You made me realise,,
those countless emotions cradled in the realms of my heart,
You made me realise,,
my true worth in the undisputed depths of my heart,
You made me look up at this world with an invincible spirit,
helped me peep into those deep dungeons ,that lie hibernating beneath the crust of my heart,
You gave me an entirely new World to live in,,
fraught with aspiring fantacies n' cherishing dreams,
fraught with countless moments of girlish joys...
n' helped me construct a realm endowed with my imaginary castlesand unfulfilled fantacies,,
You made me understand the true meaning of life.
Your presence transported me to a world of Utopia,
brimming over with friendship, care, warmth n' love,
You made me realise,,
the true persona of my inner self,
You made me become...
the one,i am today...!!
Dated Dec'07
This one is dedicated to my friend, philosopher and mentor..!!
Thanks a lot for being with me through thick and thin...
and inspiring me to embrace life with an invincible spirit!!
those countless emotions cradled in the realms of my heart,
You made me realise,,
my true worth in the undisputed depths of my heart,
You made me look up at this world with an invincible spirit,
helped me peep into those deep dungeons ,that lie hibernating beneath the crust of my heart,
You gave me an entirely new World to live in,,
fraught with aspiring fantacies n' cherishing dreams,
fraught with countless moments of girlish joys...
n' helped me construct a realm endowed with my imaginary castlesand unfulfilled fantacies,,
You made me understand the true meaning of life.
Your presence transported me to a world of Utopia,
brimming over with friendship, care, warmth n' love,
You made me realise,,
the true persona of my inner self,
You made me become...
the one,i am today...!!
Dated Dec'07
This one is dedicated to my friend, philosopher and mentor..!!
Thanks a lot for being with me through thick and thin...
and inspiring me to embrace life with an invincible spirit!!
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Beautiful
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Loved it
:)
This can impress and please any heart !! wish my inspiration loved dedication,i would have sent this poem to him rt away ;) !
ReplyDeleteagree wid prats :)
ReplyDeletelovely poem yaar, yes..some special ppl do touch our lives in such a way dat it changes forever...changing us...making us wht we are....
beautifully put :)
@ Riversoul,Pretty me!!, Priyanka
ReplyDeleteThanku so much foe the appreciation.!!
Comments and criticism welcomed.!!
This was my first go at the Writer's Lounge.
wonderful poem mohita
ReplyDeletebeautiful lines!!
Waoh really nice ....
ReplyDeleteShow it to your friend i.e mentor and make him completely realise :P
And a nice pic to boot too :)
beautiful lines....had a good time reading it
ReplyDeleteamazing lines... friends could sometimes be the magic that define our lives..
ReplyDeletewow! we're amazing people :D
ReplyDeleteinspiring others and writing odes to people who've inspired us! incredi!
@ Aparna, Anurag, The solitary writer, The pink orchid
ReplyDeleteThanku so much..!!