Each time i meet you,
you wear a different robe,
with all your dazzling ways,
and put on a brand new show.
Each show
so much real
and elaborate!!
You never tire out yourself
to make me search new words,
that will justify the treasure
that you unravel in this world.
Even words fail,
to parallel your
winning trails...
A toothless child you mazed me,
and tired me when a toddler,
growing up with you was irrate
but you amused me most as a lover.
And i await
all the surprises
you have in my fate..
When heart breaks and betrayal pained,
you sent friends to cheer my spirits
and then you plant ideas in my brain
impregnating my paper with lines so vivid!
you are LIFE!!
my inspiration,
my pot of smiles..
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nice one yaar
ReplyDeletebahut badhia
woww prats....i loved it so much..
ReplyDeletevery truly said n so beautifully put...u got d rite inspiration!
amazing poem :)
thanks chirag... i myself dnt know how i wrote this...
ReplyDeleteyou are my LIFE!!
ReplyDeletemy inspiration,
my pot of smiles.
beautiful lines prats!
my pot of smiles ....that's a first :)
ReplyDelete4 lines and then 3 simultaneously ...guess that's a first also for me ....
Really nice prats :)
Loved this one
ReplyDelete:P
m glad i got it correct Priyanka!!
ReplyDeletewhat could be a better inspiration than life itself..
ReplyDeletethose are even my favorite lines Aparna !!
ReplyDeletethankuu thankuu Anurag :D !!!
ReplyDeleteWorth read...
ReplyDeletemy pick from this poem:
ReplyDeleteYou never tire out yourself
to make me search new words
Even words fail,
to parallel your
winning trails...
and ofcourse:
you are LIFE!!
my inspiration,
my pot of smiles..
*pats prats* cant wait for the show to unravel further mysterious.
Maverick, Ste, Rash, Lover, Mona... wake up :)
wow... no more... wow! just takes me to a loss of words!
ReplyDeleteI second kajal....
ReplyDeleteWat else other than LIFE can be an inspiration...!!
Great work as usual Prats.. :) :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
thanks riversoul ..
ReplyDeletetrue said Pink !!
ReplyDeleteM glad Macrocosm :) thx
ReplyDeletethanksie Asbah !! even m waiting for all rest poems :)
ReplyDeleteu humble me Leo with your words !!
ReplyDeletethanks for the read Arjun !!
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