agree with arjun... comparing and reasoning would never make love pure!
vinay.
thanks "pink orchid" .. glad that i could match your frequescy :) !!
ReplyDelete@Pretty me: you are a wonderful poet.. keep it up :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the liking Anurag :) m gald !
ReplyDeletevery correct Arjun... thanks for the read :)
ReplyDeletewow..nice, simple and so sweetly presented
ReplyDeletei liked the poem very much
just one word.....beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinay :)
ReplyDelete@Naveen : m glad :)
Thanks Aparna :)